the taste of blood

weird this thread

Originally posted by Anoushka
cuz your story is kinda flowery,that's why i asked - it'll be too darn much for a reader to get through after a while.these kind of stories have to be really short or you'll lose your readers' interest FAST.

yeah i'm an aspirirng writer myself.i've got a thread with a couple of my short stories in the general fiction forum but i've been neglecting it for a while 😮 😗

what do you mean by "flowery?"
anyways...its not all gonna be like that 😬 shes gonna go to school and stuff.....shs really popular, so its not liek shes down...im just gonna make her try hide it all but (obviously) her friends figure out whats going on!

😆 it's not the plot dearie - that's okay...i meant flowery as in the language used - it really packs a whole lot of adjectives - hence,flowery.that type of writing is great for 'depressing' stories,and really, really short ones,not over 1000 words or maybe 1500...

The taste of blood is very nice and sweet. I quite enjoy it.

me too

😕

i absolutely agree droolio

i had to suck my blood because i cut myself earlier. I needed a drink.

*cuts arms to taste*

lol