Re: Re: Re: the taste of blood
Originally posted by Smiling_Sadly
well if this counts, my sister would suck on her wound....kinda gross...but she would, and i have a few blood sisters...from the second grade, but i cant remember who they are now 😕
that's dangerous you know, trading blood with people 😕
cuz your story is kinda flowery,that's why i asked - it'll be too darn much for a reader to get through after a while.these kind of stories have to be really short or you'll lose your readers' interest FAST.
yeah i'm an aspirirng writer myself.i've got a thread with a couple of my short stories in the general fiction forum but i've been neglecting it for a while 😮 😗