The Official Symbiote Thread

Started by grey fox240 pages

fever bad s do you guys mind if you two are super heroines in my latest fictional story it is perhaps one of my best writings yet it is based in the spider girl universe although spider girl has only been around for a few months so she is still mistaken for her father two new heroines are here though they are the symbiotic off spring of their father the heroic symbiote toxin ( who i may have a small flashback as he has a stand off taking Cletus with him although it wont be the end of carnage though!) fever and bad their first major bad guy type opponent my character known only as the darkness

who is the mysterious darkness will fever spider girl and bad all live and will carnage ever return to finish his vow of revenge wait and watch true believers

I refuse to read any of your posts--therefore i hate you. Use punctuation.

GRAAHHHHH!!!! THE BEAST HAS BEEN RELEASED.

Grey Fox, TAKE THE STAND AND YOU SHALL AWAIT JUDGMENT.
THE CLAW SPARES NONE. Grey Fox, YOU HAVE BEEN CHARGED WITH CRIMES AGAINST HUMANITY. THE WEAPON USED TO COMMIT THIS HIDEOUS ACT IS THE KEYBOARD. YOUR GRAMMATICAL ERRORS ARE DRIVING ME INTO A TWISTED FURY!!

ALL SHALL REMEMBER THE DAY WHEN THE BEAST WAS AWOKEN BY GREY FOX!!

I SHALL NOW BE KNOWN AS THE BEAST. FEAR THINE SMITING CLAW.

GREY FOX, THIS IS YOUR SECOND OFFENSE. YOUR 2ND STRIKE. 3 STRIKES AND YOUR OUT.

I SHALL ALLOW THE POSTING OF FANFICTION IN THE LAIR .

GREY FOX, YOU MUST BEGIN TO SPELL CHECK, AND CEASE USING RUN ON SENTANCES, OR I " THE BEAST " SHALL DO SOMETHING [B]REEEAAAALLLLYYY BAD.

THE BEAST HATH SPOKEN.[/B]

What's with that cave where the Boss' desk used to be?
Grey Fox, I think this sounds like a fine fic; a good amount of charactors, all strongly linked by a shared past. You can use the name Fever for one of your symbiotes; I'd be honored. Make her tough and wicked. Don't try to write me in as the human host; however; you don't know me well enough for that. You'll have to come up with someone fictional.

Ooookay...and this is when I leave this forum forever.

Seriously, I'm leaving. You can still catch me at my elfwood gallery though.

Later

Koto K

AWESOME! Everyone wins!

I come back to another completely random post by Grey. Grey, if you really want to write, pick up an rp site; www.urfo2.com. You can post all you want and you get to play a game too! That's how I learned to write. :-D

I want more feedback on the first part of Carnage 2089, thanks Scibott and Fever. I was trying to make it like Fever said, more of a lead in so they could understand nano-technology on a basic level and to help show the state america is in. Note also the second half, read it carefully. I'm aiming to send multiple messages with this one.

I think I might submit this to marvel when I'm done, if it turns out how I want it to.

Marvel should, but won't, consider the story-as I understand it, they let NO unknowns play with major charactors. You once said you were a writer/publisher, and therefore superior to most people on earth- well, you're a superior source of Carnage stories, compared to Marvel.

Jesum Crowe, just let Badsymbiote freak out on him...it's humorous AND erotic!

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Oh, you can just go to hell. By the way, I just saw Saw (the movie) and I have been completely traumatized.

THE BEAST...IGNORED!? DO...NOT ..COMPUTE......AHHHHH THE BEAST SHALL NOT BE IGNORED

Saw rocked my pants off. I ****in love that movie.

Well.....I can say Badsymbiote is good people...other wise I have no clue whats going on in KMC anymore...

later

Errr...yeah, Saw raped my mind.

There was just so much wrong--I about crapped my pants thinking that the poor chick was going to lose her mouth. And then when the guy came in on that bicycle? Freaky! Then there was the burning to death and the cuts all over the body and cutting of the foot...wrong!

However, I am wondering what happened to the poor bastard at the end. So Lawrence goes to get help...then what? So the corpse gets up and walks away, shutting off the lights...so? The key to the chains is in the bathtub...does the guy die? Or what?

By the way, the twist at the end was excellent. I would never have expected it.

Originally posted by Sarsaparilla
I refuse to read any of your posts--therefore i hate you. Use punctuation.

What do you mean no punctuation rocks And it rocks hard I never use any myself and this is because I am the Queen of the Universe so I don't have to ever I said not ever never never plus punctuation is a sign of someone who is not very smart because using it shows you are willing to be fenced in by other peoples rules and that is always bad Also big blocks of text with no indentations are just the latest thing it makes everything you write incredibly easy to read as you can see here and do not ask me to use a spellchecker because The Spice Must Flow and I aint talking about the Spice Girls neither does this make sense of course it does

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Damn stragith, I pity the fools who dont like my new sig

THE BEAST HAS AWAKENED. THE BEAST PITY'S THE FOOLS WHO DARE COMPARE THEMSELVES TO THE BEAST. GREY FOX, DO NOT TAUNT OR MOCK THE BEAST, FOR IT IS YOUR SECOND STRIKE, WHICH IS 2 STRIKES, OUT OF 3 WHICH BY USING BAD PUNCTUATION A THIRD TIME WOULD BE YOUR THIRD STRIKE, WHICH WOULD MEAN ETERNAL BANISHMENT. FEAR THE CLAW .

Originally posted by VENOMfan
Well.....I can say Badsymbiote is good people...other wise I have no clue whats going on in KMC anymore...

later

come back! weep

Originally posted by grey fox
Damn stragith, I pity the fools who dont like my new sig

Who the hell do you think you are, Mr. T?

Pfft.

I'll get red to cut your sig up like a monkey in a pirahna tank.

In the words of veiwtiful joe 'lets get it on' *pulls out scythe of pain*.

Originally posted by Paola
come back! weep

Yo, I second that emotion, sister.

But, Red was right. You guys are like co-workers. And as such, I will treat you as my own.
So expect my assistance whenever you ask for it, my support when you need it, and my anger when you deserve it.

There were a ton of posts since my last visit, so here are my replies to everyone's posts--these (much like many of the posts) are completely random and in no particular order.

Fox--Red has already given you the OK to feature her in your story. Of course, you can add me too. All I ask is that you make my character complex and unpredictable, and she has to be funny, too. Ya think you can do me justice? We shall see...

Mane--somewhere in here you mentioned that you weren't funny. That is simply not true. Anyone who makes me chuckle audibly is categorically humorous. Got it?

Nataku--I liked your story. I think that futuristic visions would be the most difficult to write. There is no research that can help, and nothing can really validate the content of your story but the ability with which it is written. Plus, you have to rely on the ability of the reader to process and understand it. You want to give the reader enough to think about, and enough info to comprehend what's happening, but you can't give them too much at once or it seems superfluous and/or pretentious.
Personally, I like a story that requires a bit of cogitation. I liked the Nano-stuff, and the explanantion of the evolution of the human work force, as well as the natural dialogue. I would like to see more.

I also agree with Red about Marvel--they likely wouldn't accept it--or worse, would take lock you in some contract and alter or otherwise compromise your work.

Originally posted by FeceMan
Jesum Crowe, just let Badsymbiote freak out on him...it's humorous AND erotic!

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Oh, you can just go to hell. By the way, I just saw Saw (the movie) and I have been completely traumatized.

Hmm? Who exactly am I supposed to freak out on? I read all of this, but it's just entirely too much to keep track of.

"SO WE HAVE DECIDED THAT IT IS YOU WHO SHALL FALL VICTIM TO OUR EROTIC HUMOR. JUST LET US KNOW WHEN YOU WANT IT..."

Oh, yeah, and what's up with you trying to spoil "Saw" for me?!? No, just kidding. That won't deter me--in fact, I think I want to see it more now.

Symbiotica--I liked your gigantic run-on sentence. It was funny, but still too coherent. You're not that good at writing badly, but don't give up.