New Composition!

Started by Lara4 pages

New Composition!

This may not make sense but if you have any quiries ask me and I will reveal all. hope ya'll like it. BTW: I wrote this as well as the others, in fact I wrote this today!

Why?
You know it’s not fair!
You know it’s not right!
So why do we still insist to fight?
I don’t care,
If it’s the fault of some one else!
You shouldn’t have let it happen,
You should have told me the truth!
But you’re still seated in denial!
Oh! Struth!
God give me strength!
Why do you bestow this on me?
Is this your plan?
My history?
In this place, this time, this hour,
You’ve crossed me once!
Can you see the power?
Can you see the rage?
You won’t see me cower, in this day and age!
Can you see the rage? That hides in me!
The demonical blade!
The blade of death,
That has come to kill,
Come, this wont hurt!
But future relations will!
As the rage grows inside me,
It’s suddenly extinguished!
Finally you’ll see,
How much you’ve hurt me!
Can you see inside?
Inside my heart?
Theres only me!
In the dark!

not that I know much about poetry, but I thought it was good.

Interesting, BG....does this come from deep within ?

Originally posted by Gundark
Interesting, BG....does this come from deep within ?

the name is Lara, not BG 🙄

Written during PMS?

Ooops, sorry yerss.....sorry Lara.

Uh, my scroll went too fast. Yup, thats it. Not my fault.

IT'S NOT MY FAULT !!!!

i sense that Gundark is quite frightened at theis point

Hehehe. Just my best Lando impression.

Just my best Lando impression.
and the moustache 😄

No dont panic!
its cool Gundy, we all make mistakes some times.
no queeq it wasnt writen during PMS.
I'm just feeling a bit down lately thats all.
any one else got any thing to say?

any one else got any thing to say?

you bet ya, but sometimes it is better not let it pass 😄

hey! come on talk to me. I'm bored.
tell me whats on your mind!*note to self* I dont hink I should have said that! but never mind.*sigh*

right now I am thinking about how the clock can move faster. I am bored at work and the shitty weather is annoying

I thought you Gods with those metal helmets with horns liked bad weather... 😂

we only make it 😄

And give the rest of us frizzy hair... 🙄

😄 no vidal sasoon

Bad hair days. Bald guys never have that problem. *gets clown gun, goes hunting bald guys*

but look at the other problems bald guys have

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