Harry Potter and the Green-Flame Torch

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Originally posted by jennyanderson
Hey guys its me! How are you all! I really apologize that I had been so slack this past weeks and to make you cheerful, I will now add the next part of the story, and guys brace yourself for this week cause I will be posting again the next part of the story very soon. And spiedergrl, you are one tenacious babe, I gather that you are really patient to have followed all my instructions and find the link and yes, you’ve got the good makes of a leader did you know that? Persons with a lot of determination and patience succeed in their life!
And now ladies and gentleman, the moment we’ve all been waiting for-THE NEXT PART OF THE STORY…

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Originally posted by jennyanderson
And spiedergrl, you are one tenacious babe, I gather that you are really patient to have followed all my instructions and find the link and yes, you’ve got the good makes of a leader did you know that? Persons with a lot of determination and patience succeed in their life!
And now ladies and gentleman, the moment we’ve all been waiting for-THE NEXT PART OF THE STORY…

Thank you, life has a thrown me a few things that actually take time, and thats where I might get that patience you talk about from! and I won't give up on anything, assure you me that!
Thats a great compliment and THANK YOU VERY MUCH!
I love your story, its one of the best I've read. I know how hard it is to write, I mean I write myself, and recently just Dont' have time to, with skewl, sport and everything, but your doing an awsome job, please keep it up and keep going!!

awww.... 😊 lol

Ok guys, next part of the story...

Their journey to Platform 9 ¾ was fast and warm despite the blizzard outside. Harry and the others were all cocooned into the warmth of the limo. But they couldn’t allow themselves to be pampered further and grumbled as the tires hit the ground and they got out of the same room attached to the ticket booth.
As they spilled outside, they caught the familiar sight of the red Hogwarts Express. Harry frowned as he stared at it and turned to Sirius to ask him the question that had just struck him. ‘What if the Death Eaters attack us while we’re on the train?’
‘They won’t. The train in guarded by the same sort of enchantment that the castle is. Nobody can just attack uninvited.’
‘But in our third year-’
‘That’s because the Dementors were given the permission from Dumbledore. I highly doubt he would do that now.’
‘HEY! YOU GUYS! IT’S SO GOOD TO SEE YOU!’
They all turned and saw Hermione bearing down on them as Krum’s limo driver helped her out the door. She then proceeded to rush forwards and hug then all in turn (even to the very caught off guard Torch).
‘Its good to see you too!’ Ginny exclaimed. ‘How was your Christmas?’
A shutter closed down in Hermione’s eyes for a second before she hitched up a bright smile. ‘Fantastic! How was yours?’
Soon they were saying their goodbye’s and boarding their school train. They found an empty compartment at the middle of the train and as soon as they had stowed away their trunk, Ron, Hermione and Ginny headed for the prefects carriage leaving Harry and Torch behind as usual. The journey passed away in silence and remained that all the way as they reached the castle, ate their supper and went to sleep. But Harry realized something was wrong the moment he had left his dorm at the crack of dawn. He had woken up very early and was eager to form new plans and tactics thanks to the help of Wood’s Magical Quidditch Plan Maker that he had given Harry for a present when he had revealed to the world about Voldemorts return. He was about to sit down in his favourite squashy arm chair when he heard a stifled sob. Harry started and spun around until he saw Hermione sitting at the corner in one of the arm chairs while Ginny sat on its hand rest and had engulfed her in a hug. Hermione had a handkerchief pressed to her face and her eyes were bloodshot from crying. Ginny tightened her arms around her. Harry strode until he was beside them. ‘What happened?’ he asked. ‘Hermione what’s up?’
Hermione bit her lip and looked at him painfully. ‘Viktor and I broke up!’ she said without any preliminaries. Harry was completely taken off guard.
‘Hermione when you say you broke up-’
‘Its over! We’re history!’ she wailed. ‘Apparently he wanted to talk to me face to face and say that this long distance relationship isn’t working out any more! He said that he had met some one else who is closer to him and he wants to get serious with her!’
Harry digested this carefully then as he couldn’t stand it anymore he blurted out ‘Hermione, did you love Krum?’
Hermione stopped crying and looked straight ahead and muttered something though clenched teeth.
‘Sorry, didn’t get that.’ Harry said leaning forward.
‘I said, no!’ she hissed. He and Ginny quickly looked at each other.
‘Then why are you so upset about it?’ he asked.
‘I’m sure you’ve already figured that out Harry!’
‘Are you meaning to say that the only reason you continued this relationship with him so far is so that so you could use him as a weapon to taunt Ron with?’
Hermione put her nose in the air with all the dignity she could muster ‘I know it sounds narrow minded but yes.’
Harry shook his head disbelievingly.
‘Well, its what people do to-to get what they need.’ Hermione finished in a small voice.
‘Hermione, if you really like my brother so much then why don’t you just come out and tell him how you feel?’ Ginny asked soothingly.
‘How could I with her floating all around him!’ she wailed. ‘I mean look at her, she’s so pretty and desirable, and I don’t even stand a chance against her!’
‘Don’t think that Hermione, physical appearance has got nothing to do about love. If you really love some one then you will love them despite what they look like.’ Said Ginny wisely. ‘I mean look at me and Dean, I didn’t use to think he was much good looking before but then I fell in love with him and now, I don’t even care what he looks like. He satisfies me and I’m happy with it.’
It took them a half an hour to soothe Hermione and then she had made them swear that they wont divulge this to anyone. Once she was gone Ginny tried to make some light conversations but Harry had veered into the topic that he most wanted to talk about and the pair of them finally decided on the fact that unless either Ron or Hermione does something about it, there is nothing that they could do-and that’s gonna be really complicated for all of them.
'Yes did you realize that every time something like this happens we end up forming the same conclusions.'
‘I know, but I’m never gonna forget all this trouble that they are putting us through! Ginny said scathingly. ‘Wait till they get married and start having kids-I’m gonna tell my niece and nephew all the trouble that their parents put me through!’
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is there going to be any more to thins story 😕 😕

Yes, by the way do you like it?

i love your story it took me 3 days to read it from the beginning cuz i kept having to stop but hey it really rocks!!!

Thank you very much! I really like it when people tell me what they like about my story! And medstud, why dont you tell me what you found so exciting in my story, in that way I'm getting some feedback from the readers and I might be able to improve the next parts or modify it according to your likings! By the way, if you want a revised edition of the story just go here: http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/viewstory.php?sid=4624 I must say that the mugglnet stuff are very lazy and they are taking ages to read through my story to post the next parts!

well i think the best part of your story is that you keep the readers on their toes just like JKR does, every next word usually revels something new that you just can't stop reading....

Wow thats like one of the highest compliments I've ever got! Thanks man, its just bringing tears into my eyes! :-)

Ok guys, next part of the story...

As the days went by more of Evals doings were featured in various wizarding Medias. As much as Harry would love to help out the Order, he had another task at his hand. The Gryffindors were suppose to take on the Ravenclaws for their second match at the end of February.
‘Ok, whoever wins this match gets to compete in the final match of the year!’ Harry barked in front of his team mates two weeks before the match. ‘We all know that we’ve won the Cup last year but that doesn’t mean that we’re just gonna sit here and not cut some slack! I want you guys to work all the time-’
‘Harry we all know that we’re going to win this match the way you’re going. So just relax-’ Katie began.
‘See this is the kind of attitude that I’m trying to prevent!’ Harry burst out, Katie stared at him shocked. ‘You’re being arrogant and too confident-the kind of attitude that’s gonna be your downfall if you’re not careful! You think you can conquer everything-but you can’t! Not without practice! So try to put in at least a hundred times of more effort from now on!’
‘We’ve been practicing day and night! So don’t you dare say that we’re not putting in as much effort as you want us to!’ Katie burst out.
‘I’m not! All as I’m saying is that you guys should not think that you can just go out there and win anything! You must always think that you’re trying as hard as you can! You must never allow yourself to feel that you can win this match!’
‘Why not!’
‘Because if you do then you’re egos will get bigger-and that’s a fact and you’ll think that you don’t need to practice anymore!’
‘For your kind information Harry, we never feel that way because you’re always there to remind us what’s right and what’s wrong!’
‘Hey guys, chill.’ Ginny said getting in between the two then she looked pointedly at Harry ‘I think that should be all for today.’
Harry waited until all his team mates except Ron, Torch and Ginny had left, then he rounded on her ‘Ok, what is it?’ he demanded.
Ginny sighed ‘Look, I know what’s going on inside of your mind Harry but there is nothing you can do.’
‘Don’t you think I’m aware of it-’
‘We all know you are which is why we’ve come up with an idea.’ Ron said.
‘And what is that?’
The two siblings shared a look before Ron continued ‘Harry we think you should try to break into Voldemorts mind and find out what he’s up to.’
Harry did not immediately back away but said rather slowly almost smirking ‘But its too dangerous, what if he feels me and then there is also the possibility that he may control me without any of you knowing.’
‘Well yes there is that possibility…but then if we are really careful and if you really practice hard then we might be able to do it in three weeks time.’ Said Torch. Harry stared at her.
‘You mean you’re up to the idea that I should break into Voldemorts mind?’ he asked.
‘Of course I am. And besides with the proper training you can get inside his head without him realizing-but you will need a lot energy for that and you might not be able to do it whenever you want, and certainly you cannot control him-he is too mentally strong. So are you game?’
Harry grinned and said almost instantly ‘I’m game whenever you are!’
Ron and Ginny gave an inward sigh thinking that at least Harry would be occupied for the next few days with something else and that meant he won’t be loosing his tempers too much.
*
There was only one source of light from the manor of Little Hangleton that day and it was and it was coming from the large study room.
‘He is her, my lord.’ Wormtail said as he cautiously approached the arm chair
‘At last!’ came Lord Voldemorts voice from the chair ‘Bring him in!’
Wormtail disappeared for a few seconds and came back with one burly man ‘This if Frederick Zuniga my lord and he has what you are looking for.’
‘Yes, Frederick, come in front of me so that I may see you.’
Even the huge Frederick stooped down in front of the Dark Lord out of fear. ‘I see that you’ve followed my instructions. Only a man with a long line of bounty hunters in their blood could’ve found it.’ Said the Dark Lord.
‘My branch of family had been bounty hunters for more then a few centuries and finding the Pyramids of Fulmat had been a sort of family goal. The instructions that you gave me were very accurate, my lord. The protective charms that you gave me shielded me from all the curses, my lord. I can stand in front of family’s tombstone and announce proudly that I have fulfilled their dreams.’
‘Impressive.’ Said Lord Voldemort. ‘So where are the remains of Prince Fulmat?’
‘In here, my lord.’ The bounty hunter produced a glass jar containing the powdered remains of the prince; the Dark Lord reached out his long fingers and took hold of the jar. Frederick gave him fifteen minutes before he dared to ask for his reward, the Dark Lord impatiently waved his wand without taking his eyes from the jar and immediately a trunk appeared. The bounty hunter hungrily opened it and found it filled to the brim with precious stones and gold. ‘My lord!’ he said softly and bowed out of the room tugging his treasure chest.
It was a long time before the Dark Lord spoke again. ‘At last, I now have the power to lure out the two people who can destroy my Evals and kill them instead. But we need to make a potion first and I will need your help Wormtail. It will take two weeks for the potion to mature and then we can add the remains and it will lure out the reincarnated prince and the warrior-whoever they are and wherever they are!’
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Authors Note : Does anybody want to have a go at whoever the reincarnated Prince and his sister are? If you think you can, just post your opinion here and you will be rewarded by sending a private message from me letting you in on a few bits of secrets and a bit on whats more to come!

harry and Torch
or
ron and ginney

i like the fact that you tell voldemorts story too, just like JKR
your doin a great job!!

Ok, you have got to make a choice between one of the pair and say why you chose them. And while we’re at it, does anybody want to have a go at who are the reincarnated brother and sister?

i do!! i think it is Ginny and Ron

oh yea and im a girl 😄 📖

I say ..... hmmm Ginny and Ron

i chose...... ginny and ron too cause harry/torch are the center of atention for everything else.