A Manslayer Story: A Tale of Love and Hate (please R&R)

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(2 days later in the morning)

Alex: Tim? Sir Tim?

Tim: (waking up) Uhhh..........

Alex: You feel okay?

Tim: Yeah, I do.

Alex: You feel up too leaving for Kyoto?

Tim: ............Yeah, let's go.

(1 hour later)

(Tim is in the dressing room)

Alex: Almost done, Sir Tim?

Tim: Yeah.

Alex: Okay.

(We are then shown Tim putting his shirt on)

Alex: ..................

(Tim patting his hair)

Alex: ..............

(Tim putting his sword in his belt)

Alex: ............

Tim: (coming out) Okay, ready?

Alex: Alright.

(They go see Mr. Taeda)

Mr. Taeda: Oh, Sir Tim, are you leaving?

Tim: Yes........I have to go.

Mr. Taeda: I know why, so I won't stop you, despite a few injuries you still have.

Tim: Thank you for everything sir. I'm deeply in your debt. (bows)

Mr. Taeda: No need. I'm a doctor, so I do what I can to help others in need.

Tim: I wish for your great success.

Mr. Taeda: Same to you, Sir Tim.

Tim: Thank you......Well, we're off.

Mr. Taeda: Farewell.

Alex: Bye.

(They leave)

Mr. Taeda: Good luck.......Sir Tim.

(We are then shown Tim and Alex leaving the village)

Act I: The Gang of Evil
Chapter 12-Magnus:Bandit of Terror

(5 miles outside of town)

Alex: So Tim, what were we given?

Tim: The villagers gave us 1,000 yen and some food for all of our help.

Alex: We could certainly need both, since we still have a way's to go.

Tim: Come to think of it, this area seems familiar from my previous journey.

Alex: It does? Then that means that.....

Tim: We still got a ways to go till we'll be halfway to Kyoto.

Alex: Oh........

Tim: (himself) Don't worry Misao......I'm coming.

(They walk another 2 miles in silence, until.....)

Woman: AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tim: What the?!

Alex: It came from up there Tim!! (points ahead)

Tim: Right!!

(They run up about 1 mile till they come to a young woman, about 18 years old, in fear on the ground while staring at a shadowy man with a long sword. At the man's feet lays a headless man with blood oozing out of the hole in his neck. The man is turned away from them and blood is dripping from his sword.)

Alex: That's so......disgusting!!!

Tim: Rotten bastard........Hey, who are you?!

????: ..............

Tim: Dammit, I asked you a question!! Who the hell are you?!

????: .............(The man then slowly turns his head towards Tim and the others and then shakes the blood off his sword and sheathes it) I have no reason to fight you. Please leave.

Tim: What does that mean?!

????: This man was a thorn in my side, so I killed him.

Tim: You had NO RIGHT to kill him, that you didn't!!!

????: I mean it young sir, this has nothing to do with you.

Tim: This has EVERYTHING to do with me!!!
(Unsheathes sword then extends it out) My name is Tim Ouellette, fighter for justice!! I will defeat anyone who dares defy it!!

????: ............I warned you, but now, I shall use my skills to kill you.

Tim: .............

Woman: .............

Alex: Tim, be careful!! He seems strong!!

Tim: Don't worry!! (smiles) I'll use one of my special attacks on him!! (sheathes sword then unsheathes reverse-blade and extends it) Prepare!!!

????: (himself) A reverse-blade sword? Hmmm........

Tim: ..............

????: ...............

Tim: (charges) Aaaahhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!

????: (charges) Aaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!

(CLING!!! They meet in the middle and hold it)

????: So, you're the legendary battosuai, Tim Ouellette?! I've always wanted to fight you!!

Tim: Hhmphhh!!!

(Pushes guy back then when he goes back a little, he swings his sword sideways, but ???? ducks it in time, then ???? points his sword upwards and goes for Tim's face by sending it through his chin, but Tim moves his head to the left in time, then he jumps back then charges with sword being sheathed, then charges with hand on sheathe then jumps up in the air, pulls sword out then goes for ????'s shoulder but ???? moves to the right a little, swings his sword and cut's Tim in the arm a little. Tim get's a little away from him)

Tim: (himself) Damn!!!

????: What's this?! Losing to a swordsman like me?!

Tim: Uugh.......SHUT UP!!!!! (charges, about to unsheathe sword then ???? charges too. When they're about to meet, they suddenly extend their swords out and then point them at each other's faces)

Alex: Uhh..........

Woman: ............

Tim: .............

????: Hmmm........you're good. (sheathes sword) We'll meet again. Farewell. (leaves)

Woman: ..............

Tim: Hmphh!!! (sheathes sword)

Alex: (walks up to Tim) Tim.......you alright?

Tim: Yeah, I am. What about her?

Alex: She seems calm now. Want to talk to her?

Tim: Yeah........I want to know what was going on here. (walks up to her) Excuse me, are you alright?

Woman: Yeah.....thanks.

Tim: It's no problem, just a fighter for justice.

(The woman smiles)

Tim: So, could you tell me what happened here?

Woman: Well........

Alex: It's alright if you don't want to tell us. It's your business.

Woman: Okay.......I'll tell you.

Tim: Alright.

Woman: .........That man was......my older brother.

Tim: ...........!!!

Alex: ........!!!

Woman: The reason he killed that guy was because I've been hanging out with him for 3 months now, and my brother was jealous.

Tim: Who is your brother anyway?

Woman: His name is Magnus........and he's part of something called the Chain Gang or something.

Tim and Alex: Huh?!

Woman: Oh......what's wrong?

Tim: I'm after the Chain Gang as of now.

Woman: You are?! Then does that mean......you're going to kill him?!

Tim: I'll try not too......Wait!! Alex, you should've known about this! What's going on?!

Alex: He must be new. I don't recall anyone like that when I left.

Tim: Do you think he's one of the 8, or....?

Alex: He might just be a special assassin hired by my father.

Tim: .....................

Woman: What are you going to do now?

Tim: I don't know yet..........

Alex: ...............

Woman: ............

Tim: Anyway.........I haven't asked your name yet.

Woman: Oh, I'm sorry. My name is Amanda Suochi.

Tim: It's nice to meet you Amanda. My name is Tim Ouellette and this is Alex.

Alex: (bows) Hello.

Amanda: (blushes) Hi.

Tim: Is there a village nearby?

Amanda: Yeah.......it's one mile that way.

Tim: Would you mind if we stopped for something to eat? While we do that, we can talk over your brother.

Amanda: That would be fine, thanks.

(They then leave. We are then shown someone in the woods. We can't tell who it is because of the shadows.)

????: So, he IS here. Hmmm, and to think, I was able to come here too. Finally......(sheathes sword and points it down) I'll be able to do away with him.......for good.

To be continued

Next time-The Mysterious Fighter:Tim is Connected?-Part 1

You won't want to miss it!!!

amanda? lol =^.^= wait, is mangus her brother, the guy who was killed, or the killer?

Last time:

Woman: Aaahhhhhh!!!!!!!!
Tim: What was that?!
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Tim: Rotten bastard..........who are you?!
????: I have no reason to fight you. Please leave.
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(CLING)

????: So, you're Tim Ouellette, the battosuai?! I've always wanted to fight you!!
Tim: Hhmphhh!!!
(Fight scene)
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Tim: Who was that man?
Woman: He's my brother, Magnus. He's part of the Chain Gang.
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Tim: Could we go to your village?
Woman: Of course.
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????: So, he IS here. Hmmm, and to think, I was able to come here too. Finally.......(unsheathes sword and points it down) I'll be able to do away with him.......for good.

Act I: The Gang of Evil
Chapter 13-The Mysterious Fighter:Tim is Connected? (Part 1)

(Walking to the village)

Tim: How long has Magnus been involved with the Chain Gang?

Amanda: It's been a month, when I heard the Chain Gang was formed.

Tim: So, he's been involved from the very beginning. Why did he join them?

Amanda: About 1 1/2 months ago, there was this strange man that came to our house and asked for money from my dad for a personal reason.

(Flashback of what happened)

(Magnus and Amanda are having a conversation with each other till a man comes in their house)

Man: Excuse me?!

Dad: You?! What do you want?!

Man: It's way past the due time for the money! So, where is it?!

Dad: I'm sorry, I don't have it! Now, get out!!

Man: .............(suddenly unsheathes his sword) What I said last time will not go to waste! Because you don't have the money, your life is mine!

Dad: No, don't!!!

Magnus: Uhhh.........no!

Amanda: Magnus........don't!!!

Man: (bringing sword down towards Dad till Magnus get's in the way) Aaahhhhhhhh......uhh...!!!

Magnus: Don't you DARE kill my father!!

Man: Get out of the way brat!!

Magnus: I won't!!!

Man: Uurghhh.........

Magnus: If my dad owes money, then I'll work for it!!

Dad: Uhhh......son, wait!!

Man: .........So, you wish to work?

Magnus: Yes!!

Man: ........Then so be it! (hands Magnus a sword) Welcome to the Chain Gang!

(End flashback)

Amanda: And that's when my brother turned.......evil.

Tim: .................

Alex: ...............

Tim: Let me ask you this.......What did the man look like, or did you catch his name?

Amanda: It was something like.....Hishu or something.

Tim: Hiroshu, correct?

Amanda: Yes, that was it!!

Tim: I should've known.......he manipulated your brother to join the Chain Gang! That's a good sign of a lousy bastard!

Alex: You're right......that's what Hiroshu is like.

Tim: I can't wait till I kill him......for all he's letting me go through!

Amanda: What's your reason for trying to kill him?

Tim: ...........He kidnapped my wife, the one I love most in this world.

Amanda: That's so cruel!!

Alex: .................

Tim: Don't worry......I promised to her that I would save her......no matter what.

Amanda: But.........(Alex nudges her) uhh.....

(Alex shakes his head)

Amanda: ............

Tim: ...........So, is this it?

Amanda: Oh........yes, this is my village.

Tim: Could you show us a place to eat please?

Amanda: Sure. Follow me.

(They follow her. Then, we're shown the same guy from the forest, still in shadows, standing at the entrance.........laughing.)

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(A restaurant called the Suhiara)

Amanda: What would you guy's like?

Tim: I'd like some rice please.

Alex: Same here.

Amanda: Okay. Excuse me, miss?!

Woman: Yes, what would you like?

Amanda: Could we have 3 orders of white rice, please?

Woman: Any sauce?

Amanda: You guys want sauce?

Tim and Alex: Sure!

Amanda: Yes please.

Woman: Okay, it'll be out in a few minutes. (walks away)

Tim, Alex, and Amanda: Thank you!!

Tim: So, do you live in this town Amanda?

Amanda: Yeah, my family lives about 2 miles that way. I live with my mom, dad, and little sister. You can meet them if you want.

Tim: That's fine.

Alex: So, how old are you?

Amanda: I'm 18 and my brother is 20.

Alex: You and your brother have had good times together, haven't you?

Amanda: Yes, ever since that Hiroshu guy came, he's been so mean and evil. (starts crying) I'd just wish things would go back to the way they were.

Tim: ......................

(Tim has flashbacks of him becoming the battousai, and thinking one of those times, he could've abandoned Misao, but his true self refused to do so.)

Tim: ..........Amanda?

Amanda: (sniff) Yeah?

Tim: I'll do everything I can to get the brother you know back. (smiles) You can count on me.

Amanda: Thank you so much Tim!

Tim: You're welcome, and it's not a bother...........I'm used to doing things like this anyways.

Amanda: Oh...............

(Silence for about a minute till.........)

Woman: Here you go. Enjoy. (walks off)

Tim, Amanda, and Alex: Thank you!!

Amanda: Well, eat up a.............(she see's that Tim and Alex are whoofing down their food) Hmm......you guys are funny.

(15 minutes later)

Tim: BURP!!!!! Oh, sorry.

Amanda: You guy's must've been hungry.

Alex: Well, for someone like Tim, fighting does that too him.

Amanda: Hmm.........

Alex: ............

Amanda: So, what now?

Tim: We could go meet your parents now, that we could.

Amanda: (smiles) Okay.

(They get up to leave)

Woman: Thank you for eating here.

Amanda: Yeah, thanks.

Tim and Alex: Thank you!

(They leave)

Amanda: Well, follow me guys.

Tim and Alex: Okay!

(1 mile down the road)

Tim: This is certainly a nice town, that it is.

Amanda: It is, isn't it? Yeah, I've been living here since I was 5 and I've grown attached to it.

Tim: I'm glad to hear that.

(Then, we're shown the same shadowy boy walking in the opposite direction of Tim, Alex, and Amanda, who's eyes are unshowable. As he's passing by Tim, he suddenly says, without know but Tim hearing it: )

????: Hello..........Tim.

Tim: ........!!!!! (he stops where he's standing then stares at the back of the boy as he keeps walking away) (himself) That.......c.....can't be!! How is it possible?!

Amanda: Huh? Tim? (looks behind her)

Alex: (looks behind him) What's he doing?

Tim: (himself) Uh......how did he.....?!

Alex: Tim?!

Tim: (himself) How?!

Amanda: Tim?!!?

Tim: Uh.....oh, sorry! (runs ahead to them) I was just.......thinking.

Alex: It seems really serious from the look on your face and how you're acting.

Tim: No, it's nothing.....Really.

Amanda: Well, if you say so. Okay, let's go then.

(They walk on)

Tim: (himself) This is so weird.......How can he be here? And why?

End of Part 1

oooo..whos the mysterious dude?

Last time:

Amanda: My brother has been with the Chain Gang ever since it originated a 1 1/2 months ago.
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Magnus: If my dad owes money, then I'll work for it!!
Hiroshu: ............(hands him a sword) Welcome to the Chain Gang!
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Tim: I promise that I'll do everything I can to help, that I will.
Amanda: Thank you so much Tim!
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????: Hello..........Tim.
Tim: (himself) Uhhh.........it..........can't be!! How did he get here?!

Act I: The Gang of Evil
Chapter 14-The Mysterious Fighter:Tim is Connected? (Part 2)

Amanda: Well, we're here.

Alex: Whoa, this is a nice house Amanda.

Amanda: Hhmphhh......thanks.

Alex: What do you think Tim?........Tim? (looks behind him) Tim, are you alright?

Tim: Huh?.........Yeah, I am.

Alex: ....................

Amanda: Why don't you come in?

Alex: Thanks, we'd be glad too. You coming, Tim?

Tim: Yeah.

(Inside Amanda's house)

Amanda: Mom, dad, I'm home!!!

Dad: Welcome home Amanda.........Oh, where's your boyfriend?

Amanda: ...........He was killed.

Dad: What?!

Amanda: Magnus did it.........

Dad: ................

Mom: What's going on?

Dad: It looks like our son has become a tool of murder.

Mom: What?!

Amanda: It's true.........He killed my boyfriend.

Mom: Oh son..............

Dad: (notices Tim and Alex) And........who are these two?

Amanda: This is Tim Ouellette and Alex. They helped me back when.........

Dad: Oh, I see. Thank you so much you two.

Alex: No need for thanks. It was really Tim here that did everything. He made him go away and......well, you should thank him.

Dad: If you say so then.......Thanks, Sir Tim.

Tim: You're welcome.

Amanda: Want to go to my room? We can talk more there.

Tim: Sure.

(Amanda's room)

Amanda: You know, I remember asking you Tim why you were after the Chain Gang, but what about you Alex?

Alex: I'm.......part of the Chain Gang.

Amanda: Uhhh................

Alex: But don't worry.....I quit.

Amanda: Huh.......why?

Alex: After hearing about taking this job and killing Sir Tim, and seeing how nice and respectful he is, I decided to quit the Chain Gang and help Sir Tim on his journey to save his wife.

Amanda: That's really nice of you.

Alex: Yeah........

Amanda: What's your wife's name, Tim?

Tim: Misao Macimachi.

Amanda: That's a nice name.

Tim: Yeah.......(sniff), it is, isn't it? And.......I plan on her keeping it.....that I........(crying) do.

Alex: Tim............

(Tim continues to cry)

Amanda: Tim.......why don't you take a nap? You look tired.

Tim: (sniff) Okay, thanks.

Amanda: You can use my bed.

Tim: Okay.

Alex: Sleep tight, Sir Tim.

Tim: Thanks Alex.

(He falls asleep 10 minutes later)

Amanda: He's a nice friend, isn't he?

Alex: He's quite nice, but during battle, he can be very ruthless.

Amanda: As in?

Alex: He becomes a battousai, which means he loses all sense of himself.

Amanda: Do you mean like how that guy was before? The one who defeated a man, Makoto Shishio, a year ago?

Alex: You're talking about sir Kenshin Himura?

Amanda: Yes.

Alex: Okay.

Amanda: Is there anything else?

Alex: Yes.......I'll tell you the whole story.

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(A dream)

Tim: ...........Uhh........Huh, another dream? Hello?!

(Silence)

Tim: Hello?!

Misao: Tim?

Tim: Huh?! (looks behind him) Misao?! (runs too her and hugs her) Oh Misao.......

Misao: Tim, I'm sorry, but this isn't the time for this.

Tim: Uhh......what do you mean?

Misao: Someone very strong has been hired by the Chain Gang to kill you.

Tim: Uhh.....who is it?!

Misao: His name is.........something like Kyle Farris.

Tim: ..........!!!!!!

Misao: What's wrong?!

Tim: He.......he's from my world!!!!!

Misao: What?!

Tim: He's a boy from my world who beats me up!!!

Misao: Uhhh........

Tim: I've already met him here.......I was surprised too.

Misao: If he's from your world, then how did he...?!!?

Tim: I don't know......I'm hoping to ask him personally......when we face each other in battle.

Misao: Tim, you can't fight him!! He's too strong!!

Tim: Misao.........I have to face him!

Misao: But why?!

Tim: Misao.......if I keep running away from him and I keep accepting what he does to me, then I'll be more of a coward.

Misao: Tim.........

Tim: I'm sorry.........I have to do this.

Misao: ...................

Tim: ..................

Misao: ..............(hugs Tim) Just be careful........okay?

Tim: ............(hugs Misao) I will.......I promise.

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(Middle of the night)

(Tim wakes up and see's that everyone is sleeping. He then get's up then put's his sword in his belt and goes downstairs and outside. He then turns right to the outskirts of town. He keeps going till he comes to a clearing........where Kyle is waiting.)

Tim: ..............

Kyle: So.........you're arrived. It's about time. Now, we can finish this.

Tim: Please Kyle, I want to avoid this battle, that I do.

Kyle: How can you say that, after everything I've done to you?! And now, I give you this opportunity to kill me, and you refuse?! You're pitiful!!!

Tim: Please Kyle, I don't want to kill you.....I don't want to kill for no reason.

Kyle: Then maybe this will change your mind.....I work for the Chain Gang.

Tim: .........!!!!

Kyle: Yes......I work for the same group that had your wife kidnapped, and I'll have to say that I'm glad you are. I wouldn't let a girl as hot as her go to waste.

Tim: Uhhh......YOU BASTARD!!!!!

Kyle: Fight me........I DARE YOU!!!!!

Tim: I won't!!!

Kyle: Fine. (charges then unsheathes sword right as he's about to strike Tim)

(CLING)

(Tim blocks his sword with his sheathe that still has the sword in it and they hold it)

Tim: (sad face) No matter what you do......I'll never draw my sword.

Kyle: Damn you Tim!!! I came all the way from our world to fight you and this is the answer I get?! Fight!!!!! (jumps back) Hhmphhh......you're the same crybaby you always were!! You never learned how to fend for yourself!!

Tim: ......................

Kyle: Silence, huh?! Well then, I'll make sure I end it NOW!!!! (charges Tim with sword raised. He then brings it down but Tim suddenly disappears and shows up far behind Kyle)

Tim: Kyle......you don't stand a chance.

Kyle: SHUT UP!!!!! (charges once again and swings diagonally right, misses Tim, diagonally left, misses, side-slash, and straight slash down, but misses on those too) Dammit!!!

Tim: Give up Kyle....I'm stronger than you. There's no way you can beat me.

Kyle: UUUUURRRGGHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tim: Go back home and leave me in peace. I'm on a journey to defeat only the original members of the Chain Gang, the 8 I was set on a journey to fight, and you are only a mere assassin. You're still weak, so.....please leave.

Kyle: .....................

End of Part 2

0.0...woa...

Look out everyone!!! The act finale will be Thursday!!! Be prepared!!!

>O TO LONG!!!!!!!!!!

Act I: The Gang of Evil
Chapter 15-The Mysterious Fighter:Tim is Connected? (Part 3)

Kyle: .....................

Tim: Kyle........I know what you're trying to accomplish. You want to kill me and finish what you started in our world, but I won't allow it. You've done enough of that before, and I think we should just part and forget about all this.

Kyle: Shut up Tim, I mean it!!!

Tim: Kyle......please, just go back home.

Kyle: .....................

Tim: .....................

Kyle: You.............

Tim: ...............

Kyle: (charges) SHUT UP!!!!!

(CLING)

Tim: I've warned you Kyle.......now we should fight.

Kyle: About time! Let's go!!!

(CLING)

(Tim jumps back and unsheathes his japanese sword)

Tim: ................

Kyle: What's wrong?! All silent now because you have to fight?!

Tim: .......................

Kyle: Hhmphhh........you're such a crybaby!!

Tim: (evil voice) Shove it!!!

Kyle: Uhhh........what the?!

Tim: You should be the sad one.......for your life will be taken today!

Kyle: Tim......now, now, you can stop now!!

Tim: Prepare.........Kyle!!!

Kyle: Aaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!

(Amanda's house)

Amanda: (waking up) Uhhh.......boy, what a dream. (looks at Alex sleeping) Hmmm...... (then to her bed) Uhh......Alex, Tim's gone!!!

Alex: ........................

Amanda: ALEX!!!!!!!

Alex: Uhhh.......what?!

Amanda: Tim is gone!!

Alex: What?! (looks at her bed) Oh no, he's probably in danger!!

Amanda: Let's go look for him!!

(The fight)

Kyle: Tim......what's wrong with you?!

Tim: Hm hm hm.....it seems you're the crybady now!

Kyle: Uh.......stop it!! You're scaring me!!

Tim: You said you wanted to fight me........SO LET'S GO!!!!! (charges)

Kyle: TIM, STOP!!!!!

(CLING)

(Kyle put's his sword up to block Tim's)

Tim: Finally.....you choose to fight! Now.......we shall begin!!!

(Tim pushes Kyle back then swings down but Kyle does a flip back to avoid it, then when he's standing again, Tim is charging fierciously with his sword extended out)

Kyle: Ahhh!!!!!!!!!

(Kyle swings his sword up so he can force Tim to raise his sword then he kicks him and sends him down to the ground)

Kyle: (himself, breathless) Damn, what's going on with him?!

Tim: (getting up) Heh....don't think you can take me down that easily!

Kyle: ......................

Tim: (standing now) Hmm.........what should I do now?!

Kyle: ...................

Tim: Should I use the Sword of Justice......or the Amakakeru Ryu No Hirameki?!

Kyle: (shaking in fear) Uhh............

Tim: ....................

Kyle: ..................

Tim: ...........Hmm! I think I'll use........the Hirameki!!

Kyle: (himself) Wh........what's he going to do?!

Tim: (sheathes sword) It's been nice knowing you.......Kyle Farris.

Kyle: No, please.......don't!!!

Tim: (charging) AAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!

Kyle: Aaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!

(CLING!!!!!)

Kyle: ........Uhh......

Tim: ........You.......

(Alex stopped Tim)

Alex: ...................

Tim: Alex, get the hell out of the way!!!

Alex: ............I won't.

Tim: Alex........I mean it, or I WILL kill you too!!!

Alex: Tim..........look at yourself.

Tim: Uhh.........

Alex: Look at what you have become.......You're just like he was.

Tim: Uhh........

Alex: Violence doesn't solve everything........You of all people should know that.

Tim: Alex........I........

Alex: ......Would Misao want you like this?

Tim: Uhh........

Alex: ............

Kyle: ..............

Tim: Mi.........Misao........

Alex: Choose another path except this, Tim......(smiles) and I'll bet, your journey to rescue Misao will succeed.

Tim: ..............

(Amanda catches up)

Amanda: Tim...........

(Tim notices Amanda)

Tim: Am.......Amanda........

Alex: So Tim......what do you choose?

Tim: ...............

Kyle: .................

Amanda: ..............

Alex: ...............

Tim: ..........I.........I'm going to go think. (sheathes sword) I'll be back in the morning. (walks off)

Alex: .......(sheathes sword) Let's hope you learned something from this.

Kyle: .......Yes, I have, and I'm sorry.

Alex: Don't apologize to me......Apoligize to Tim when you see him again.

Kyle: ........Right, I will.

(Tim by a riverbed)

Tim: ...........Misao, I hope you can forgive me for what I almost did today. I'm so sorry.....(crying). Please......forgive me.

(The wind blows)

Tim: (crying) ..............

(He then feels a hand on his shoulder)

Tim: Uhhh........(he looks) Mi.......sao?

Misao: Hey Tim.

Tim: ........(sniff)

(Tim put's his hand on Misao's)

Misao: .................

Tim: Want to sit down?

Misao: Yeah, I will.

(She does)

Tim: So.......is this a dream, or are you an illusion?

Misao: I'm here.......really. I'm just outside my body at the moment.

Tim: Outside your......Oh, I see. I remember seeing that on a cartoon before. This ninja was in quicksand, about to die, till he was taught how to travel outside his body.

Misao: (smiles) That's what's going on now.

Tim: ...........I just..........

Misao: What?

Tim: (starting to cry) I just...........

Misao: ..............

Tim: (suddenly hugs Misao, crying) I'm just glad I'm able to see you in person.

Misao: (hugs him too) Well.........you could say I'm here in person, but........(looks at Tim's face) Uhh.....yeah, I am.......I'm here in person......for you.

(We zoom out on them hugging)

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(The morning)

(Tim is waking up by the riverbed)

Tim: Uhh......boy, that felt good. (pause) Oh Misao......Misao?!........Huh? (Tim see's a small bag by him) What's this? (he opens it) Kunai's? There's also a letter. (he opens it)

Dear Tim,

I hope you had a good night's sleep. It felt good sleeping next to you again. Sorry I had to leave you again. I wish I didn't have to, but I'll have to wait till you come to Kyoto, when you come and rescue me as the proud fighter you are. For help on your journey, I left behind some of my kunai's, and also this letter that you're reading now. I hope both of these things makes you want to go on and gives you courage.....Well, I guess I'll leave you now. I pray that you will rescue me, and that we will go back to our normal lives........that I will. Hmm hmm hmm, sorry, I felt like I should liven your soul a little. Well, I guess I'll end this letter.....So long and good luck Tim. I love you so much.

From your beloved wife,

Misao Macimachi 🙂

Tim: .........Misao.

(He get's up)

Tim: I........love you too.

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(In front of Amanda's house)

(Alex, Amanda, and Kyle are standing outside)

Alex: Where could Tim be? He should've been back by now.

Amanda: I agree......Maybe he's taking A LOT of time to think.

Kyle: ......................

Alex: ............Uh, hey look!

Amanda and Kyle: Huh?

(Tim is walking towards them)

Alex: Tim!!! (runs too him) Tim?! Are you alright?!

Tim: Yeah.......I am.

Alex: That's good.

Amanda: (coming up to Tim) Welcome back, Tim.

Tim: Thanks Amanda, I'm glad to see you too.

Amanda: ...........(blushes)

(Then......Kyle walks up too Tim)

Kyle: Tim..........

Tim: What is it, Kyle?

Kyle: ............I...........

Tim: .....................

Kyle: ........I'm sorry.

Tim: .......(smiles) Me too.

Kyle: ........(extends hand)

Tim: Hmm........(shakes hands with him)

(Alex and Amanda are smiling)

(After about a minute, everything is going fine till.....)

????: Hmmphhh.......I didn't think you would betray us too.....Kyle.

Tim: Uhh.......who's there?!

????: Heh heh heh.......you shall die for that!!

Kyle: No.......who is it?!

(Silence for about 15 seconds till....)

????: (coming out from a corner) Aaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!

Kyle: Aaaahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tim: No........Kyle!!!

(SLASH)

Alex: Ahhh.....!!!!!!

Amanda: Ahhh....!!!!!!

Tim: Uhh.......KYLE!!!!!!!!!!

To be continued!!!!!!!!

Next time: Act finale!!!!!

kewl, kuanis! 😖tarts chucking them at my brothers: >D

Well, it's almost the end of the act and you know what that means!!!

BLOOPERS AND OUTTAKES!!!!! Some of these will be funny, and some won't. Well, here we go, from the beggining of the story. >.< Ohhh.....seems so long ago, huh? LOL, enjoy.

From season 1-act 1-chapter 2

Kaoru: Here you go Tim.
(Tim is given food)
Tim: Thanks. (takes a bite) Uhhh.....
Kaoru: What's wrong, Tim?
Tim: Well, this food.....it sucks!!!
Kaoru: UURRGHHHHHH!!!!!!!! (starts whapping Tim with a wooden sword)
That wasn't in the script you damn brat!!!!!
Tim: OAOAHAOAOHOAAO!!!!

Tim:And also, like I said, I know all of you because in my time, and or world, you are what we call a cartoon and we watch you do things like fighting and all that. For example, I remember an episode when Kenshin found an engagement ring in a catfish, right?
Kenshin: HUH?!!? You've been spying on me?! That's it, I'm going to go all Hirameki on your ass!!!
Tim: Whoa, Kenshin, calm down!!!

From chapter 3 of act 1

(All of a sudden, like before with Kenshin, we see Tim on the other side of Gohei and Gohei just standing there. His eyes are in back of his head with a shocked look on his face, then he falls to the ground.)

All:HUH?!!?

Tim:--(stunned)HOLY SHIT!!!!!
All: .......................
Tim: What? All I said was shit!

Well, that's all for now. I hope these made you laugh. LOL, they're funny, aren't they? Well, more in a while.

lol love the karou and kenshin ones!

????: Hhmphhh.......I didn't think you would betray us too......Kyle.

Tim: Uhh......who's there?!

????: Heh heh heh......you shall die for that!

Kyle: No......who is that?!

(Silence for about 10 seconds till.....)

????: (coming out from a corner) Aaaaahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!

Kyle: Aaaaahhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tim: No.......Kyle!!!!!!

(SLASH)

Alex: Ahhh......!!!!!

Amanda: Ahhh......!!!!!

Tim: Uhhh.......KYLE!!!!!!!

Act I: The Gang of Evil
Chapter 16-A New Task:Magnus' and Tim's Battle Continues

????: ...................

Tim: K........KYLE!!!!!! (runs too him and looks at the wound on his chest) No....Kyle, WAKE UP!!!!!

Kyle: .................

Tim: Uhhh.............

????: You want to be next.........battousai?

Tim: Magnus.........

Magnus: Aaaaahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!

(CLING)

(They hold it)

Tim: Magnus.......why did you do this?!

Magnus: He betrayed us........so I killed him.

Tim: You bastard.....!!!!!

(Tim pushes Magnus back)

Magnus: ..................

Amanda: Magnus!!!!!

Magnus: Nnghhh.........

(Amanda is running towards Magnus)

Amanda: Magnus!!!!!

Magnus: Goodbye, wench!!! (charges towards her)

Alex: Amanda!!!!!

Magnus: Eeeaahhhhh!!!!!!! (swings down but misses because Alex quickly grabs her and jumps out of the way)Uunnghhhh..........

(Alex is now on the ground with Amanda. Amanda is holding Alex tightly with her face in his chest, crying and Alex is holding her tightly)

Amanda: (crying) Alex........

Alex: Don't worry Amanda......I'll protect you.

Magnus: You.......(walking towards Alex and Amanda)

Alex: Stay away!!!

(Magnus is laughing evily)

Tim: HEY!!!!!

Magnus: .....Huh?! Uhh......!!!!!

(A kunai is flying towards Magnus' head)

Magnus: Huuahhhh!!!!!!!! (Magnus knocks it into the air with his sword)

Tim: .....................

Magnus: You will pay for that.......battousai!!

Tim: Good........just as long as you don't hurt Amanda or Alex! (unsheathes sword and points it towards him) Your fight is with me Magnus!! Let's finish what we started!!

Magnus: .......Heh, good deal! (charges) LET'S GO!!!!

Tim: ....................

(CLING)

Tim: Uurghhhh......

Magnus: Urghhhh.......

(They keep pushing against each other with their swords)

Tim: (himself) I can't believe what has happened to Magnus. The Chain Gang has really warped his mind. It's now my duty to bring him back to the way he was.

Magnus: (himself) Battousai the Manslayer........you're just like the old Himura the Battousai, but now you have taken the title! It's an honor fighting someone like you, and it will be an honor killing you too!!! (pushes against him then swings sword dwon quickly) DIE!!!!!!

Tim: Uhh.......ahh......

(SLASH)

(Tim get's a minor cut on his chest)

Alex: Tim!!!

Magnus: Heh heh heh....what's wrong battousai?! You trying not to kill me, just like you were trying to do with Kyle?!

Tim: .................

Magnus: Heh, so quiet, yet so DEADLY!!!!! (charges)

(CLING)

Tim: Magnus....what's happened to you?! Don't you know how worried Amanda and your family are?!

Magnus: Uhhh......SHUT UP!!!!!

(CLING!!!!!)

Magnus: It's none of your damn business, so stay out of it!!!

Tim: (sad face) .......It is my business.

Magnus: ................

Tim: The other day, Amanda was crying her heart out for you. She wanted back the brother she knew and loved. I then told her.....that I would help her out. She was happy to hear that she'll probably have you back. Now, I meet you again and you're more of a monster than before. It seems it might be too late to rescue you from the "demon."

Magnus: You're right about that! I've sworn my life to the Chain Gang!

Tim: You've forgotten the real reason you joined them, haven't you?

Magnus: There's no reason! I'm just a hired assassin, that's all!

Tim: Magnus.......do you remember your father?

Magnus: SHUT UP!!!!! (charges) Let's fight!!!

Tim: Fine! (holds sword in front of him) This shall be our final battle!!!

(Magnus swings sideways but Tim jumps back. Magnus does a straight-slash down and Tim moves to the right. Magnus then extends his sword and goes for a stab to Tim's face, but Tim moves to the right)

Tim: ................

Magnus: (himself) Dammit!!!

Alex: ...........Tim.

Amanda: (crying a little) Magnus.....why?

Tim: (himself) There's got to be a way to knock him out of this trance!

Magnus: (himself) Hhmphhh.......the battousai just won't quit, will he?!

(We zoom out on them)

And so, the battle to win back the brother Amanda knows and loves continues on. What will Tim do to win this battle or will Magnus do something that will trigger his lost memories? Stay tuned as Tim's journey against the Chain Gang......continues on.

CLIFFY! CURSES!!!!!>.<

From Act II:Chapter 1

Sano:How about I come with you? You might need help.
Tim:Why, so when we stop to eat, I'll be forced to pay your bills?! Forget about it, rooster head!!
Sano:You damn brat!!!
(BOOM)
Kaoru:Umm, Sano.....did you just use.....the Futae No Ke Wami.....on Tim?
Sano: ........Whoops.

Sano: Don't be an idiot! You might underestimate your own strength and DIE!!! We don't want that!
Tim: Oh yeah, well, how the hell do you think I reacted when I found out I have to do this?! Huh?! If this is my reason of being here, then so be it!! I'll die an honorable warrior if possible, so SHUT UP!!!

All: ALRIGHT, THAT'S IT!!!!!
Tim: Oh SHIT!!!!!
(BOOMBAMBINGBANGBOOM)
Kaoru: Lousy brat!!
Sano: Hey, I got to hit him twice in the same chapter!!
Kenshin: I should've went Hirameki on him before!!
Yahiko: Should I hit him when he's down?!
Kaoru: Sure!! Go right ahead, Yahiko!!
Yahiko: Cool!!!
(WHAP)
Tim: OWW!!!!!
(WHAP)
Tim: OWW!!!!!
(WHAPPPPPPPP)
Tim: OWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!

Okay, that's all for now. 🙂

LOL XD tim abuse!

Here's a look ahead at the upcoming act.

The evil of the Chain Gang is spreading.

Tim: Don't worry Misao....I'm coming.

Kenshin and the others are now involved in the fight.

Kenshin: It seems the Chain Gang's objectives are to take over the entire country.

And Tim still has 4 more members to fight, along with the assassin, Magnus.

Tim: Magnus, please!! Stop this!!!
Magnus: Shut up!!!!!

And also, a time limit has been set.

????:It doesn't matter now, battousai, because in 3 days, Kyoto will be burned to the ground!!
Tim: Uhh.....we won't make it in time!!

What is to become of Tim and the future of Japan?

Kenshin: We all have to rely on Tim to win this war, that we do.

Stay tuned for the premiere of act II, Tuesday. Only on KMC!!!!!

ooo...cant wait XD

Here's the premiere of act 2 everyone. Enjoy, for it'll go to act 3 which won't be for a few weeks, then after act 3, the events of this season will continue on to season 4, where a tragedy is about to happen. Stay tuned for all the details.......

(Tokyo, Present time)

(A group of men are standing at the entrance to the city)

????: ............Move out!!!

Men: Yes sir!!!

(The men go every which way into Tokyo)

Man: .........With Tim Ouellette the battousai out of the picture, this will be a piece of cake! Heh heh heh!!!

Act II: The Curse of the Gang
Chapter 17-Trouble in Tokyo:Beginning of the Curse

(The dojo)

(Everyone but Kenshin is sleeping. As everyone is, he's doing the laundry. It's quiet and peaceful for 5 minutes till a loud scream is heard.)

Woman: Aaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!

Kenshin: (himself) Huh?! What was that?!

(Everyone then wakes up)

Kaoru: Kenshin, what was that?!

Kenshin: Someone's probably in trouble! Sano, come with me!!

Sano: Alright!!

Yahiko: Wait!!

Kenshin: What is it, Yahiko?

Yahiko: Let me go with you!

Sano: Yahiko..........

Kenshin: Alright, you can, but stay by us, okay?

Yahiko: Got it!

Kenshin: Okay, let's go!!

(Kenshin, Sano, and Yahiko run off)

Kaoru: Be careful, you guys!!! (then to herself) I don't know what's going on with Tim, but please.....don't get hurt.

(We are then shown Kenshin, Sano, and Yahiko running down the street)

Sano: Where do you think the scream came from, Kenshin?!

Kenshin: Just a little farther!

Sano: Right!

Yahiko: .............

(They then run into a man with a mask over his face, but his eyes are showable.)

Kenshin: Uhhh.....who are you?!

Man: So.......you wish to get involved with the Chain Gang?!

Sano: You guys are......?!?!

Kenshin: ......the Chain Gang!! The same group Sir Tim is after!!

????: You guy's are pretty good, aren't you?! You're probably friends with the battousai!!

Kenshin: Why is it any of your business?!

????: We just wanted to tell you, our special assassin will be taking good care of him!! HAHAHA, there's no way he'll get to Kyoto!!!

Sano: ERRAAGGHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!

(BAM)-Sano punched ???? right in the chest. He collapses.

Sano: Hhmphhh.....loud mouth bastard!!

Kenshin: We have to hurry!! It seems like the Chain Gang's ambitions are to take over the entire country!!

Yahiko: What?!

Sano: But........what about Tim?!

Kenshin: Tim's fight is with the fake leader and the 8 members of the Chain Gang, also the assassin this man was talking about, and we have the no-gooders here and in other cities that are planned on being taken over!!

Sano: Then does that mean......?!

Kenshin: Yes.......we'll have to leave Tokyo too!

Yahiko: ..............

Sano: ..............

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(CLING)

Tim: Magnus, please, I beg of you, stop this!!

Magnus: SHUT UP!!!!!

(CLING)

Tim: ..........Magnus, have you ever got money for working with the Chain Gang yet?! They've been deceiving you!!!

Magnus: I mean it battousai, shut your damn mouth!!!

(CLANG)

Amanda: (crying) .........Why is he doing this?

Alex: Tim is right........the Chain Gang has definetely warped his mind and took him under his control! Nothing can bring him back now!

Amanda: No, you're wrong!!!

Alex: Uhhh..........

Amanda: I know he still has the real him in there, I know it!!!

(CLING!!! CLANG!!!)

Tim: ................

Magnus: That's it........I've had enough of this!! (get's ready for a batujutsu attack)

Tim: Magnus....it's no use.

Magnus: GOODBYE, BATTOUSAI!!!!! (charges) AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tim: This is the end.......Magnus. (get's ready for the Hirameki)

Magnus: AAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!

Tim: AAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!

(SLISH)
(SLASH)

Alex: .........!!!!!!

Amanda: ........!!!!!!

(Tim and Magnus are standing in place, with their swords extended out. Neither are moving A SINGLE MUSCLE)

Alex: What........happened?!

Amanda: ...................

Tim: ..............

Magnus: .................

(Then......)

Tim: Uhh.......(falls to the ground)

Alex: Tim!!!!!

Amanda: Uhh.....Magnus......

Magnus: Heh....!!!!!

Alex: I can't believe it.....he defeated the Hirameki!!!

Magnus: The battosuai was lucky that he dodged the worst of my batujutsu, and only got a wound on his face!!

Alex: His face.......?!

Tim: ...........Uhh.........(pushing down on the sword to push himself up) (evil voice) You........

Alex: ............AHH!!!!!! (Alex is stricken to see a.........cross-shaped scar on Tim's left face!!!!! He also see's that Tim is the battousai) Tim, don't!!!

Amanda: No, don't kill him!!! Please!!!

Tim: This has gone on long enough......You shall burn after I take your life!!

Amanda: Ahh........uhh......(get's up and runs)

Alex: Amanda, where are you going?!

Magnus: Lousy wench.....I'll take care of her later!!

Alex: Amanda..........

Tim: If you even THINK about touching her.......then I won't hesitate to cut you into many tiny pieces!!!

Magnus: Why don't you try........battousai the manslayer?!

Alex: (himself) Battosuai the manslayer........Yes, Tim has just become a legend before my very eyes!! It's so weird.....maybe Tim IS a reincarnation of Kenshin in a different body!!

To Be Continued

Next time-Birth of a Legend:Tim's Cunning Soul

You won't want to miss it!!!

ooo...now i must draw! XD