Poetical Justice

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Originally posted by shellie
😮 i didnt write it....i posted in the wrong thread....it was supposed to go in my ~Author Unknown~ thread....

oops 😮

but i did write this one...

My thoughts are filled with you and if this is real,
My mind tells me to step back and look at how my heart is trying to feel.
I never thought I would feel like this,
The way you make me feel is complete utter bliss.
When you're away , I think of you,
So much so , I dont know what to do.
Im trying hard to control my heart,
To explore this further , Is it smart ?

i thought so 😛
either way it's beautiful in_love

A STUPID LIFE
isnt it funny,
when you think about life,
the things we do,
that cause us strife.
sure there's a laugh,
but then there's a yell,
its things like these,
that put us through hell.
it could be a person,
it could be a place,
either of these,
make you go off your face.
for me it's a person,
who i love to hate,
any day,
and any date.
you call yourself a father,
but aren't you meant to try,
no matter what im feeling,
not to make me cry.
remember that day,
i told you i hate you,
beleive it or not,
but yes it is true.

Originally posted by Evy_O
that's a great one 🙂

Thansk, I wrote it a couple of days ago. 🙂

Heres one I wrote today

You look at me with your blue eyes,
I look right back its no surprise,
I love you more and more each day,
I hold you close and soflty say,
"My love for you is endless"

We touch,
And my heart skips a beat,
we kiss,
I nearly fall down at your feet,

Your every breath a new beginnnig,
You genlte voice, like angels singing,
You eyes, like gems of ritchest blue,
Eternally I'm drawn to you...

Omg Kosta! Thats beautiful!

Love knows no colour

What is love but a feeling of the heart.
It knows no colour, race, or creed,
It knows only of joy, pain, and sorrow.
Joy because I'm yours.
Sorrow because you live so far away
And pain because people will never leave us alone!

Does it matter if his skin is a different colour to mine!
Does it matter if we speak with a different tongue.
They say love has no boundaries, that love is blind.
But maybe your hatred has blinded you.
Maybe your prejudice ways has stopped you
from seeing something so beautiful.

I know that my heart sings a song just for him
and his too, sings of mine.
So why is it so hard to believe.
That love knows no colour!

Lies

Innocence is nothing
When up against a lie
The truth doesnt seem to matter
Or how hard you cry

Nothing becomes something
In the blink of an eye
Friends are broken, lives are ruined
All because of a LIE

CK, i love the Colour poem. It almost made me crycry

I did this one just then...

He was there for me
Through hard times and such
Knowing everything about me
And that I loved him so much

He was a friend
A dear one at that
But we weren’t allowed talk
Because his skin was black

He understood how I felt
With the prejudice in the world
He looked at me and smiled
“People are absurd…

They don’t want us to be happy
They want us to be upset
But never fear
I’ll be here, you bet”

I learnt a lot from him
How to deal and stuff
Knowing how to disregard
People who are tough

But what I didn’t know
Lied in his neighborhood
He tried to hide the bruises
He did what he could

I found out one night
People had been hurting him
Saying “Never to see her again…
Or we’ll hurt Kim.”

He didn’t want this to happen
And he moved away
He had no choice
And didn’t want it to happen this way

A year later,
I received a letter
Regarding he had passed
For me, heleft a letter

I read it
And burst into tears
For I had found out
He was killed by his fears

“Guys came up to me,
Hustling and punching
Left me in the gutter
Blood out of my nose pumping.

They said they’ll come back later
Threatening even worse.
Now I know,
Black skin is a curse.

But I want u to know this;

All the hatred, all the fights
All the times,
We’ve sneaked through nights.

All the times we’ve had to lie
All the times we’ve had to cry
All the times they’ve threatened
That we would die

I wanted you to know
That I’m sorry for what I’ve done to you
What I put u through
But remember, I still love you…”

Omg that is so sad.
The lines below remind me of doobs!

He was there for me
Through hard times and such
Knowing everything about me
And that I loved him so much

My Chocolate desire!

He's that deep brown sugar,
That i've been longing to taste.
A sweetness that makes my tooth ache!
He's dark and so creamy.
He melts in my hands with just one touch!
If i didn't know better i'd swear he was!
The candy man himself!
The way i feel for him,
Knowing i can have him anytime.
makes me realise.
he is my chocolate desire!

I've said it once, and I'll sat it again!!

I love that poem, - Love knows no colour

#claps#

GONE
gone are the days,
when you would see a smile,
incase you havn't noticed,
it has been a while.
gone are the times,
when i would really laugh,
now what they call me,
is a b*tch and a half.
gone are the moments,
when i relied on my mum,
now all those memories,
they seem really dumb.
gone is the future,
when i saw a light,
now my whole destiny,
it seems just not right.
gone is the respect,
do you really care,
when you said that thing to me,
my heart, it felt so bare.
gone are the nights,
when you would wipe my tears,
holding me against you,
you'd scare away the fears.

great poems everyone else 😎

Great poem Mish!

You all are great!!

😱 Mish, very nice!! Love it!! 🙂

thanx huns 😊 wrote it about 10 minutes before i posted it 🙂

NO MATTER
no matter what you tell me,
no matter what you say,
do you really think i'll beleive you,
after what you did today.
no matter how you treat me,
in the future or in the past,
these feelings that i feel for you,
theyre sure going to last.
no matter what you try to do,
dont ever think that i'll forgive,
even if you kill yourself,
i still wnt want to live.
no matter what you give me,
whether it be love or some money,
it wont change anything,
never call me honey.

Originally posted by Kosta
Thansk, I wrote it a couple of days ago. 🙂
I'm difficult in liking any poems but this one was really good ✅

Thank you 😮

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