The very bitter poem thread.

Darkness
by Nikkie

I'm swimming all alone in a pool of darkness
and I feel like darkness is slowly pulling me under
I yell for help but no one is there to hear it
I begin to see the water at eye level
and I kick and flail
fighting to stay above the darkness
But the darkness won't let go of its hold on me
and I slowly begin to give in
to the feeling that lies below the water line
the waters starts to fill my lungs
the lungs that once held so much life
yet now they allow the murky water to replace that
I know that this path doesn't lead to happiness
But why doesn't someone grab my hand
pull me from darkness's grasp?
because no one knows I stand at the boundary
the boundary between light and dark
so I give in to the thing that holds me
All of the strength and all of the courage
that I once held in my heart
can't save me from the water
So I slowly slip below the world of conscientiousness
undetected by the occupants of that world
I don't want to fight anymore
I've given into darkness

FrEaK.COM, are you in a cult or somethin'? LOL!

is that suppose to be funny

Those are all good, but do you write about anything more than loneliness, death, knives and suicide? You are a good writer, we just don't want you to hurt yourself 😄

(is that suppose to be funny)

I don't know - you tell me.

yes it is and dont worry i wont hurt my self i hope

-er- Freakie, I was just saying that because of something you told me on a pm... When I told you my age, you asked if I was in a cult... I just found it funny...
I would never want you to be hurt.

oh yea i remember sorry having a bad day that day didn't meen to offend you

Not offended. I promise you. You ok?

no alittle up set today

You can always pm me if you need to talk and if you don't pm me it's ok too. Just make sure you get help if you do need it.

pm you

heres one i wrote a few days ago... i was kinda pissed off wif sumone...sorry bout the lingo... wut can i say?? i was pissed...

A poem (30 march 2004)
youre fu**ed in the head!
thats all i'll say
How can u be so good
to actually f*** my day??
you talked about betrayal
when i was f***in around
i was gonna say sorry
til sumfin i found
you said you aint talkin to my sis
but you dint stick to your promise
now who betrayed who??
well, i guess it was you!
you talk about shits in the poem that you sent
you cant rhyme and spell for shit cuza yer fuken accent!
you wanna see a real poem?
thats why i wrote you one
to tell you to forget me, f*** THIS! we're done!
thank you tho for inspiring me
cuz i was a mhime
now im in the fuken mood
to bloody write and rhyme!
meeting you was a fuken big mistake
talkin to you was a wrong thing that i did fuken make!
im gonna fuken delete msn
and never use the fuken net again
id also delete your numba
and forget you mutha f***a!
now am i hittin below the belt???
f*** this, i think this is how it should be dealt!
i know its insulting and its not fair
but guess wut??!!!! i dont really care!!!
i can be a good friend if i fuken want
but dun f*** wif me cuz i can be a bloody grunt!
you actually said u see me as yer brother
well to me it doesnt really matter!
you actually fuken pissed me off so bad
that ill tell you, i dint care when u were depressed and sad!
remember the thing that i once said????
well im stickin to it, i wont talk to you! you should consider me dead!!!
try to remember this, B**CH!
noone f***s wif me and my sis!
cuz ill knock yer head off
you fuken little leech!
now i realize that you cant be trusted
youre not a good lier
cuz youre fuken busted!!
i dun care if i dun get to talk to you too
i got heapsa friends, so dun even think that i need you!!

😕 Am I missing the point of the General Fiction Area?

uh... i dun fink so..... its the bitter poem thread.. aint it? hehehe

This thread werkx very well hovering above my poem... 🙄

a network of screen nerds, sit on a chair. fart a silent fart when you type. no one will hear it. gittin' mean, rabies, a dog with a foamed upper lip. don't bite. buy me a cup of pee, and i'll send you a burrito filled with?????????????????

Err......

*is a little worried by, but very impressed with, Freak.Com*

Freak.com is banned permenantly

mary higgins went to john friggins house
a mile apart with the local bar in the middle
my lip is thursty, wet my dry perched lips,
stop the sun from bakin' them
order a tall glass of jim beam
flip the bottom to the sky, open up, down the gullet
drunk as hell a minute later
stagger the walk, walk the rest. there he is
"heey. baay-bee, whut chhaa doin'"