General Fiction Discussion

Yup, and I made you the driver for the Percy.

I noticed 😛

Good!

Just like your writing!

Thanks!!! 😄

(I still think you write better than I do, though...)

I haven't had a chance to check when Virus left, if it's before codecracker i'll just have her not ready for the mission and going back to Zion afgter it. I'll post the first part when I get back from work later.

We've almost got enough Matrix stories here to have a sub-forum 😛

😂 Very true...

And all three of ours, TM, you, and I, have different variations...

I'll be sure to send you 'The Death of Celsius' when you get to payback, just so you can include it.

Thanks. I think the hardest part even though we're all using the same template is going to be that they all match up.

First part of codecracker's up.

Coolio. My entire Codecracker is up, so you can read that too. From a different perspective. 😉

Hey, I forgot all about the Cloud's door thing. Damned door 😒 But I think it's better where it is in yours, before the training mission.

There, I've finnished Codecracker. I also nboticed I didn't really do a whole lot in that mission

well not Us in the lobby,
But those getting chased in the Jeeps, thats another story.

😂 yeah...but how about Fire and Ares trying to drive through the fence? I remember cracking up over that one 😉

It should be interesting, just to see if we can all get our stories to line up somehow...and just to see how it happened through the eyes of the different characters.

That worked well......
untill they hit the barbed wire at the top!

pop! went their tires!

Since Coeus left early on, I had Mors and Cloud duke it out in the training mission.

Yes, that be interesting, Alana.

Glad you liked the door bit, Cloud!

I'm quite pleased with the work, little brother. 😛

Hunting down the old threads now...though due to the fact that my computer STILL isn't networked to the main one and I'm working on San's story on that one...the next chapter, which will be Codecracker probably won't be up for a while. But I'll try my best to get it done (or at least a good dent in it) before the 20th, when I start school...

...wow. It took us nearly 4 months to get through Heist 😖

Remember the Mors' bit! I'd give San more than 2 days to adjust...

That's just from leaving Zion, there'll be a bit more time between leaving Zion and actually getting into the Matrix and the start of Codecracker. I'll work it in there somewhere 😛

When they're all done someone could try and do a timeline sort of thing