Poetical Justice

Sweet Candy Kiss
How sweet is this
Your candy kiss
Gives me time to reminisce
All the old I've pushed away
To a place where forgotten memories play
And the one new memory to build upon
Glides in the path of a golden swan
Lighting the way for new memories to be made
And darkening the path where past misery can fade
Lead me to your paradise
With skies as clear as arctic ice
And pain knows not of this place called love
It lets us learn to rise above
To finally be free of obligation
And sink into this sweet sensation
Pleasure, bliss
Utter happiness,
Soothes me like your candy kiss
Clearest love and strongest lust
Sugar rain and angel's dust
Release me into ecstacy
Come and live my fantasy
Pleasing bodies, pleasing souls
Pleasingly you take control
Awaiting you and fantasizing this
And missing your sweet candy kiss.

Originally posted by English Moosette
Sarah, did I miss something sweetie? 😕

Passing me by
Alone by the window I sit
look'n at the world with jealous eyes
Everyone has someone to love
Yet love keeps passing me by

Crying tears of misery
no joy to be found
I'm reaching for your heart
but I'm sinking in the ground

How long must I struggle
before I'm freed from this jail
How long must I burn
before you release me from my hell

My isolated days
Turn into lonelier weeks
Sadness comes out of hiding
When your love is all I seek

Alone by the window I sit
waiting for you to realize
that I need you to love me
Stop passing me by

Yeah, totally. But who are you referring to? I don't mean this to sound as if I'm calling you a Hussy, not at all. But I have no idea which guy you're actually with....

Im with d-double

but the poem wasnt referring to anyone!

Sweet Candy Kiss > droolio....oh baby!

Passing me by > cry....aww baby...

Very nice, Jax....*hug*

Aw thanks darling!

Nice Poems Sarah.

Blank expression,
No impression,
Immitation of life,
Like the edge of a knife.

Cut the line,
Sever all that is mine,
Out of mind, out of sight,
Like the dead of the night.

Make me bleed,
Do me a wicked deed,
Make me cry,
Make it so I can feel alive.

sad poem!

Yeah, it is.

Originally posted by Candy Kisses
sad poem!

....but very good.... 👆

Originally posted by Kosta
Blank expression,
No impression,
Immitation of life,
Like the edge of a knife.

Cut the line,
Sever all that is mine,
Out of mind, out of sight,
Like the dead of the night.

Make me bleed,
Do me a wicked deed,
Make me cry,
Make it so I can feel alive.

This is beautyful. Never heard anything sound so happy. Like the edge os a knife. Yes, yes, yes indeed. Do me a wiked deed, indeeeeeed! I love it and see nothing sad about it. I actually think it is awe inspiring. A true statement to all that is and to all that will be.

Originally posted by justjakk
This is beautyful. Never heard anything sound so happy. Like the edge os a knife. Yes, yes, yes indeed. Do me a wiked deed, indeeeeeed! I love it and see nothing sad about it. I actually think it is awe inspiring. A true statement to all that is and to all that will be.

Wow man, thanks, thats probably the best complimenat Ive gotten about my poems 🙂.

Here I go again
thinking the worst
feeling like the second
when I'm probably the first

I search my heart
to find directions of emotion
I'm starting to drown
in this chaotic ocean

My eyes says yes
but my heart says no
I drank a bottle full of tears
asI'm letting it go

I need reassurance
to protect my soul
and to keep loving you
is my only goal

Originally posted by D-Double
Here I go again
thinking the worst
feeling like the second
when I'm probably the first

I search my heart
to find directions of emotion
I'm starting to drown
in this chaotic ocean

My eyes says yes
but my heart says no
I drank a bottle full of tears
asI'm letting it go

I need reassurance
to protect my soul
and to keep loving you
is my only goal

O doobs you are my first and only babes

Thank you, beautiful....

clapping

Excellent guys, truly awe-inspiring. Unfortunately, I lost my muse recently, so no poetry from me 😬 But keep it coming, you're genuine artistes 😉

Lost and forgotten I was,
In this dog eat dog world alone I stood,
Without a shoulder for me to cry on,
Nor a pair of arms to find comfort in.
Alone…surrounded by a cloud of mist
Enfolded in layers of horrifying darkness
Waiting…waiting…

Through the mist a faint light erupted,
Growing second after second…
“I see you”
Your dazzling blue eyes and your soft hair
A smile of love and hope you hold.

Like the angel I always wanted,
You enfolded your wings around me,
And carries me to a timeless world
Where only two figures moved…
You and me…

I grew stronger in mind, body and soul
With your teaching I learnt the lore
And much, much more.
My heart grew, filled with this new emotion,
…Love

There are things I wanted to tell you,
But fear of rejection held me back
These bonds between us,
Which even time cannot break.
It knows nothing but this deep love
But it is you who is too blind to see this
Even when it hits you straight in the face!

You were made for me…
And somehow I’ll make you see…