The Official Symbiote Thread

Started by fever red240 pages

Nataku, that's an awesome idea- how would you do it? Accidental or willful? Alternative, past, or current continuity?
Definitely write it- or make a game plot of it- this is a killer concept.
Hmmm-
In the comics, the way the V-sym has acted recently, so callous to Brock, it's plausible that it would seek Kasady. It could ditch this Fortunado and get Kasady, (after all, F doesn't have cancer, Clete does!) and Brock would then pick up Red. NOW that's my kind of story. Marvel should hire you ASAP.
And change the book titles to Spectacular Symbiotes, Amazing Symbiotes, and...OK, I'm worse than Marvel in my own way... I'm plotting the Symbiote Saga, and it would be the most despised arch in Spidey history. (but some would love it!)

SCIBOTT, speaking of missing someone...
We're in agreement. It's all about who we'd miss- and CABOOSE/Robo, you'd be missed. I don't think you should be banned.

Paola, why don't you have him go to the off-topic forum, and start a thread in which he posts one hundred short essays, all along the theme of "I should not don costumes except on Halloween or in the event of acquiring super powers." Heh.

Bad S, what do you think of this mob-ling getting the V sym?

Hey, if you did it someday as a game plot, there could be four distinct charactors to roleplay: V-sym, Red, Kasady, and Brock. Interesting- challenging for two gamers to have to work in such close partnership/conflict when they have the "bonded" roles.

ohhi will i can be red honestly i can act sick and twisted if i want to i can be mean nasty and horrible

Originally posted by fever red
Nataku, that's an awesome idea- how would you do it? Accidental or willful? Alternative, past, or current continuity?
Definitely write it- or make a game plot of it- this is a killer concept.
Hmmm-
In the comics, the way the V-sym has acted recently, so callous to Brock, it's plausible that it would seek Kasady. It could ditch this Fortunado and get Kasady, (after all, F doesn't have cancer, Clete does!) and Brock would then pick up Red. NOW that's my kind of story. Marvel should hire you ASAP.
And change the book titles to Spectacular Symbiotes, Amazing Symbiotes, and...OK, I'm worse than Marvel in my own way... I'm plotting the Symbiote Saga, and it would be the most despised arch in Spidey history. (but some would love it!)

SCIBOTT, speaking of missing someone...
We're in agreement. It's all about who we'd miss- and CABOOSE/Robo, you'd be missed. I don't think you should be banned.

Paola, why don't you have him go to the off-topic forum, and start a thread in which he posts one hundred short essays, all along the theme of "I should not don costumes except on Halloween or in the event of acquiring super powers." Heh.

Bad S, what do you think of this mob-ling getting the V sym?

ditto for everything.

^ I got your confession and that's what I wanted.... you weren't banned before so it's no big-deal, worst could happen is that either your Robo or Caboose account get restricted, but not both no2

now which 1....hm.........

i know this has nothign to do with symbiotes but i need your guys opinion thsi is my fanfictin beginning it is a teen ttians crosover ok

Starfire let out a small sigh as she sat in her room her head in one of her hands looking up at the moon she hated this the silence the loneliness well she wasn’t alone to be exact but she might as well be with robin in one of his brood over slade moods again and raven was being distant again for some reason while beast boy and Cyborg were going on a road trip beast boy had intended to go by himself because of the recent death of terra but Cyborg wanted to follows they both went and now the teen titans were two members down

AT THE PIER

A truck slowed to a halt near a warehouse the water chopped roughly against the concrete sea wall the door of the truck opened slowly as a figure jumped out of the truck before walking around to the back of the truck the moon light shone on the figure for a breath moment showing him to be wearing a rubber like suit with a round helmet on it obscured most of his face he pulled up the thin sheet of metal that was the backdoor of the truck to the untrained eye the contents of the truck would simply be boxes of produce

You need to try a little thing called punctuation there, comrade. It's like one huge run on sentance that doesn't make sense.

FOX, a good sample of your style, but nobody can accomplish a lot in only 2 paragraphs. My point is, I don't have a whole lot to comment on...
Good work on the mood of it. The warehouse scene feels very tense; business-like, action-oriented.
Maybe a little adjustment with Starfire. Pretend readers aren't familiar with her (I'm not). What's her room like; does it or could it show some of her usual personality/interests? Also, before you leave her, why not establish her action; get her moving? It's hard for me to like her when she's just moping about- it doesn't show any positive qualities!
Koto's right- without punctuation, there is no pacing- every word rushes at you, and you read too quickly. I mentally placed the punctuation, but that's not as effective as having the author set the speed.
Hmmm. I don't want to encourage you to post a whole lot of non-sym work to this forum, you know. That's not because I don't like your work. It's just that I really don't want new people to drop in, look about, find nothing sym-related, and leave in confusion. I'd rather they stay to contribute their thoughts.
If you want to post a large amount more of this story, I suggest the comic book forums. Just announce it here and I will drop by to read it. I'm sure that most of us will.

My idea was... start along the 'dangerous minds' crossover time... and have someone blow up ravencroft. Venom knows Carnie survived and goes to check it out. He finds cassidy, dead. In a moment of weakness, his symbiote withdraws and he picks him up and goes to carry him out of the rubble to the grass.

From nowhere Red latches onto brock and fights V for control. Being the stronger symbiote, it boots V and takes over. Brock's urge to destroy spider-man is spread to every living person, and he goes on Jihad. Think a BIG ASS carnage.

Meanwhile, V latches onto cassidy to bring him back to the land of the insane. Now Cassidy's personality warps the venom symbiote and it learns it loves his ruthlessness more then Brock. The two go after brock who is chasing down Spidey.

Cameos from: Blade, Deadpool, Bullseye, Kingpin and more to be announced!

yah fox. everything fever said was true. YOu kinda just throw things in their like a blender. you need to explaing things better. add to backround, and help express character emotions.

I HAVE DECIDED. THE BIRD HAS RETURNED. farewell caboose...although we may be on other teams, and we may never see eachother again, you shall, and always*crying* will be..my friend.

Caboose: private donut......that sounds like private biscut

yes...it*sniff* does

WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU PPL, NOT GETTING A REPLY FOR 2 HOURS. I htought we all agreed we didnt have a life(well...except badsymbiote)

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stupid text formating i spent s lot of time shaping this

....hey the brazilian guy is back.

man he REAAAALLLY must not like venom. I myself am upset with marvel's direction with him/it, but I dont hate it, I am rather just sick of it.

I bet the text format must be totally crazy/cool/weird looking.

Oh, f~cking he!!, Nataku, I would comment on the story but your sig has neutralized my final neurons...
I have to go make new ones. Luckily, science has recently shown that the brain does produce new cells (very, very slowly). Golly, just think! If I hadn't read that study, I wouldn't know that I could do it, and then where would I be?
OK, that should do me- I've got about a handful to work with now. My razor intellect informs me that Brock would be likely to stone the body. No, seriously, he'd pour gasoline on it.
That's only him. As for me...ahhh, as for me...
Well, I think that sig has done all the damage this thread can sustain in one night. I won't pile on.
I love the thought. The set-up and concept rock. They have powerful draw; I do believe the tectonic plates have shifted towards your plot bunny's lair. (Here I picture something like the the killer rabbit of Monty Python fame.) I say, go as dark as you want. For my tastes, fan fic can't be too honest; it should allow the charactors to act as they don't in comics- sensibly, no matter how much hardness that involves, and appropriately to their nature, no matter how disturbing this makes the action.
Brock, he's a heroic figure in most respects, but he's a vigilante killer, too. Kasady's filth to him. And Kasady TORTURED Brock. Nataku, wouldn't you be HAPPY to look at the corpse of a man who burned and cut you in chains?
Well, if you like that sort of thing, then no, obviously not, but I don't think Brock was finding his freedom in bondage, exactly.
I can't get with the tenderness, but hey, it's your Brock. I am SO there for the hatred and the twisted identities and the sym/host power struggles and Brock's anguish in his moments of clarity and all the rest of the classic symbiotic disorder.
And I'm anticipating your take on Red. I have the impression that your Red is less passive than mine, a lot more fiendish. There's a lot in canon to support that interp, especially if you work in later canon. Now, when and what was "Dangerous Minds..." Sounds like something GOOD!
Oh, and the happy ending. There's a happy ending, right? I love happy endings.

Originally posted by Nataku8188
My idea was... start along the 'dangerous minds' crossover time... and have someone blow up ravencroft. Venom knows Carnie survived and goes to check it out. He finds cassidy, dead. In a moment of weakness, his symbiote withdraws and he picks him up and goes to carry him out of the rubble to the grass.

From nowhere Red latches onto brock and fights V for control. Being the stronger symbiote, it boots V and takes over. Brock's urge to destroy spider-man is spread to every living person, and he goes on Jihad. Think a BIG ASS carnage.

Meanwhile, V latches onto cassidy to bring him back to the land of the insane. Now Cassidy's personality warps the venom symbiote and it learns it loves his ruthlessness more then Brock. The two go after brock who is chasing down Spidey.

Cameos from: Blade, Deadpool, Bullseye, Kingpin and more to be announced!

AHH YOUR SIG!! IT BURNS MY EYES!!! LIKE THE HARSH GLOW OF A NUCLEAR BOMB!!

Yeah, Nataku-- the idea for your story is intriguing, but I do hope you opt to leave the masked-wrestling anal-sex angle out of the story--it just seems superfluous.

RJ--I haven't seen you demonstrate this level of maniacal and irrational hatred toward Venom since the days you and I engaged in our "disagreements" in May.
So what you're saying is you love Venom, right? Or something to that effect...yeah, me too.

ah yes, I keep forgetting to comment on your MXC sig...gosh I love that show.

yes, Spiderman_RJ truly is putting the F.U. in Fun.

I hate the character venom....he's so bland now. I do like the symbiote however.....TAKE IT AWAY CAPTAIN ANTINIEL

yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay brains i just revised my story nwo it is tester tiem be honest ok

Starfire let out a small sigh as she sat in her room her head in one of her hands looking up at the moon. She hated this, the silence the loneliness, well she wasn’t alone to be exact but she might as well be, with robin in one of his brood-over-slade moods again and raven was being distant for some reason things were very quiet . Adding into that the factor of beast boy and Cyborg going on a road trip, beast boy had intended to go by himself because of the recent death of terra but Cyborg wanted to follow, they both went and now the teen titans were two members down.

AT THE PIER

A truck slowed to a halt near warehouse 35, the waters chopped roughly against the concrete sea wall as the door of the truck opened slowly. A figure jumped out of the truck looking around for a few seconds to check if anyone was around, satisfied that the surrounding area was empty he let out a breath of relief before walking around to the back of the truck , the moon light shone on the figure for a breath moment showing him to be wearing a rubber like suit with a round helmet, the helmet obscured most of his face. With a sight grunt he pulled up the thin sheet of metal that was the backdoor of the truck, to the untrained eye the contents of the truck would simply be boxes of produce but to this almost military like figure it was simply a distraction he rapped his knuckles onto the boxes for a few seconds before getting a answer in the form of two taps back the figure then waited as the boxes were pulled back .

The boxes slid sideways to reveal four more men sitting on small benches all four of them had their eyes trained on a computer sized box with a key swipe lock the final man who had pulled back the box finally spoke up.

Can we unload this now said the rubber suited figure his voice gravely and had a hint of fear in it .

Why replied the driver whose tired voice had a streak of annoyance running through it .

Well I hear that theirs a guyver after these said the opener as he pointed to the box as soon as the word guyver was spoken everyone broke into whisper .
There is no guyver after us said the driver trying to calm the rest down he put his hands in a reassuring manner before a white armoured fist smashed it’s way through his chest he tried to scream but all that came out was a gargle as the fist withdrew he slumped to the floor .

The five men started panicking and scrabbled for their weapons behind them a thin red laser shot through another piece of the truck almost like butter before it went straight through another mans head blood spurting everywhere .