Poetical Justice

Which one? The Quenya version? For your signatures?

Be my Guest! kisses

Aww Mori your the best! *kiss*

*blinks*

Shh...Its A Secret!
Shh its a secret.
you cant tell a soul
my love for you
is a secret that none shall know.

Although i want to shout it
from the highest mountains,
let the world know,
that i love you so.
Im afraid for anyone to know.

So for now,
i watch you from a distance.
everytime i see you,
i fall deeper in love.
maybe one day,
my dreams will come true.
And we'll be together
best friends forever.
So untill i get the courage to give this to you,
it will remain a secret
that none shall know.

CK...that...was...excellent

T-thanks!

It is VERY good, 🙂.

Originally posted by Black Dragon
Something else I’d like to share…
I found this whilst I was going through some of my old writings I had done agggges ago…and I found this. It’s meant to be a poem, (in my story, it was the wedding vows the guy used when he got married), anyway, it’s the old other poetry thing I’ve ever written, so hope you like it!

The Quenya version (it’s about elves and stuff, and the ceremony was elvish…)

Ai i menel né parmanya
Ar i nén né tengwanya
I eleni quessenya,
Umes farya
Ostecë i tië mélanyelyë

The translaions:

If the sky was my paper,
And the water my ink,
The stars my words,
It would still not be enough,
To describe the way I love you.

That is AWESOME! 😱

Course, what did you expect! He's my BD 😍

A poem I wrote for a special someone! Who knows who he is!

Falling
When I'm falling,
And there's nothing left to feel,
I wake before I hit the bottom,
But my dream is still so real.

When you've stolen my heart,
And each tear hits the floor,
There's nothing left here for me,
I still crave to be yours

But now im all alone
as you have a new lover.
so i will just fade away
Dont want to feel like the other.

But before i go
I'll leave you my heart
do with it as you please.
As its tearing me apart

Wow! You're on a roll tonight! 😱 Its great!

I REALLY like that last part, its oh so good! 🙂

So unreal
So far away,
across the ocean and more,
A fragile young spirit,
a young girl fights a war.

This person is me,
from where this starts, i cannot say.
Only one person knows,
And my feelings for him
Wont cease or go away.

I dont want this to end,
but I dont know where its going.
And thinking about you him all the time,
it keeps my feelings growing...

It seems so unreal,
Were kept so far apart.
But I cannot tell,
I dont have an atlas in my heart...

That's beautiful, CK......in_love

....you're so good....and get'n even better with every post....

^So very true! Your poems are amazing.

A REALLY short one I wrote this morning, I was gonna add on to it, but I thought that keeping this onee short was the best thig to do.

Look in me,
What do you see?
An ocean of love,
In a storm if misery.

I like that kosta short and sweet

Falling...is that...you know?

Urm a little help Telpz!

Nah i wrote it for a special guy and only he nows who he is

🙄

*snatches thread back from evil, thread snatching poets* schmoll Mine.

Walking away,
I see the pain
I put you through!!
All this false hope
A created everyday!!
These deep red lies
Dripping off me
Crimson with regret,
I knew you could
See right through me!!
Lost in this game
I caught so caught in!
Give me one,
one more chance,
and I’ll make it
back up to you!!
Look into my eyes
All you’ll truly see
is the truth.
Give me your hand,
Trust in me,
JUMP!
And I’ll catch you
You’ve got to know
I can’t live this life,
Without you by my side…