Ancient Egypt: On the Nile

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Rameses went to bed...

sorry i've not been here i was aawy on a trip to alberta...Azura walked in silence to her chamber to sleep.

Primly Yuma fanned the great pahroah checking the sun's position every three seconds. The pahroah looked at her and she fanned harder. The monk's Rahs Temple will be very mad she is late. "Yuma, stop staring at the sun and fan your great pahroah," barked the pahroah. Yuma sweated and started to puff as she became tired from this stupid task.

"Sorry my lord," Yuma said as she flapped the fan faster. The sun burned on her face and left red marks all over her as the pharoah sat under his feathers kind of umbrella.

"It isn't good enough Yuma. Go back to the temple!" hissed the pharoah angrily as he pushed her away. The priestess fell on her face and volted from his site hurrying away. Tears washed over her face as a beautiful golden dome loomed in front of her.

You're ruled by a different pharoah?

I was going to say the same thing... Xeous' character is the pharoah, and we're all in the same place, so he's your king...

Azura walked quietly into her father's chamber and saw him laying down. She knelt down at his side and waited for a response.

*Woops I meant the pharoah's royal advisor please ignore what I wrote. It is the royal advisor.*

"Why are you late Yuma?" asked the monk of the Rahs Temple roughly. His hands were on his hips and he had a huge scowl on his face. Yuma looked at him with careful brown eyes and primly brushed off her dusty white robe.
"I was fanning the pahroah's royal advisor. It was an order. I'm very sorry." said Yuma as she knelt touching her head to the floor.
"Yuma, to be a good priestess you must do your duties even odd ones. Now go put incense on Rah's tomb for the ceremony tonight." the monk said bowing his head.
"Yes my lord." Yuma whispered as she ran from his sight grabbing the incense along the way.

Rameses woke the next morning, feeling odd somehow.. He went outside and did his usual routine, but he just felt... Odd...

After Yuma finished her duties she hurried to her bed in the temple. She slept until the sun shined through. Hurriedly she got up and ran out to market. Yuma went to buy new incense and supplies for the temple.
Purchasing all Yuma hurried and tripped over a rock spillling all of her stuff. A tan man walked up to her started picking it up and walking alongside her.

Rameses decided to go for a ride across the dunes. He slipped a bit in Ahmose's mouth and hopped on him with no saddle. They walked for a few minutes to get warmed up, then Rameses nudged his horse into a flat-out gallop.

After Yuma put the groceries away she saw a boy on a horse racing about. She sighed and hesitantly took her white horse racing after them. Yuma liked to beat people at horse racing. Quickly she caught up huffing and zooming past him smiling.

(((Um, okay I'm lost could sum1 fill me in)))

Rameses gave his horse a good jab in the side. Ahmose took off even faster than he had been going before, if it was possible, and was neck-and-neck with Yuma. Neither horse showed signs of slowing, and they were already a good distance away from town, so Rameses held up his hand as a gesture to slow down. He slowly brought his horse down to a walk.

((not much has happened only stuff on this page is new))

(Where's zafira now. still at her house)

((yeah I guess))

Zafira walked freely among the shepherd houses. She was looking for rameses. She hoped he was alright. She hadn't seen him in a while.(i hope)

Rameses turned his horse around and took off at an easy canter back home.

When he got there, he noticed Zafira walking around nearby. He tied Ahmose up next to a trough of water and went over to Zafira.

Zafira smiled as Rameses approached her. "Hi, what's going on?" she asked noticing the horse was more thirsty than it should be if it had been resting.

"Not much... What happened last night after I left, by the way?"

"HARDER! FASTER! I need more of a challenge...I thought you were the best swordsman our army had?"

The other burly man replied, "Sire, I am the best we have...You're just...better."

In walked the Royal Advisor.

"Is there anything you need, pharoah?"

"Yes...Actually there is. Call a town meeting, anyone who wishes should attend. I want the people's perspective about what we should do about these parties attacking our convoys to the north. Make the meeting for later tonight."

"Consider it done, sir."