ok i just finished you story i really did like it...if i didnt i wouldnt have read it all the way through..i hope they dont die thats kinda said how you just killed ginnys bf are you setting it up so her and harry can finally get to gether..and i thought the ron ang ginny being the prince thing was a little predictable i honestly thought you were gonna have torch and harry..but all in all im not bashing your story at all...the sex scenes really took me by surprise..i bet all the pre teens that read the story are probly thank you for teaching them everything that they now..lol...Torch is a little hoochy isnt she and i kinda was a little disturbed that ron is having sex with harry(torch) but hey its your story and your obviosly having fun writing it so keep at the good work..and i liked the fact that you brought serius back..hit me back when you get a chance ttyl
Everyone was so shocked at what the monster was doing to Evals that they took no notice whatsoever of anything else around them. Even Voldemort and Lestrange were enjoying watching the scene in front of them that they took no notice at all of Ginny. Emotions so strong, so terrifying and so sad were coming in huge waves from her. Golden lights were glowing all around Ginny; despite the paralysing curse she was able clench and unclench her fingers, her face was streaked with tears, her heart so broken that she thought she would die-she even welcomed it. But she wont die-not until she has her revenge; and maybe then she can join Dean. She closed her eyes as another surge of emotion rushed inside her. She screamed. Screamed with such sorrow that everyone was forced to look at her. Instantly the smirk in Lestrange’s face was wiped away by one of confusion; even Voldemort didn’t know what was coming.
They watched in confusion as Ginny sobbed her heart out and the gold light around her grew brighter and brighter. They also heard a kind of haunting music coming from the lights surrounding Ginny. The music was so beautiful and enchanting that all fear and shock drained out of Harry as he watched her in amazement.
Something was happening to Ginny. All the cuts and bruises that were in her body and face were vanishing leaving the skin flawless. She had ceased making any noise. Suddenly the golden light was doing something to her hair. It was gathering in intensity around her hair until it was so bright that they had to look away from her. The light was swirling around her hair and as it revolved down to her head they saw her hair was no longer the Weasley’s trademark of flaming red; it had turned a shining jet black like a ravens wing.
Voldemort gave a strangled cry as he recognized what was coming on. ‘Evanasca!’ he cried pointing at Evals. Immediately the monster vanished along with Dean’s carcass. Then quickly he turned his attention to Ginny, the gold light was now revolving around her forehead, and it had just managed to turn her eye lashes and eye brow black. Voldemort had to put a stop to this, he wasn’t sure how much she had been converted but he was determined not for it to complete. ‘AVEDA KADEVRA!’ he screamed at Ginny. The green killing curse hit her full on.
Harry, Ron and Hermione screamed horrified. The golden light surrounding her had vanished and she lay limplessly on the floor.
Voldemrot’s lips curled in triumph. Until Ginny opened her eyes and hatred was pouring out of them in waves.
Voldemort stared in horror at the small girl. Except this girl was not at all like any ordinary girl of her stature. Waves of power and hate were pouring out of her in such intensity that the Dark Lord knew immediately that he now had another extremely powerful enemy at hand.
‘Ginny?’ Harry asked uncertainly.
But Ginny was beyond hearing anyone. She now stared at the place where Evals had gorged his fill. The blood pool was still there-Deans blood. Dean, she would never see him again; he was gone forever and all because of that monster whom Voldemort had set on her beloved Dean! She looked up and saw that Voldemort was staring at her and she knew that he was fearing her; but that though did not give her any satisfaction, indeed her insides were empty of all feelings except for the intensified hate. Voldemort was going to pay for what he did to Dean.
Before the Dark Lord knew what was coming Ginny had hurtled towards him and had pinned him to the floor with tremendous power. Lestrang shrieked and jumped up to help her lord, but the moment she got within an arms distance of them her body collided with an invisible shield and Harry heard the loud thud of her body hitting the shield. Suddenly Harry found that all the binds holding the captives were gone; he looked at Ginny and knew that she had freed them.
Unknowing of what was happening around her, Lestrange tried again and again to free her master but all was in vain. Ginny had pinned the Dark Lord to the floor, his wand was laying a few inches from his feet. She was doing something to him, Harry realised. She was kneeled beside him, only her fingertips were touching the Dark Lord and he was convulsing dangerously. Harry saw that her face wore a look of deep satisfaction.
‘Harry our wand!’ Hermione whispered urgently.
He started and looked to where she was pointing. In a corner of the huge room were eight of all of their wand, Harry knew it was theirs because he could just see his one on top of the pile. Quickly and silently so that Lestrange would not notice he tip-toed to the corner and gathered all of their wands. Meanwhile Ron had proceeded to wake up Torch, the Death Eaters seemed to have done a good job on her, she finally awoke with her hand clutching her head ‘Oh my head!’ she moaned. Satisfied Ron turned to Harry and the moment he had his wand he made straight for Lestrange and had grabbed hold of her hair and had pulled her back. Now Lestrange’s shriek was because of the pain being exerted on her scalp. She turned snarling and tried to claw Ron, but she only managed to lay one single scratch on him before Harry had raised his wand and had cried ‘Stupify!’ Lestrange’s eyes rolled back on her head before she lay unmoving on the floor.
Meanwhile alerted by Lestrange’s furious shrieks several of the Death Eaters burst inside the room. Harry and Ron whipped around and were standing staring dumbfounded when Hermione finally had the sense to shout ‘HARRY! FOR GODS SAKE! USE YOUR POWER!’
Harry’s face reddened but he stowed away his wand up his sleeve before confronting the Death Eaters all of whose attention were focused on the Dark Lord laying on the floor convulsing dangerously and the small girl kneeling beside him with her fingers on his cheek. But before they could do anything they felt a soft touch, as if a warm feather had just brushed their neck and the next second there was a huge explosion. They all yelled out and found themselves on the floor, unconscious. Unfortunately the noise had drawn the attention of rest of the inhabitants of the house and Harry, Ron, Hermione and Torch rather felt than saw the presence of the oncoming Dementors.
‘They are still far away!’ Ron managed to say as the air around them grew cold but it still wasn’t that cold yet. They also heard the footsteps of several people and knew that they belonged to the rest of the Death Eaters.
‘Ron we cant fight all of them at the same moment!’ Harry yelled.
‘Why not! You have all the power!’ Hermione snapped.
Harry glared at her ‘Yes I do but I don’t have the power to fight all of Voldemorts army at the same time! How many other creatures do you think are there apart from the Dementors! Hundreds! And just where do you think all the Dementors from Azkaban had been hiding out if not somewhere around Voldemorts head quarter! Hermione for gods sake there could even be hundreds of Dementors out there!’
‘But you can deal with a hundred Dementor!’
‘Yes, but I cant deal with thousands of other of Voldemorts army at the same time!’
‘God! Now he tells me!’ she snarled.
Harry ignored her and turned to Ron ‘See if you can get Ginny! We need to get out of here! I’ll see to the door; Hermione, Torch see if you can wake those two-’ he jerked his head at Neville and Seamus ‘-and while you’re at it see if you can blast that window over there when we’re ready.’ He nodded to a heavily barricaded window at the far end of the huge room.
He strode over to the door and waved his hand at it and just two seconds later they heard the thud of several strong bodies colliding against the heavy door. The Death Eaters lunged again and again and used all sorts of spells at the door simultaneously but the door remained stubbornly closed and whole.
Ron quickly strode over to Ginny, strangely the invisible shield let him through. He hesitated and then touched her in the shoulder. The second his hands came in contact with her shoulder Ron yelled out in horror as what he saw and felt both pained and terrified him. He was about to succumb to the floor when Ginny finally felt his soft touch at her shoulder and stopped the flow of energy going through her body.
‘Ginny we have to go!’ Ron finally said gasping huge amounts of air.
‘No.’ Gunny said firmly ‘I want Voldemort to suffer before he dies!’
‘Ginny, you can’t kill Voldemort like that!’ Harry yelled as they heard another huge body crashing on the door ‘He has protected himself from such things like that! True you could harm him to the point where he would be close to death but that’s it! He will come back again! And we don’t have the time now! Can’t you feel the Dementors coming! Pretty soon the ground is going to be swarming with all sorts of Voldemorts minions! We need to escape while we can!’
‘No!’
‘The hell with no!’ Harry yelled.
‘I have to avenge Dean’s death!’ she said stubbornly.
‘How, by killing us all!’
‘But Dean, they k-k-’ Ginny’s voice broke and her eyes filled with tears.
‘I know Ginny, I know.’ Harry said looking at her with hard pleading eyes ‘but what will be the point of avenging his death if you die at the same hands that killed him?’
Ginny hung her head not knowing what to do; it tore Harry’s heart.
‘Ginny trust me when I say we need to go now and you can have your revenge another time when the odds aren’t so against us.’
Slowly Ginny nodded, she got up and helped Ron to his feet, he was still shaking and Voldemort lay on their feet, unconscious.
Torch had wakened Neville and Seamus and then strode silently to the window ‘I can blast this thing through and probably help carry everyone down the window. I think we are in the first floor and Harry you need to provide the cloaking.’
Harry nodded ‘I’ll leave the enchantment on the door, that should buy us some time.’
Torch raised her wand.
‘Wait.’ Ginny said taking her wand from Ron ‘I’ll muffle the blast while you’re at it.’
Torch examined her face for a second before nodding ‘Thank you.’ She said ‘Reducto!’
Splintered wood from the window rained down on all of them but the Death Eaters laying on the floor got the most of it. They were indeed on the second story and there was no way of getting down and the Dementors were getting close.
‘Harry I need you to cloak us now and I’ll lower us in threes.’ Torch said.
Harry muttered something and the they all seemed to have vanished from sight but the next second they still could see each other, before Ron could open his mouth Harry stopped him ‘Don’t worry no else can see us save for us.’
Ron nodded. Their surroundings were getting colder and colder; in a few minutes they would be surrounded by Dementors. Harry quickly glanced at the mass of black in the distance; he could already discern the gliding movements of the Dementors.
Torch was very fast in lowering down everybody and she herself came down last.
‘We have to run in that direction!’ Harry said nodding to his right where in a distance he could clearly see the graveyards that he was transported to almost two years ago when Wormtail had killed Cedric Diggory.
‘Harry do you know where we are?’
‘Little Hangleton.’
‘Where the hell is Little Hangleton!’ Ron asked agitated and confused.
‘Somewhere very far away from Hogwarts.’ Harry said running in the direction he had pointed out, the others were close by his heels.
‘Harry can you get us out of here?’
‘I might but for the moment we need to keep running.’
The air around them was getting colder, Dementors were closing in on them.
‘Harry the Dementors don’t need to see us, they can feel our presence!’ Hermione said desperately.
Without a word Harry waved his wand and they felt the presence of an invisible warm shield around them. Unfortunately that wasn’t enough. As they ran within the graveyards hands suddenly sprouted out of the ground, grey rotten hands of the dead.
‘Aahhhh!’ Ron screamed as one of the zombie caught him around his ankle, he tumbled into the ground, Hermione screamed back horrified. Ginny whipped around and pointed her wand at the hand of the zombie that was quickly dragging him into the ground ‘Reducto!’
The zombie hand quickly slithered back to the ground but all around them more of the undead were awakening and they were stumbling forwards, their arms stretched in front of them. Ginny, Torch, Ron and Hermione sprang into action shoving Neville, Seamus and Harry in the middle. Spells of all kind rained down on the zombies. All around them zombie hands, legs, heads were piling up but unfortunately no matter how severed the body parts were they too continued their stumbling progress towards them
‘How do you kill this things!’ Ron cried in desperation.
‘Burn them!’ Torch said conjuring a flaming spell and aiming it at one of the zombie hand, instantly the hand caught on fire and shrivelled and finally collapsed in an unrecognisable dust. Getting the idea the rest of them rained down fire spell on the other whole and severed zombies.
Neville and Seamus seeing the condition around them also sprang into action, Harry alone remained unmoving, he had his eyes closed in deep concentration and seemed not to notice at all at all the commotions around him.
‘Neville, Seamus take care of Harry! Don’t let any harm come to him! He’s trying to get us out of here!’ Torch managed to yell.