Elessea> 'Bout the screenplay:
-It seems to have possibly been written in haste, (so as to please Tig members 😛 ), but it is eeriely....good. Dark. Forboding, in a way. 😉
-I think the dialogue and descriptions were well written, but perhaps some more character description could go in there, (i.e. what they're wearing, etc.). Perhaps to make it more script-like. 😉
But, in any case, it's an excellent and....kind of scary beginning. scared