New Composition!

you go hunting them, must be pretty tired of shampoo commercials. Wax aint to cool to bring to sleep overs ....

I never had a sleep-over with a bunch of bald guys.

ok guys heres another one which I was inspired to write by an emotional event that happened at school today.

Indescribable anger!
theres nothing like,
an indescribable rage!
nothing seems right,
not even my age!
the time,
the date,
the place I'm in,
all I can think about is whats within,
the anger,
the rage,
the page,
or the stage!
drama seems right for the mood I'm in,
to hurt some in frustration,
is the way out of my tempremetal distillation,
potent is my temper,
although now its worse than I remember,
but what incredable control I have over myself!
is that why I'm always left on the shelf?

sorry lara i cant b bothered to read it but i can guess wot it is about!!! ahhhhhh baby!

I still cant believe that she that to me though!
and all that over a lowsy smoke!

be a sport gund have a wax shower with a bunch of baldies

i no baby u shld have done it back!!! all ur sister is is a ponce!

Sorry finti - Gundy ain't that kind of sport.

Me no speak Brit teen talk..... 😕

it sure aint english

well you are talking complete and utter giberish!
lets get back to the literature thanks! 😉

her sister slapped her round the face and it upset her i was consoleing her!!

thanx for the consolidation BG..........................
........as I was saying, the literature?

kj isnt this great!! ive finished both my compositions!! i just need to upgrade them to get a higher mark!! and a new composition dosent have to be literature!!!

but the aim of the thread is english literature not music!
anyway I'm sure other people have something to say about my little writting spats!

English literature "Treasure Island" 😉

NO! finti, I meant Poems! MY POEMS!

first its called new compositions hich can mean anything then u say eng lit which can b any type of eng writing starting from the scrawl u and me r writing to olden day mythalogical childrens stories and now u say YOUR poems!!!!! change the thread name if thats wot u want it to be love!!

actually, BG, it's just a title so people will recognise it, it's actually the first post that has meaning...

but the title must be correct anyways🙂

and the title is correct: it's a new composition of Lara