Eithr way U NEED MORE DESCRIPTION LISTEN TO WHAT I'M TELLING U
LR
Lyra Roseout of control
i asked for iead so thanks for urs
FAL
FallenArchAngelFallen Angel
u asked for what
LR
Lyra Roseout of control
ideas and i will take it in to account
FAL
FallenArchAngelFallen Angel
using description is not an idea, it is something u have to do in order to make your story do well
MAY
MaylienSenior Member
some of the best books that i have read are done in the first person
LR
Lyra Roseout of control
Originally posted by Maylien some of the best books that i have read are done in the first person
same here! but most my stories or first person diary style
MAY
MaylienSenior Member
Anne Frank is one of the best dairy style books ever
LR
Lyra Roseout of control
i agree
FAL
FallenArchAngelFallen Angel
maybe u should use that as insight on how to write a diary style book
LR
Lyra Roseout of control
i no what to do they are in a way my diary
MAY
MaylienSenior Member
if you have read the book then you should write it similar to that
LR
Lyra Roseout of control
every one has there own style i dont copy any one elses
MAY
MaylienSenior Member
i never said copy i said make it similar the two are very different
FAL
FallenArchAngelFallen Angel
But that would make Tracy's story unoriginal
LR
Lyra Roseout of control
yes it would thanks 🙂
MAY
MaylienSenior Member
no it wouldn't cos you can write it in a similar way like how the book refers to stuff but you don't copy it it will still be your own work just usaing ideas that work in other cases
LR
Lyra Roseout of control
but id rather find my own that way if it is a hit then i know it was because they liked that style
MAY
MaylienSenior Member
just a suggestion it may help the book ifg you include stuff you know that will work