USH'S STAR WARS GAME- Character Creation Mark II. Interested players please come!

Started by HimoKun29 pages

Here is my finished bio and specifics on me Ush:

My name is Kiu Dun of Onderon. My family was a major player in the politics of Onderon until we moved here to Coruscant to protect the Senator from Onderon. I was noticed by a Jedi Master named Renna Jace while she was at a meeting with my family. She noticed that I was a Miraluka and instantly took me in after she examined me.

My first mission with my Master was one to the world of Alderaan. We were to take out a Crime boss but it went horribly wrong and it ended up with my Master being captured. When I returned, the Council promoted me to a Jedi Knight and from there went on numerous missions.

One fo my last missions was to the planet of Correllia. I was sent there to help sort out a problem between two of the politicians. When I got there, I instantly found out that one of politican I was supposed to help was killed in cold blood by what looked like a lightsabre. I went out from there and met with the other politician at the location.
When I arrived, I found the politician dead on the ground and a Dark Jedi standing over his lifeless body. It was my Master.

I pulled out my lightsabre and rushed at her, hoping to at least get revenge. I was able to keep up with her for long enough that I was able to get away. She followed me and then I lunged at her and cut off her hand. That was the last I saw of her.

The next week, my sister was killed along with two of my brothers. I found out later that it was my former Master, Renna Jace.

I left the Order soon after and started to wander. I later became the bodyguard to the senator from Onder in honor my sister and my brother's deaths. I gave up the position and trained my companion. I finally came to help the Renegades to find a way to cope with my loss.

Name: Kiu Dun
Age: 29
Height: 5'11
Species: Miraluka
Homeworld: Onderon
Hair: Black short hair
Clothes: Jal Shey Iniate Armour

Gallador`s story, part one, what do you think?:

Gallador Enkidu was taken to the Jedi Temple before the first year of his life has passed. He was a gifted pupil, curious to learn as much about the Force as possible, with above average general potential and strong talent for Living Force, his sensitiveness and emphathy made him particularly good at influencing minds. Yet he was too emotional to fit with Jedi model, so Masters made considerable effort to teach him how to supress his feelings. Gallador was an eager student, and worked hard to be more in tune with Cosmic Force, with good results.

But he didn`t spend most of his time on lightsaber training. Instead, Gallador became fascinated with Jedi Lore. He studied the stories of ancient jedi heroeses, how they defeated the Sith and their evil, negotiating peace and promoting cooperation between the worlds throughout the Galaxy, guiding and inspiring others- and so Old Republic was born, bringing an era of justice and prosperity to Galaxy. Gallador couldn`t wait to finish his training, so he could defend others and help maintain peace and order in the Republic- he wanted to be a peacemaker more than a warror, he considered it more "pure"

Later, Gallador was assigned as Padawan to Jedi Master Harrar-Ur, renowned diplomat and wise mentor. But as he began to travel across the Republic, he discovered it is vastly diffrent compared to his idealistic vision developed in the Temple. There was much suffering, injustice and corruption, and Jedi had to bow and show respect to greedy, corrupt politicians, who didn`t care about the well-being of their people at all, focusing solely on accumulating more power. He asked his Master why do Jedi tolerate this situation- surely they could take matters in their own hands, guiding other beings more directly with their great wisdom and insight? His Master answered that Jedi do not force their beliefs on others, this is the road to the Darkside, path that Sith have taken. Jedi are to advise, never rule! Gallador had to take this answer, but he felt that his childhood dreams have shattered. He also wondered about the reasons for which sentient, civilized beings commit evil deeds- that they are enslaved by their anger, fear-inner demons often so strong that no reasoning can help. But Jedi are able to influence weak minds and alter perception of others for a brief period of time, why they could not make a more pernament effect- it was said that Sith of old could corrupt their victims, twisting their minds through the Power of Darkside. Could Jedi not use reverse technics to heal the minds of criminals? His Mentor didn`t like this line of thought, warning Gallador that he would better forget about those dangerous ideas- using Force to pernamenty influence the minds of of sentient beings is a violation of free will, and clear path to the Darkside! Other Masters were not willing to discuss those matters with Gallador, with two exceptions- Scavione, whom Gallador deeply respected for the guidance in the earliest stages of his training, but whose cold logic made Gallador frustrated, and Master Nume Rand- who was actually quite interested in Gallador`s ideas.

A turning point in Gallador`s life came with a mission to a planet in Hutt Sector, where he accompanied his Master, who was tracking a dangerous Dark Jedi, involved in illegal slave trade, rumored to be a former associate of Kuylen, or even connected to the Sith Lord whose apprentice died on Tatooine.( I am leaving it vague so I don`t mess with Ush`s ideas). Here he discovered the abominable practises of Hutt slavers, and discovered that one of the slaves is a young girl from his own world! She begged for help, saying that she was kidnapped by pirates, and now facing a proscept of being an "entertainer" for Hutts, and she would rather kill herself than meet such fate. Gallador asked his Master for help, but he refused, reasoning that they are outside of Republic territory, on dangerous mission, and have neither time nor resources to start freeing slaves. Young Padawan felt shaken and torn apart! This girl counted on him, he was her only hope, and he felt a kind of bond towards her- she was first member of his species he has ever met, and seeing her brought memories long lost- of his mother, his people and their home! No, he could not fail her, their meeting was certainly a manifestation of the will of the Force. Ancient Jedi would surely act diffrently, they were always ready to fight evil, and not cared about politics! So he made his choice, and what followed was a rescue attempt that resulted in... failure, as Gallador was not experienced and skilled enough to prevail against the defences of powerful Hutt slaver. Fortunately, Harrar-Ur came to his rescue, but at the same time the Dark Jedi decided it is an opportunity to make a move.... and the effect was total mayhem. The Elessar girl tried to convince other slaves to rebel, and was mercilessly killed by slavers. And Gallador`s master died, striken by Darksider`s lightsaber. Than something snapped inside him, and suddenly all the discipline, control, years of training...-it didn`t matter at all! There was only pain, and sorrow, guilt and fear, which turned into anger, and finally into fiendish fury-which brought Power, strenght he never realized he had. Darksider was weakened by the previous fight and Gallador`s Darkside rage surprised him, so he was another to die that day, in that place. Hutt slaver followed, cut into pieces, Gallador didn`t even hear him begging for mercy, than he managed to escape from exploding mansion. He didn`t tell Council the whole truth, and he was a diffrent person than before... - (To be continued)

Wow... That's good.

Ushgarak, are you okay with this bio so far?

Looks fine!

I looked around this section and made myself familiar with the immense amount of rules (😛) a bit and I decided I would like to play too if there are any spaces open in the future.

I already created a character, although I am not sure if I did it right. I will just post it.

Name: Bardock Rusiam
Light Side
Scholar

Strength: 7
Agility: 7
Dexterity: 5
Speed: 8
Charisma: 7
Intelligence: 8
Willpower: 8
Perception: 6

Lightsabre= 13
Jedi Lore +5
Leadership +4
Languages +3
Savoir-Faire +2
Medicine +1
Persuade +4
Observation +2
Pilot +1
Combat +2
Fix-it +0

Merits:
Famous Master
Ally
Mentor
(explaination will follow)

Blade Tricks:
Bodyguard
Rickochet
Strike to Subdue

Force:
Push/Pull
Jump
Draw
Intuition
Sense

Stage One: Scholary
Master Jump, Dodge, Blur, Dreams, Leadership, Inner Calm, Foresight, Scan, Distract, Empathy

Stage Two:

Cosmic: Serenity, Orator, Revitalise
Living: Entrancement, Persuade, Awe
Kinetic: Lift, Bash, Combat Push
Agility: Leap
Martial: Defend, Reflection, Guard, Master Reflection
Reaction, Speed

I already made up a kind of Background story too. I will post it tommorow.

All looks pretty good- good time to join, too!

yea nice timing bardock!
I don't believe we have a scholar....

Ush, I'm working on an in-depth background story, dealing with one run-in with an Correllian Arm's smuggeler. And been tossing in my own "Tpt's blatent plagarisms"

Oh, is the Light Side interlude coming to an end?

Jelena is a scholar.

And yes it is!

Jelena is? Hmm....
Ok then. Did not know that.

'Blatant plagiarisms' 😆

Yet another lightsider? 😛 You guys lost a few though, right?

Originally posted by Lana
'Blatant plagiarisms' 😆

Yet another lightsider? 😛 You guys lost a few though, right?

I read somewhere dark side is full and dark siders suck 😛 (except for sith they rule.....but you know only two there are and stuff)

Dark side IS full so far as I know (I think we have a few new characters waiting to join anyway)....and we do not suck 😠 😛

We just tend to mess up a lot 😛

Do the Dark Siders interact with the Light Siders in Ush'S RPGs by the way?

....oh and you do suck 😛

They have in the past, I don't think that's planned to happen any time soon...

And quiet, you, my character could kill yours in a saber duel 😛

Originally posted by Lana
They have in the past, I don't think that's planned to happen any time soon...

And quiet, you, my character could kill yours in a saber duel 😛

Considering the second part of your post I am glad that the first one applies.

Originally posted by Lana
'Blatant plagiarisms' 😆

Yet another lightsider? 😛 You guys lost a few though, right?


yea, a bunch kinda dissappeared...
And I plagarized THAT phrase from Ush.. sooo.........

Yay for stealing stuff 😄

i think i wanna play, but can someone help me make my character, kind of to match my personality???