Originally posted by DCLXVI
Elessea> 'Bout the screenplay:
-It seems to have possibly been written in haste, (so as to please Tig members ), but it is eeriely....good. Dark. Forboding, in a way.
-I think the dialogue and descriptions were well written, but perhaps some more character description could go in there, (i.e. what they're wearing, etc.). Perhaps to make it more script-like.
But, in any case, it's an excellent and....kind of scary beginning. scared
Thank you soooooo much for the feed back Melk 😄
* Written in haste? not exaclty...I just hastily typed up stuff to make people here happy, lol anyway, they were just a bunch of random notes of stuff that came into my head in the middle of hte night when i cant sleep 😮 nothing special
* I know I know...I suck at formatting...and the problem this time is that it started out as a novel..but was too visually based for that....and then a play, but some stuff (like cat) wouldn't have worked with that...so now its a screenplay -sigh-
Thank you sooo sooo much for the feedback once agian 😄 I will work on it some more later ✅
BTW: any help on screenplay formatting is welcome ✅
I am glad you liked it 😊 (though its no where near as good as your stuff 😛)