Van Helsing Carry On #1: Discussion

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why can't you tell me? are you basing it off the outline that i sent you by pm and what i told you?

i can tell u....lol.....its jus what i put b4 in my other post....i havent started writing it yet.....but i have a few ideas on what to put....i might write a paragraph n post it in de story thread...den ull see๐Ÿ™‚...

work out your ideas, then tell me the next time i'm online. i'm too pooped to go on and try to sort this out. you'll know, just read the pm i just sent you a bit ago. i'm logging off in a bit.

ok, ive got bout a bit more dan a paragrpah...ive written bout gabriel n carl entering the church and walking thru as they come across the order....in more detail dan dat....lol..want me to post it in de other thread?....

what exactly do you have them saying and/or doing when they come across the council?

btw, if you and/or i have gabriel and carl encounter the order, we can have them talk to them in like a meeting. where they stand before the council to tell them about how their mission to kill dracula went down and the likes. something like that. or could do that later.

want me to describe gabriel and carl's personas? it's a very important thing to remember, since you haven't seen the movie yet.

then havent sed neting yet..lol..๐Ÿ˜„.....hah...i jus put dat dey saw 9 figures in the dark sorta ting.....cuz i was wondering who u want to talk first....n what u wnat em to say n dat....

โœ… dat wud help...damn i shuda seen de movie! lol....wud n so much easier for u and me....im wasting ur time๐Ÿ™....

if that's what you have down so far, than please go ahead and post it! i bet it sounds good ๐Ÿ˜„ lol

i'll note their personas in a bit. no, you aren't wasting my time, you're actually being helpful at finally gettin' me to write a vh fic. which i have been meaning to do one for so long. thanks for all your help and cooperation! *hugs*

coolies๐Ÿ˜„...me will....

really?๐Ÿ™‚...heh.....๐Ÿ˜Š...

๐Ÿ˜ฑ....*hugs back*..ey u no its no prob๐Ÿ˜„....๐Ÿ˜ฎโ€๐Ÿ’จ...

just shut up and post the bit, baka! ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜„ ๐Ÿ˜† j/k

*cries* ๐Ÿ˜ฑ i did!๐Ÿ‘ฟ

๐Ÿ˜† cry baby! ๐Ÿ˜› i'm going to go and read it! ๐Ÿ˜ฑ ๐Ÿ˜Ž

berry good ๐Ÿ˜„ i guess we can get into the part where the council/order and the two main characters talk about the mission, death of dracula, for a bit or so. than after the council...maybe the guys can relax or something. like carl goes to get some sleep in his dorm. maybe gabriel decides to stay up longer by just aimlessly walking the hallways and all. just zoning out or in a deep reverie of the past events. how does that sound?

tanks๐Ÿ˜„....i wasnt sure of ur verdict..heh...๐Ÿ˜–..
cuz i dont write dat many stories๐Ÿ˜–....

โœ… sounds perfectโœ….....๐Ÿ‘†

my verdict...๐Ÿ˜„ ๐Ÿ˜† funnie vera! that's okay if you aren't an experienced story teller online. i chose you to co-write this story with me cause i knew you were a very talented writer. esp. when it comes down to descriptions and metaphors of reality.

๐Ÿ˜„....heh..
๐Ÿ˜ฎreally?.....tanks boppy....dat means alot to me๐Ÿ™‚

couldn't have found a better person to work with ๐Ÿ˜„ anyways...got any input into what i'm going to type up next after your post?

๐Ÿ˜ฎaww shucks....*looks down*...๐Ÿ˜„
hmmmm.....โŒ...lol......ur de master, ๐Ÿ˜ฑ u no more bout helsing dan me......so u got more info๐Ÿ˜ฑ....so i tink u no what u doin๐Ÿ˜„.LOL

no prob, girlie ๐Ÿ˜„ *hugs*

when i read "de master", made me think of "slave and master". ๐Ÿ˜† so wrong! lmao j/k j/k j/k

do i have the greenlight to type up the new bit?

๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜Š *hugs back*...

๐Ÿ˜ฑ u ๐Ÿ˜ˆ person..*cries n pukes*....๐Ÿ˜‚...

โœ… sure do.....๐Ÿ˜„

cries and pukes...๐Ÿ˜„ ๐Ÿ˜† lmao funnie...lol

coolies๐Ÿ˜ฑ just posted my new story bit! check it out. i'll explain things after you're done reading it.