Ravenclaw Common Room!!

Well i guess tracey has it all done now. We just need it to be edited. But from what Angelsflame says i bet its gonna be a great story 😄 . I just hope its good enough for our judges 😬 im sure it will tho 🙂

So........um..........Im for not use rigth now......................just have to wait until August 10.........................so😮
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good luck for the Ravenclaw common room!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I'm at the climax of the story I guess you could say. I've got everyone included, even you Orlando. The 8 paragraph limit is hard to abide by. I did cut A LOT! But I'm going to have to do some more editing. My interent keeps going in and out, so hopefully I'll be able to send it to everyone by tomorrow...

Alrigth.............thats awesome!!! 🐰

On page 46 there is a roster of the Ravenclaws. I forgot to add Perfectly Not to the story...someone see if you can fit that in somewhere. Also, some people that posted that I saw that were not on the roster:

Shaber
Maikanyandowen
Scar
Rebel Pheonix
Hobbit Dude
<Tidus>

If any of them are in Ravenclaw, please also find places for them. I've e-mailed the story to Orlando's Angel, Auror Chk, Angelsflame265, Exabyte, Elondra, and Pheonix Wing

Just finished reading the story Tracy. I think it was excellent 😄 Either then it being longer then the limit required, im sure our editing team will be careful cutting what needs to be cut. But in my opinion I dont think id cut anything 😉 Brilliant Story!!!

Thanks Auror Chk. I'm a little afraid about the funny factor. I tried a little at the end, and also in the middle w/ the DADA teacher, but I don't know if that's enough....Also, I was reading the story and I have no idea what can be cut. The flow of the story gets majorly screwed up w/o some of the parts that aren't quite as important to the plot. Editing team, add those people from my previous post as students Angel finds at the Hospital Wing...
Shaber= Shaber McIntire
Maikanyandowen= Maikany Andowen
Scar=Stevo Scar
Rebel Pheonix= Rebel Pheonix
Hobbit Dude= Harley Hobbit
<Tidus&gt= Tidus Tiggle

Very nice tracy 🙂🙂🙂

Hey Ravenclaws, what's up? Has everyone had a chance to read the story? So far I've only heard praise, does anyone want to change anything? We still have a couple days. Who enters the story for judging? And where is it entered? Who's judging? I hope we win!!!!! I think our story is the best, although my opinion may be just A LITTLE BIT biased....

lol we just need somebody to check it for grammer,spelling and stuff, because i think you asked for that earlier

hey tracy i didnt recieve the story in my email could you pm me the story or you angelsflame, cos im checkin my mail and didnt recieve anything

Ok Orlando, I PMed it to you in 7 parts....

Thanks Orlando for the suggestion...I want to change the trolls to Manticores!!! Here's the description...

Manticore
The Manticore´s homelands are Greece and the Persian Gulf. It has got the head of a man, the body of a lion (with lion´s teeth) and the tail of a scorpion. The Manticore is very intelligent and is / was one of the rare creatures who are able to talk to humans. But humans should be very careful when meeting a Manticore, because although they seem to be very friendly they can attack suddenly.

Orlando, can you forward the revisions to Angelsflame265 and Auror Chk?

glad i can help!!!!!!!!!!

and............shure am on it.............

all ready............its so awesome the story!!!

hi guys im back... so i see we got our story now... thats good! Cheers to all, i resurected again. lol!

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“the strong shall live and the weak shall die”

lol welcome back phoenix!

and tracy i love the revisions

YAY!!! Who is editing? Who turns the story in? Who is judging? It's due tomorrow right?