Poetical Justice

Started by Kosta33 pages

Just wrote this one. Kind of a work in progress.

More beuaty than the autum leaves,.
falling down off autum trees.
More beaty than the Persian sun,
Enough to make a body numb.

The angels cry for you today,
Cry for the price you had to pay,
The time around me seems to stop,
They start decsending from atop.

As all my sorrow starts to show,
I plead with them to let you go,
They lift you up to heavens gates,
Along with you, your beauty fades.

Awwwbawling

I like it its good!

that almost made me cry cry

SECOND BEST
no matter where i go,
no matter what i do,
it seems that i can never be,
good enough for you.
no matter what i think,
no matter what i say,
your head always seems,
to turn the other way.
it seems that i will never be,
any better than the rest,
it seems that i will always be,
nothing special, second best.
for as long as i have known you,
we've always been just friends,
and as the time has drifted by,
ive only been your odds and ends.
for as long as i have known you,
your girlfriends come and go,
it hurts so much to see that you,
have never been my beau.
it seems that i will never be,
any better than the rest,
it seems that i will always be,
nothing special, second best.

NAIVE
we used to be the best of friends,
right from the very start,
but every since she came along,
you had to break my heart.
of course i can not blame you,
for i have been naive,
you said you were going nowhere,
and i had to believe.
all that time we spent together,
its all gone down the drain,
now that she entered your life,
ive seen zilch but rain.

Thanks guys ๐Ÿ™‚ I try.
Heres two short ones I just wrote. Not as indepth as my others, but still. ๐Ÿ˜‰

As I sit stairing in to the midnight blue,
My thoughts keep trailing back to you.
As leaves quiver in the summer breeze,
Your intoxicating smile puts me at ease.

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What is this feeling?
What is it revealing?
Why am I falling for you?
You make my heart shine.
Its simply devine.
Oh how I wish that I knew.

DOWN SOUTH
it seems that every single day,
the same dumb thoughts run through my head,
no matter who says what to me,
ill always wish im dead.
as this soulless corpse of mine,
roams down the streets of hell,
my mind it seems to wander,
but nothing rings a bell.
and as you try to shout my name,
nothing leaves your mouth,
you see me dropping not to the north,
but right down to the south.
if i ever went up north,
to the heavenly clouds above,
i sure would not drop down to you,
for you showed me no love.
as i happen to fly down south,
my dreams they all come true,
now i smile all day long,
that im nowhere near you.

Down South is great......hang in there, babydoll....... ๐Ÿ˜‰

....The future's bright....

you know by down south i meant hell ๐Ÿ˜–

๐Ÿ˜‚ I think he knows ๐Ÿ˜‚

oh bag ๐Ÿ˜ฎ

mish-mish > hug

Evil Eyes

I'm looking around
for a way out of hell
demons over my shoulder
and reading my mail

They want to find out
what makes me tick
so their stare is there focused
finding nits to pick

Goblins grit their teeth
half grin, half grimace
this is just the beginning
and I long for that finish

But this will go on
till the day that I'm dead
cuz my brain is a b!tch
and it's all in my head

Lol ๐Ÿ˜‚ Thats cool!

Re: Evil Eyes

cry in_love

WHEN WORDS ARE NOT ENOUGH
eventually in life,
you'll get to the point,
when words are not enough.
you'll see the sun,
turn into clouds,
when times are getting rough.
and all those things,
that people said,
when the truth is just a lie.
then theres the day,
from the moment you wake,
when you wish you'd die.
it's times like these,
you just give in,
when things are just too tough.
its moments like these,
it's all too much,
when words are not enough.

Originally posted by *SpunkiE*
Lol ๐Ÿ˜‚ Thats cool!

...Thank you...... ๐Ÿ˜„

mish > Re: "When words...." = Very good, heartfelt..... ๐Ÿ™‚

With only one more breath
I condemn you all to hell
And as I die I pray
But only time will tell

If you're gunna kill us all
If you're gunna destroy this world
And then stand proudly, singing
The Stars and Stripes unfurled

God bless America. The saviour,
The saviour of the free
And I think, what'll you do,
When youโ€™ve cut down the last tree.

And so if I had one breath,
I'd send you all to hell,
It's unbelievable; you'd fit right in,
You'd probably do well

trick: thats a good poem youve got there.
dd: thanx! comes from right down the bottom of my heart as all my poems do