The very bitter poem thread.

Started by silver_tears4 pages

so sad 🙁

want more poens

yeah

Walls
by Nikkie

No space around me
Stifling walls
Closing off my view
Numbing thoughts
Aching soul
Suffocating dreams

Memory stirs
Pain wells up
Trapping me again
Nowhere to go
But inside myself
Devoid of any aim

Too scared to move
Barriers raised
Hearts freedom restrained
Tentative
Withdrawing hand
Fear of hurt again

Thick breath and clouds
Within my head
Oppressive atmosphere
Numbing thoughts
Aching soul
Suffocating dream

oh man thats sad 🙁 but very nice 👆

i like writing poems on here it makes me feel better because your all so nice and never call me weird or retarded

why would we 🤨 they are very good ✅

well everyone on my old forum did they called me bad names and it hurt so i just left that place

well welcome to KMC 😄

i already feel welcomed

good 😄 Im going to bed but good luck with your poems 😄

thanks

🙂 dont listen to narrow minded poeple nikkie.....do what lets u be urself....ur poems are brilliant!

umm thanks

das ok

Prayer For The Living
by Kevin Rose

Why does the thought of death
The feeling of ending this life
The torture, the pain, the hurt
The discomfort I cause,
Why does it feel so right?

But the thought of the pain
The mechanics, the method
The hows and wherefores..
Why is that so beyond me,
my abilities, My confidence?

I know I would be better dead
All I care for is others
All I do is hurt others
All I want to do is leave others
To their lives away from me

Is my inability from caring?
Knowing the final act of hurt
The final ability to screw others
To give those who truly care
A pain even I haven't done before?

But they would recover
And they could see it was done
Maybe not consciously, but truly
For the best for them
And therefore the best for me.

Is it fear that stops me?
The inability to take the pain
I couldn't inflict on myself
The woman I am,
The quitter, never finishing the Job

So I carry on to conceal the feelings
Trying to do all I can for all
And still I hurt and give pain
Cause confusion wherever I go
That is why I pray to die.

🙂 that ones really good...its like what everyone feels inside but is too afraid to admit

yea

i have more but i want to know if you guys wanna see them

i would like to 😄