I know this is not from a movie but i would appreciate feedback on my first attempt at poetry if that's OK..... Cheers
The Truth?
I now know there is no heavenly place
No where to really rest my weary face
So why do I continue to live in this life
I know all it has to offer is toil and strife
When you're young you dream of love
But really there in no such thing offered from above
People believe in a god that doesn't exist
A god that if really there would resist
Persist to resist all the shit that's on this earth
Like when a baby is retarded at birth
What god would really send all that pain?
What would a god have to gain?
You look up for help from above
Look deep down there is no love
God was created in minds that have since past
How long can this fairytale last?
Your pathetic life will not get better if you die!
God will not intercept your soul as it begins to fly!
For there is no higher being placed up there
No body here who could really care
If there was a god why would he want to save you?
You are as insignificant as a shoe
I know these views are quite harsh and quite blue
But look around and think………………………….
ARE THEY TRUE???