Sodapop Allerdyce's Poem(s)

Started by BOPRecruit 1627 pages

Originally posted by Red X
Wait.. Another idea... In my head... Yes... I can feel it...

My A$$!!
My Poppa!
Is so big!
Oh ya
Oh No
Oh Ya
Oh NO
Your Poppa!!!

My pappa!
Your Mamma
and your
Pappa!!
Pappa!
Paapp!!
Mamma!!
Mamma!
Its your
Its your
Mamma!
And
Pappa!

let's hope that's ALL that you got in your head...👿 😛 😆

ooh, don't cross me, man! 😠 😛 😆

😛
I gotta' go to bed.
Güte Nacht.

later john! 😮‍💨 come back soon, yah hear? 😄

Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
sorry that i forgot that i had asked that before, long time ago... 😮 😆 i'm kind of surprised that even people in other countries such as australia learn about america...sort of. though understandable that you do learn.

lol...thas ok...

I'm just as surprised as you😑....heh....really..
it was either american history, or asian history...
although both subjects aren't relevant to us, it's still interesting to learn about other countries🙂

Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
you didn't quite make it to sherlock and i didn't want to be too mean, so i knocked you down to watson. 😄 😛 😆

watson is just as mean, 🙁...

Bop, you should get his mved to the Poetry and Prose forum 😉

Originally posted by RagingSilent
lol...thas ok...

I'm just as surprised as you😑....heh....really..
it was either american history, or asian history...
although both subjects aren't relevant to us, it's still interesting to learn about other countries🙂

i would love to learn more about france and england. i find those places fascinating and also note things for my fics. 😄

Originally posted by RagingSilent
watson is just as mean, 🙁...

dude, you just don't live to burn, man! 😛 😄 it's in my nature! 😮‍💨 😆

Originally posted by Trickster
Bop, you should get his mved to the Poetry and Prose forum 😉

is that a part of kmc? if so, when did we get that? 😑

Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
i would love to learn more about france and england. i find those places fascinating and also note things for my fics. 😄

✅..

👆 thas a bonus😄...

Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
dude, you just don't live to burn, man! 😛 😄 it's in my nature! 😮‍💨 😆

😂...you used 'dude' and 'man' in the same sentence....it's american surfer meets hippie....😄...👆...classic.....

yes...your evil nature🙁...

Originally posted by RagingSilent
✅..

👆 thas a bonus😄...

right now, i'm trying to learn more about those countries and the language some for my first original story that i'm trying to get started this year. so yeah, that's great. *shrugs*

Originally posted by RagingSilent
😂...you used 'dude' and 'man' in the same sentence....it's american surfer meets hippie....😄...👆...classic.....

yes...your evil nature🙁...

tolerate it or die! 😛 😆

Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
right now, i'm trying to learn more about those countries and the language some for my first original story that i'm trying to get started this year. so yeah, that's great. *shrugs*

🙂.....tiz good👆......background info. always helps in stories....

Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
tolerate it or die! 😛 😆

*backs away slowly*.....alright, alright.....🥷

Originally posted by RagingSilent
🙂.....tiz good👆......background info. always helps in stories....

i'm having a ball inventing/developing this character that i can imagine looking like/being played by scott weiland of velvet revolver/stone temple pilots! 😱 🐰 i won't say who the character is exactly...but he's going to be such a kick arse villian! that's all i'll say for now! 😱 😄 😆

Originally posted by RagingSilent
*backs away slowly*.....alright, alright.....🥷

thank you. *bows* 😄 😛 😆

man, am i haveing writer's block in the poem/song department or what? haven't done anything since december or november....i think. no need to assure me and make me feel better. just saying and filling you in there.

Re: New Song: Wasted Upon A Fool - Now Available!

Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
[B]FictionPress Update - My New Song
Author's Commentary/Summary: This song is loosely based upon Kelly Clarkson's new single, "Since U Been Gone," from her Breakaway album. As you read the lyrics that I had hand written on Tuesday, keep the song in mind and read the lyrics as though it were sung just like "Since U Been Gone." As for my original effort here, it's another piece about this jerk at school. Amazingly enough, he's been quite the inspiration for my poems and songs lately. It sures to feel good to vent out my anger in the form of a poem or song other than just complaining about him to my friends. Up to date, "Wasted Upon A Fool" is the longest song that I had ever written. Keyword being: ever. Also, I would like to note that I started writing the first two verses during a long block period of Lit. and that jerk happened to sit not far from me. I got bored and since inspiration sprung from having that jerk right there, I got started on this song and then worked on this all of my learning skills clas to finish it when I should have been doing my homework. But, I'm really glad I got this out when I did. If I waited until hours or days later to write this, it wouldn't come out the same. I always have got to try and write these sort of things in the moment. Now, enjoy my new and longest song ever! 'Nuff said.
Please go here to read and submit a review: Wasted Upon A Fool (by Sodapop Allerdyce at FictionPress.Com) [/B]

Since I haven't posted any new material since page 16 of this thread, I thought it would be nice to remind and/or show you guys what my recent piece was and in hopes to get more reviews for the song above and for my other pieces at FictionPress.Com.

Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
thank you. *bows* 😄 😛 😆

man, am i haveing writer's block in the poem/song department or what? haven't done anything since december or november....i think. no need to assure me and make me feel better. just saying and filling you in there.

😱...

thas ok tho🙂...
lol.....ok......*sits quietly in corner*

Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
i'm having a ball inventing/developing this character that i can imagine looking like/being played by scott weiland of velvet revolver/stone temple pilots! 😱 🐰 i won't say who the character is exactly...but he's going to be such a kick arse villian! that's all i'll say for now! 😱 😄 😆

😄cool, cool....👆.....

hehe....i am thinking....maybe...Alucard style?....dunno where that came from😕......but i like Alucard🙂