Harry Potter and the Green-Flame Torch

Started by jennyanderson21 pages

The whole manor of Little Hangleton was dark, except for a tiny flicker of light coming from the upstairs drawing room. Not that it mattered-the whole house was unplotable, if any one even looks at it, all they will see is a run down old house, even if people enters it, they will find all the rooms empty even if the Death Eaters were having a rowdy party.
Right now about twenty wizards were sitting in front of the fireplace. All of them were sporting severe injuries; some of them were burnt badly, some of them had broken arms or legs or both and all of them were exhausted. All the Death Eaters that Voldemort had sent to capture the slave seemed to have come back alive.
‘Well, where is it?’ He asked impatiently, sitting in front of them all in an armchair. Standing on either side of him were Wormtail and Bellatrix
‘We did it my lord!’ gasped Lucius Malfoy.
‘Well, where is it then?’ Voldemort asked again, this time dangerously softly.
‘We captured it in this.’ Antonin Dolohov piped up scuttling forward and presenting Voldemort with a small wooden box. The Dark Lord’s lips curled. He took the box from his henchman, and with slightly shaking hands threw back the lid.
Instantly a swirl of red blast issued from the box. It spun round and round before taking its true form-a seven-foot monster with gruesome scaly skin, the ten fingers in its hands ended in a claw. Its face was that of a mutilated goblin, it had two pointy ears and thin white hairs that fell to its shoulder. Right now its eyes were closed and two of its massive arms were crossed across its chest. Just one look at it and everyone knew that it was made for the sole purpose of destruction alone.
‘Impressive,’ said Lord Voldemort in a throaty voice. ‘How long did it take for you to make it?’
‘About a day of the Torch dimension my lord.’ Said Malfoy. ‘His friends were a bit protective of him and kept coming back with more troops, that’s how we got all these injuries.’
Voldemort ignored this and addressed Dolohov instead. ‘What do you call him?’ he asked.
‘Evals, my lord.’ He said shakily.
‘Evals…’ muttered Voldemort softly to himself then he turned to Malfoy again. ‘I see that you have used the essence that I gave you well.’
‘Yes my lord.’
‘Hmm, I remember gathering it on my transformation in the Pyramids.’
‘The Pyramids, my lord?’
‘Yes, the Pyramids of Fulmat. That’s where I got the essence of the High Priest from.’
‘But I thought no one ever knows the locations of the Pyramids, my lord.’
‘I’m not a no one Malfoy.’ Voldemort said in icy coldness. Whatever blood Malfoy had in his face vanished.
‘I’m so sorry, my lord!’ he gasped. ‘Of course you’re not a no body! How could you be! You’re the greatest Dark Lord there ever is! You’re-’ another icy look from Voldemort shut him up.
‘I had found and opened the Chamber of Secrets in my youth. Do you think that I wouldn’t have been able to find the Pyramids in my adulthood?’ he said harshly.
‘Of course not-’
Voldemort ignored him again and resumed his story. ‘It seems as if Genevere had indeed killed the High Priest in the end and had buried his body just outside of the Pyramids.
‘Who is Genevere, my lord?’
‘She was Prince Fulmat’s half sister-a powerful warrior in those olden times. She was named after her mother who was the wife of King Arthur. She and her brother were close; she was two years younger than he was and in charge of his safety.
‘It seems as if the Prince was already suspicious of the High Priest and had told his sister that if anything had happened to him, the Priest was to be blamed. And he was right.’
There was a silence for a long time before Wormtail voiced out what was in everybody’s mind.
‘My lord, this, this Evals, how can it be destroyed?’ He blurted out.
Voldemort considered him for a moment. Wormtail was looking as if the Dark Lord would put the Cruciatus Curse on him, but apparently it was his lucky day for Voldemort did nothing but answer his question.
‘The Evals is made from the High Priests essence after all, making him his descendant, the only way he could be destroyed is if Prince Fulmat himself or his sister comes and destroys him.’
‘But that’s impossible, my lord. They’ve both been dead for more than a thousand years, my lord.’
‘Not anymore!’ Voldemort hissed through his teeth. ‘The Prince vowed to come back and destroy the High Priests last descendant, and it seems as if he also wished for his sister to be reincarnated with him! If they get any close to Evals we are doomed and we have to find another path to take over the Wizarding world!’
‘But how could the Prince wish for such a thing, isn’t it impossible to grant…and besides, who could grant it?’ asked Rockwood.
‘Ancient magic!’ spat Voldemort. ‘The brat was an apprentice of Ancient magic. Before I use to think that that magic was all rubbish! But now it turns out as if I had been mistaken all along! Who ever thought that extreme patience, endurance and love was the basic of all magic! That branch of the magic was so useless that people had abandoned it and turned to the present days magic instead. Now it turns out as if the Ancient Magic was really powerful! Why does everything bad has to happen to me!’ Voldemort stopped for a moment to regain his composure, then said really calmly, ‘We must do all we can so that the reincarnated brother and sister never find their way to Evals. We have to find them first and kill them.’
Silence fell once again before Bellatrix Lestrange voiced out what was on everybody’s mind.
‘But how do we know who they are, my lord?’
*

‘Ron and me!’ Ginny yelled. ‘We are the ones that you have been looking for!’
‘What?’
‘Yeah we are, Harry!’
Harry frowned at her. ‘I don’t know what on earth you’re talking about.’
‘Isn’t it obvious Harry?’ she asked slowly. ‘Fred and George are gone, Ron and me are the only one’s that are left at school. Well, of course unless you count Bill, but you cant count him. I mean I know that he is always helping you about stuff but the fact remains that he is a teacher and obviously cant be around with you all the time (Harry continued to frown at her). What I mean is, you can count on Ron and me for cheering you up at school.’
‘I don’t know why you’d think that I would need cheering up at school.’ Harry said turning back to feed Hedwig.
Ginny ventured to shake her head sympathetically when he wasn’t looking.
‘Harry I know that you’re going to miss Sirius very much when we get back to school,’ she said soothingly, ‘I don’t blame you. Even I miss him. It’s very hard not to miss him. How can you not? He is so full of life; he is so cool, so full of fun and so full of encouragement. My days with Sirius are just as blissful as yours. I know that you’ve got one of those two-way mirrors, but I know that distance matters to a lot of people.’
Harry finally stopped forcing bird treats down Hedwig’s throat and turned towards Ginny who was looking a bit nervous. He gave her a weak smile to assure her that everything was all right.
‘It’s all right.’ He said. ‘I know that I’ve been a bit grumpy lately and yes part of it is because I’ll be shortly leaving him again, as you said but there is something else.’
Ginny’s expression cleared. ‘What is it?’ she asked eagerly.
‘Well it’s just…well you know how I was having those training sessions with Torch?’
‘You are still having them aren’t you?’ she asked alarmed.
‘Of course I’m still having them. It’s just, well, it’s been four months and I’ve made great progress, but that’s where this entire problem begins. I feel like I’ve got these great powers in my fist but I feel empty…I dunno why but for some reason I feel like I should make good use of my power, I feel like maybe I should go out there and help each and every people out of their misery. You know what I mean?’ he asked desperately.
Ginny was listening intently the whole time. Now that Harry finished, she felt like making all of his problems disappear, but there was just one problem, she wasn’t a great shake in emotions and feelings like Hermione was. So she took a deep breath and made a head start, at first she wasn’t even sure of anything herself, but soon the flow took over and she was talking like a pro.
‘Harry it’s only natural that you should have these feelings. You have extraordinary powers that no body has. You were feeling superior to everyone before, but soon those feelings vanished and now you just think people are all helpless because they don’t have the same amount of power as you have. But that’s not true. We are all capable of doing the best for ourselves; you don’t need to be Spiderman or X-Men, Harry. They are just some made up characters, and besides look at them, they can’t even make the ends meet, they are always jumping from one problem to another and they still don’t get any good recognition-not that it matters to you I know that you are already famous beyond anything, but the fact still remains-you can’t help everyone, Harry. But don’t worry about it,’ she added smiling ‘I know for a fact that you want to become an Auror when you grow up. You can help lots of people then. You can help rebuild our community, I can already sense that we are heading for a war very soon, and I can also sense that we are going to win Harry! And beside after the war, catching Dark Wizards will be a thing of the past; our main problem would then be how to rebuild our community, which will be very shaky after the war. And you will be very precious to us, Harry.’ Suddenly she looked very seriously at him. ‘I’ve seen you in our DA club Harry, and you always acted like a true leader, going around and seeing that everyone was doing ok and that no one was behind. You always had a solution to every problem, even Hermione admitted that you were better than her at pulling out amazing solutions in a matter of seconds.’ She smiled at him again. ‘I always use to admire you Harry, but now I realized that I was doing it for the completely wrong reasons. Now I know that you are a completely dependable person no matter how quick-tempered you could be at times, always preferring to be known as the lonely, complicated boy who no one ever understood.’
Harry studied her eyes and realized that they were twinkling, he couldn’t help it, he burst out laughing. They both knew that he had spent all of his life at Hogwarts trying to save other people’s life.
‘You are really complicated Harry.’ She said finally recovering. ‘Hermione was right- only Ron knows you’re mood.’
‘He does, doesn’t he?’ he said, his eyes twinkling.
‘Yes. And guess what, I know that I am no where as near as you, but I would also like to become an Auror when I grow up and help you guys.’
Harry examined her closely. ‘So you’ve decided to become an Auror as well, huh?’
‘Yup!’ she said cheerfully. Then she looked at him seriously, ‘You know Harry, all those times you saved people’s life and they always thought that you were some kind of hero, which wasn’t surprising. And last year, that little incident at the Ministry of Magic-it brought me to the lime light for the first time and our name was all over the newspaper.’ She gulped then plunged on. ‘At first I didn’t think anything about it because I was still grieving about Sirius. And then when he was back safely with us, only then did I begin to realize all the ups that that publicity brought on me. And…I know that I’m not the sort of person who wants to hog the spot light, but all those people who came to me and told me about how because of me they know that You-Know-Who is back again and how I was a part of a group who made the dangers known…Harry, it was awesome, the look on their face says it that I am some sort of saviour, and I want to be that for the rest of my life-I want to dedicate my life for that!’
Harry was touched by what she had said; he didn’t know how to respond. ‘Ginny, I don’t know what to say,’ he said finally, ‘why is it that you’re the only other person who knows how to make me feel better? Why is it that you’re the only person who knows how to light the beacon of hope in my life?’
She winked at him. ‘It’s because I am you’re best friends little sister! If I’m not nice, then who else is going to be?’
Harry laughed. ‘You’re the only woman in life who knows what mood I’m in and how to react, well apart from Torch that is. You’re like-like-’
‘A female version of Ron?’ she added softly.
‘Yes!’ Harry said breathlessly.
She smiled. ‘Don’t let mom hear it though.’ She said. ‘She is really fond of you and would be really crossed if she hears that you have placed me in a more high estimation than her.’
‘You and you’re brother are so alike sometimes.’
‘Yeah we are. But we do have some differences though.’
‘Minor differences that could easily be ignored.’
‘Yeah I do admit that sometimes we are so similar that if the world was just based on feelings than looks then people would’ve mistaken one of us for the other.’ She said shaking her head.
‘Yeah…like the way you both get uncharacteristically shy when you’re in front of the person you love. I can still remember the first time I saw you, you bolted right out of the room, and you were so shy that you hardly ever talked in front of me-and it continued all the way until your fourth year.’ He said expecting Ginny to deny or ignore it, but what he hadn’t expected was for her to actually admit it.
‘Yeah I was, wasn’t I?’ she said shaking her head and smiling. ‘I’m so sorry for all the moment that I caused you embarrassments, believe me Harry, I’m really repenting it right now.’
Harry was so much taken aback with her response that he stared at her for a few moments before saying breathlessly ‘Ginny, you’ve got the right makes of a leader, do you know that-admitting your faults like that, people rarely do that!’
‘You think so?’ Ginny asked looking at him to see that he wasn’t joking. ‘Do you really think that I could be a leader-a great leader just like you one day?’
‘I don’t know anything about me being a great leader, but I can just tell that you are going to be one fabulous leader one day.’
‘You’re the best Harry!’ she said in a whoosh of joy and grabbed him on his two arms and spun him around. Then she stopped and looked at him shyly. ‘Don’t tell anyone about this, specially Ron and the twins-their going to laugh themselves silly.’ She said.
‘I wont.’ He promised.
She smiled and gave him one quick, sly kiss in the cheek before dashing out of his room in ecstasy, living only Hedwig for his company.
*

great story jennyanderson. when are you going to write the next part? I also like the fact about how you've kept Harry single for so long, now people dont get any ideas but am i the only one who feels there is a sexual tension whenever harry and Ginny are together?

its not just you Oracle 33 but even i can feel the tension between Harry and Ginny. Great story plot jen, i love it!

I read over it quickly and it seems really good, don't worry about fvJ aka Blackc@t, your story has a few strong parts but im sure us teenages can move past that!! Keep it up!!

Good story. You haven't posted in a long time, jenny.

Thought it was "Furmat", not "Fulmat". Or it's probably just me.

Yea I noticed that as well, Has she given up??

Guys I havent given up. So sorry for the delay but my life is just going through some rough patch at the moment (I will get specific in a few days). But dont worry, I will post the next part of the story in the coming week.
Talking about stories, I was just going through this story a few days ago and to my disgust I realised that it contained a lot of mistakes that gave people a very different concept compared to the one that I want, so I have decided to revise it. Now I wasnt sure if I should have posted the revised edition in this forum cause there was a possibility that the mod might have closed it, so I posted it in mugglenet. To get to the story, go to : www.mugglenet.com click the author icon on the left, select the letter B category, go to page 3, click on the name Bijli and wala, there you have it : "Harry Potter and the Green Flame Torch". I hope yo like the revised edition, also it has some new features in it like chapter name and synopsis of the chapter. Now, i will continue the stories in both the sites fir the convenience of the readers.
And if you guys are having problems getting connected to the story in mugglenet then dont fear cause I will post the link in a few days aswell, you see my computer was destroyed by some freak accident so i had to use the computer in the library which does not allow me access to the copy tool as a result i am not able to paste the web address in the link thingy. Anyway, I hope you guys are all ok and goodbye! :-)

Can't wait, And i can't find the author icon!! 😉

neither could I. very good story, i love the detail in it.

I have found it!! If anyone wants me to give you the direct link, just give me a shout!

SPIDER! I"M SHOUTING! hehehe

right, i'll go find it now!! 🙄

http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/viewstory.php?sid=4624

I think thats it 😉

thankyou much 😊 🐰

keep them coming jenny its good its a good spoof i guess you would say. and don't let any one get to you its good. good luck with your classes. i had senior-itis when i was in 12th grade so it kinda sucked but it was fun cuz all i did is be a class clown. but thats what i always did so whatever works kudos for the story.

Hey guys its me! How are you all! I really apologize that I had been so slack this past weeks and to make you cheerful, I will now add the next part of the story, and guys brace yourself for this week cause I will be posting again the next part of the story very soon. And spiedergrl, you are one tenacious babe, I gather that you are really patient to have followed all my instructions and find the link and yes, you’ve got the good makes of a leader did you know that? Persons with a lot of determination and patience succeed in their life!
And now ladies and gentleman, the moment we’ve all been waiting for-THE NEXT PART OF THE STORY…

The next day there was a huge article at the front of the Daily Prophet, in bold red letters the headline proclaimed: THE WIZARDING WORLD UNDER ATTACK; YOU-KNOW-WHO HAS UNLEASHED HIS MOST DEADLIEST SERVANT EVER.
It was accompanied by a picture of a seven foot tall monster attacking a wizarding home. The house was all wrecked and in the middle of it all stood Evals who was holding none other than ex-minister for magic Fudge by the throat.
Harry stared aghast at the picture; his eyes were huge and filled with horror while Sirius quoted from another piece of the copy.
‘Fudge’s wife and two kids killed, Fudge himself suffered from several hours of agony before succumbing to death, two of his servants also killed…only his permanent house guest Percy Weasly seemed to have survived the attack-’
‘What!’ Ron roared, he and his sister weren’t giving a single hoot about how Fudge had suffered as if they thought he deserved it but now they were shocked.
‘Your brother seemed to be the only one who seemed to have survived.’ Said Sirius ‘Nothing fishy about that one because he lost a lot of blood and the monster was about to finish him off the moment thirty of the Aurors arrived and distracted it.’
Harry felt confused, Percy whom he thought was his friend had turned against him last year and now…he didn’t know what to feel and by the look he stole from Ron and Ginny he knew that they didn’t know how to react either.
‘Percy’s half dead.’ Sirius continued ‘His parents went to see him last night along with Moody; they were all attacked last night sometime around half past seven. The Death Eaters left the Dark Mark after the creature had finished its job.’ He said quietly.
‘Why did they attack Fudge and his family?’ Harry asked, they had just had breakfast when Sirius emerged from his room and had announced in a solemn voice what had happened the previous night.
‘There are a lot of reasons,’ he now said ‘first of all Fudge is widely hated which is why the ministry hadn’t bothered to give him too much protection making him an easier target. Second of all hated though he was his death would bring a lot of attention, third of all, Voldemort had wanted to display his new pet, and fourth of all, he wanted people to fear him.’
‘Did he succeed?’ Ron asked.
Sirius hesitated ‘Yes.’ He said finally and checked the paper again. ‘The Death Eaters went screaming around saying:“The Evals is here, the mighty servant of Lord Voldemort! Fear will now strike upon you!” This Evals, it injured all of the Aurors none of whom could even put a scratch on it-it seems virtually indestructible. It was attacking Percy when the Aurors arrived. It seemed as if the Death Eaters really just wanted to make a show. They fired the Death Mark when everybody was down and fled.’
‘Why would Voldemort want his misdeeds to be known? Isn’t that a bad thing for him?’ Ginny asked puzzled.
Sirius considered them wearily for a while before deciding to let them in on Voldemorts motive. ‘Voldemort is not an opposition leader, he is not looking to win any popularity contest, he doesn’t want to get into power by peoples vote and then care for them. He wants to come into power by force and establish dictatorship and take away peoples freedom. He wants to ban ancient magic which is the heart of all magic, he wants take over everything so that he could rule all over the world and breed dangerous creature-creatures of his likings. He wants to kill all muggles and half blood wizards, he is a fool, what he doesn’t realize is if he killed all the muggles then there wont be any balance left between us and them, it will be a total chaos, no body knows what may happen, it could very well be the end of the whole universe which is linked in a chain-if one contact breaks, the whole thing crumbles down!’ Sirius heaved a deep sigh. ‘Why do you think so many people are afraid of even calling him by his name? Why do you think so many people are afraid of him? Its because of this, and its also because he always got so close to achieving his goal.’
‘I-I never knew.’ Ginny said faintly after a while. ‘Mom and dad just always told me never to call him by his name and they use to get angry if any of us did.’
‘I use to think it was pretty weird that people don’t call him by his name,’ Harry said ‘I use to think that it was so much easier to just call him by his name. But now I know that people had a right reason to fear him-’
‘Don’t,’ Sirius said ‘don’t even go there. Fear of name increases the fear of it self, remember that.’
*

nice... kinda creepy to be afraid of a name.