short poems.....

Originally posted by RagingSilent
yes, it tiz easier to write poems🙂....I've tried to write songs before, eheh...didnt go too well....
you should work on em👆......would be glad to see em...

don't worry, i'll continue to write songs when i can. not always easy to get started.

Originally posted by FoamyFan
ok here is one i wrote

Listen
_____________________________________
Listen to me
Hear my plee
Under the water
Hear me breathe
Screaming for safety
Don't you hear
The plee for life
For all of these years

very good...I liked it👆

Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
don't worry, i'll continue to write songs when i can. not always easy to get started.

ok👆

tiz understood🙂

did i make it sound like i was giving up songwriting? 😑

no....not at all

alright. good. 👆 btw, how did your exams go?

👆

um....let's see.....art.went pretty damn good.....personal financial management.not so good....and recreational pursuits and actitvities....pretty good...

what were these exams for, college?

no, just basic year 10.....so, altogether, we have 14 exams in a year....such bullsh!t..guess i can't change it though....

huge tough exams? sorry, i forgot you were a sophomore. it was lava that and anoushka that are seniors and are soon off to college. i'm bad at ages and stuff. sorry about that.

no, not so tough....some were a lil hard on the brain...but i got through em ok🙂....lol....you don't have to be sorry..it's just strange that i found out that my friend who goes to another school, only gets 3 exams, while we get 7😖 same yr level too...thas just crap....both public schools too

are the exams just random or are they the same thing as finals in america? 😑

ahhh lol....no, not random...

we have 7 after one semester, then another 7 after the second semester...

finally, a new poem...lol....it's about vampires🙂

The dying words of a child,
The taste of blood on the demons’ tongue.
Lust through the heart,
Sorrow hurts the mind,
Crave the night,
To drink their wine.
Velvet silence devours the tears,
Another soul steals time.
Miserable solitude,
The grace of burning desire.
Hate for those with hearts of purity,
Peace for their fear,
Poison for their memories.
Eyes to burn,
Eyes to glitter,
Eyes to see a different day.
Shadows are calling,
Listen to the aching world.
Freedom lies in the cinders of broken hope,
Wake to your nightmare to live their dream.

-Darkness kills the sound.

Originally posted by RagingSilent
ahhh lol....no, not random...

we have 7 after one semester, then another 7 after the second semester...

i guess your school system in down under is really different from here in america, 'cause i don't think we take THAT many exams... we just have two finals all year, the star testing *evil*, and a exit/entrance exam. but that last one you only have to take once and as a sophomore or junior...

Originally posted by RagingSilent
finally, a new poem...lol....it's about vampires🙂

The dying words of a child,
The taste of blood on the demons’ tongue.
Lust through the heart,
Sorrow hurts the mind,
Crave the night,
To drink their wine.
Velvet silence devours the tears,
Another soul steals time.
Miserable solitude,
The grace of burning desire.
Hate for those with hearts of purity,
Peace for their fear,
Poison for their memories.
Eyes to burn,
Eyes to glitter,
Eyes to see a different day.
Shadows are calling,
Listen to the aching world.
Freedom lies in the cinders of broken hope,
Wake to your nightmare to live their dream.

-Darkness kills the sound.

that was ever so lovely, jen. made me think of louis and all. very vivid, as always 👆

Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
i guess your school system in down under is really different from here in america, 'cause i don't think we take THAT many exams... we just have two finals all year, the star testing *evil*, and a exit/entrance exam. but that last one you only have to take once and as a sophomore or junior...

🙁.....*swears and kicks desk*.....that is bullsh!t...lol😄

I just wish it were easier over here🙁

i mean, im in yr 10 for christs sake.....and i have 14 exams in a year...BOO...lol.....i do not approve😱

Originally posted by BOPRecruit 16
that was ever so lovely, jen. made me think of louis and all. very vivid, as always 👆

✅ some of it was about him....about how his vampire self hurts him so.....

remorseful, merciful death. nice way to put it, about louis that is. btw, i'm having someone make me a louis theme for my xanga. so far, kristin has made me the icon. she's going to work on the banner over this weekend and soon my wallpaper. 😱 this is going quickly and i'll have it sooner than i would have expected from most people who make this stuff for people! 😱 🤘

cool cool👆🙂
eheh..💃 then 👆 for u....lol...