Ravenclaw Common Room!!

psych, I was looking at July's calander...

Well i'm really crappy at grammer and spelling so I would be no help in the editing

neither I
can't do it...........sorry

I think the spelling is okay, I wrote it in Word. Same for grammar. I'm leaving tomorrow morning and won't have internet for 10 days, so someone turn in the story, ok. WE'RE GONNA WIN!!!!

*white flag*

Don't worry Tracy our story is also kindda long, but Slytherin said only 8 paragraphs, but no one mentioned how many lines, sentences can be fit in 8 paragraphs🙂. Lets do it the Slytherin's way.
Congrat with the story, I have no dought about its quality. Looking forward for the 10th to read it.

If you can condense it a little, go ahead, but don't worry about it. Makes sure you get he point across. But no novels.

I'm sure yours isn't that long, but I don't want people worrying about the length. We need to focus on the actually story and that's it's good.

SCORE!!!! Ravenclaws, I don't think anything should be cut...

samec ✅

Nop, its perfect!!!
so hu is goin to entered the story if Tracy isnt goin to come that day......

Well I think its usually the Prefects Elondra or Exa that enter the Tasks but if they arent available it will have to be Angelsflame. 🙂

So taking the advice from Uni 😄 we should just split the story into 8 paragraphs. Because like Uni said they never said anything about how many sentences and lines are suppose to fit into a paragraph. So lets do it the Slytherin Way 😉 *punches the air* YEA!! 😂

sigh... all you guys are really busy, im really left out of the conversation. i guess im not needed now so ill just take a nap. *gets a chair and goes to a corner and takes a snooze 😐 😖leep:

****RaVeNcLaW GhOsT****

“the strong shall live and the weak shall die”

Originally posted by angelsflame265
samec ✅

@Angel : what does samec stand for ?

oops lol take out the c

Sorry, i have been gone a while...what was the contest??? and can someone PM me the story?? I wants to read it ✅

Are you asking to be elevated?

elevated? what?

so.............your goin to enter the story to the Tasks Angelsflame?

so has the story been cut into its paragraphs???

"lets win this this time Ravenclaws😄"

@Phoenix Wing...dont be like that 🙂 I havent done anything with the story just read it, but Im helping just by trying to say things to keep our spirits up 😄

*puts her arm over PW's shoulder* cmon 😂

once everybody gives me an ok

Only 4 Ravenclaws have the story, rigth..........and still dont understand all about the 8 paragraphs because the story have 7 parts, not paragraphs................