Do U Like Ur Own Stories?

well i'll have to read them then see if you have listened for once

what does that have to do with remembering the story

Originally posted by FallenArchAngel
maybe what does that mean

it means maybe

cause. innocent eyes is a sort of story that a few people will not like cause of what is in it

get back to the subject

Originally posted by FallenArchAngel
well i'll have to read them then see if you have listened for once

u could if they were typed up

what is in the story plain and simple dont dodge the subject

Originally posted by Maylien
get back to the subject

i am 😠

Originally posted by Maylien
what is in the story plain and simple dont dodge the subject

it is about the 2nd gulf war, well on the reason we went to war and how the kids would deal with it only in a fanasy style.

Originally posted by FallenArchAngel
well i'll have to read them then see if you have listened for once

read one on this forum
http://www.killermovies.com/forums/f67/t327507.html

ok your description is better but no where near good enough try describing the magic library. What does it look like? is there any thing that stands out about it? things like that

definetly need more description in it you need to make the reader feel as though they are there looking at the room themselves

exactly they need to be able to see what the character see's and feel what the character feels

yeah that way if people want they can create their own character to tie in with the story can they can imagine everything that happens

what magic library are u reading the right one and maylien i know what i need to do. 😕

just helping out to make sure that you know what you have to do

"The day my family were killed started off as a normal summers day, everyone went their ways to do what they did during the day and I went down to the library of magic"

lOOK MAGIC LIBRARY U FOOL

not magic library library of magic

magic library and library of magic are the same thing

know they are not in my story cause one has information on magic and the other is a magic library as you'll see later