General Fiction Discussion

Then sum it up in three sentences while you read about Mors!

Okay, I'll do that right here, actually 😛

My friends and I were going to go to Wisconsin to visit a friend Friday night (we live near Chicago, so it was only about two hours away) but my mom said that I couldn't go with. I bitched and complained until I had her convinced we were doing otherwise and was told I could go out but had to be home by 1 am. We went to Milwaukee, lost track of time, and I wasn't home until nearly 4 am.

*goes off to read some more of Mors's story*

Heh, I was working on San's story earlier...and she has a tendency to throw stuff at people when she's pissed off and not in the Matrix 😄

FUN! I'll keep that in mind for out of the Matrix sequences. So far, Mors has not seen San outside due to the her lack of existense before Codecracker.

Heh, yeah...due the fact that I joined here a whole week before Codecracker started...

Yeah, in the story at one point someone makes the mistake of not knocking before entering San's room and she responds by throwing a shoe...which oddly enough, is what I tend to do when people don't knock on my door...😄

I'm trying to work around a little mistake I did. I had the Percy on the way back to Zion to the briefing, then I read that the Percy was already in the matrix. I've got an idea of how to sort it though.

For Codecracker?

I assumed that it had come back briefly then gone out ahead of the Shez.

For Ghost Hunt?

Yeah, they were already in the Matrix, though I'm sure you could do a "From Cloud's Point of View" going into the Matrix just for the hell of it.

Found a fluke in my Chapter numbering. It is now 18 chapters.

I think the Percy was already in the Matrix...I don't remember, though, that was what, back in November? My memory's not that good...

Yeah, it was about a year ago, I think...

It was right when I joined, so it was the middle to the end of November.

Chapter 7 is up!

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Crew from the Percy- Celsius, Cloud, Virus, and any latecomers

Yours is the surveillance operation that has made this mission possible. You have twice as much to lose if it balls up- not only will you have failed to get the Code, but the Machines will realise you have worked out their schedule and change that, making all your surveillance work useless.

Hence your Captain- with a currently inadequate crew- asked for back-up, and the Shez is responding.

You are actually already inside the Matrix- welcome in! For convenience I shall work out what you are carrying when the others do, though.

You are continuing to observe the airport and will join up with the contingent frim the Shez when they arrive- the rest of the crew of the Percy is on other duties. The flight is due soon- and rather a lot of security people are turning up!

I've also got to find a way to get rid of the Virus and Celsius characters when they left the game. If they left before mission 2 then it's easy, just say they stayed in Zion

Just have them get stuck on surveillance duty or something...that's prolly what I'm going to do when I get to that point.

Okay, the first parts of San's story is almost ready to be posted...but I need a name for it!!!

Does San mean anything, or is it just a name?

It means something, but the meaning of it is really kinda irrevelant...San is the Japanese word for the number three 😄

Well, for the time being it'll be untitled...but the first two parts (the prologue and chapter 1) of San's story are up! 😄

Virus I never even mentioned in the story, if you haven't noticed. Celsius went with Fire and crew to Melitus when they were captured, so I will say he gets killed by the Xiao Emo when Heph fought him...

Virus was supposed to be in Codecracker (she was originally the driver for the Percy)...but she disappeared...