\\\==D-Double's Dirty lil Demo ==///

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\\\==D-Double's Dirty lil Demo ==///

As some of you know, I rhyme a little bit. I've been doing it for a while, but procrastinated on putting together a demo. Well Recently I've been inspired and have got back in habit. As I make my songs I'll post the link here for you to listen to. I got Hip-Hop run'n through my veins. Time to let it loose.

First one is dedicated to someone special......guess who. 😖hifty:

Please feel free to give me a pat on the back or tell me how much I suck. Constructive criticism would be helpful too. Enjoy, folks....

I chopped the beat from a Balil song and a Portisehead track, then put my secret sauce on it. This is not for sale. Promo only......

...So don't sue me...... 😉
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Title : Candy Kisses

Wordsmith : Doobleve

Backup Vocals : Homegurl Sharez

Beatwork : Doobleve

http://s4.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=265C55FE33BE9EC9941E28366FC5D5CB

*Pats you on the back while telling you how much you suck* 😂 jk man.

Damn man, its 19 meg!!! AHHHH! Thisis gonna take a while! 🙁

You almost sound like the long-lost fifth member of The Pharcyde.

Not bad at all, a few really entertaining parts in there. Extra props for the Mr Burns & Smithers line 👆

I'm no expert, but I enjoyed it. Consider this a pat on the back.

Honey, I can't hear it at the moment coz I use a school comp, but once my net is runnin' at home I'll check you out.... 😉

Wow...peeps....I didn't expect a response so soon. Thank you....😄

Kosta > 😛 yeah my rhymes are gargantuan

Deathblow > That's a huge compliment...the Pharcyde thing.... Thank you....

Sy > Take your time.....The hip-hop is kept in a "stay fresh" baggy ....😖hifty:

Hey, if You can Convert it to an MP3 file, thatll make it much smaller. The connection keeps being reset every time I try to downoad it, I had it on like 94% twice, and it resets 🙁

Yikes!!....sorry about that....I'll put up an MP3 tomorrow......

....my bad...... 😮

Hey, that was a damn cool song 😄

Like Deathblow, I'm not an expert, but I enjoyed listening to it. You should do some more, I'd love to hear it...

interestingly enough, i was listening to that very same portishead song this morning; coincedence or conspiracy? that is a tight ass song, very co. flow sounding.

...on to your song. i like the beat; if the beat doesn't grab my attention immediately, i'll skip it. but i think your rhymes leave a little to be desired. it's not that they suck, it just sounds like your reading them verbatem from a piece of paper. they are lacking a little oomph, if that's an actual word. maybe a few "dry runs" before recording the final take.

as an emcee/beatsmith myself, i have respect for anyone who actually takes the time to put themselves out there, and attempt to make their dreams/ambitions a reality. so keep doing your thing and make it happen. as always, i'm interested in hearing more.

madsci
hip hop purist

it is lacking a little "oomph" as madsci mentioned. but it was good overall

👆

Darth Revan > 😄 Thanks, brutha..... I appreciate it....

Madsci > Yeah , I know what you mean. I wrote it, said it, and let it be... 😮 I kinda hurried it cuz I had other stuff to do. Mabye when I put the MP3 version up, I'll remix some new takes. Thanks for the honest feedback......Portisehead is Badass!!.....and it's a Conspiracy!!!..😱

HH? > I'll work on my "oomph"..... and thank you for the overall goodness.... 😄

I want to see the words!

Well damn!!...Yes ma'am... *salutes* .... 😑 ...no frigg'n thank you? ranting

Chorus----\/

Candy Kisses built like a condo
she's stacked all up to the top floor
She's hot, and liver than a rock show
Candy got me go'n and I don't want to stop, NO!

Verse-----\/

K-i-ss...e-s she mess with my mental state of mind
In time we'll have our recess
and play naughty games, I'll make her body sing
mingling in the dark, it's stark black, we seeing thangs

Like shoot'n stars that mark our arrival
My soul is dead, she said, I'll start the rival
and bring it back to life, passionate Frankenstein
casually spend'n time, the nasty that's hard to find

Dirt love'n, I call it that cuz it's deep
with naked skin she got the kisses to cover me
suddenly my problems seem so far away
skin so soft, I can't remember my harder days

She take me back to my long lost childhood
4th of July, this bottle rocket, man, she got me good
Candy firecracker, sugar plum, call her sparkplug
got my engine run'n red, she's dig'n me, I'm under dug

Wanna hug her tight and squeeze out the bad thangs
release all the sad thangs, man she's my Candaay
I got a sweet tooth, only one she can fix
my pleasure's whatever, as long as she's please'n it

Slip into the suits that we wore on our birthday
we move'n furniture, you'd think it was a hurricane
But it's the quiet storm, more like a flash flood
emotional avalanche, we snow blind, now that's love

Cuz I can't see nobody but you, baby
go'n insane inside my brain, you drive me f@ck'n crazy
where's the loony bin, cuz I'm check'n in
Heart swollen up, blood, I think it needs dexitrim

I got a sickness that seems past puppy love
got a fever and the only remedy is her hugs
Carmel apple kiss, is this what I think it is?
intense business, quick sand I'm sink'n in

Then she slapped me silly, Woke me up, pulled me out
*slap*...uh-uh uh-uh, toke it up, burn it down
So damn hot that I might need oven mitts
outta the blocks, the human race and she's running it

Go head girl, run that marathon
I know you look'n for the ring like Aragon
and lord knows you been through a lot of strife
live'n lies and all you want is a honest life

I'll give you truth and dare you not to honor that
reach inside a pull an umpaloompa out my wonka hat
just to make you laugh, cuz I love your smile
and I see you haven't used it in quite a while

I'll just be hear, when you need your boy
wait'n patiently to sail on our maiden voyage
into the sunset, undress and get busy
confess our luv, head spin'n, don't it make you dizzy

Verse frigg'n one!!...Got Damn! ....somebody stop me.....please....

I'll do the other two when feeling returns to my fingers... 😬

not gonna click on that 😬

I didn't think you'd be interested.....Maybe next song..... 😛

Originally posted by D-Double
Well damn!!...Yes ma'am... *salutes* .... 😑 ...no frigg'n thank you? ranting

Chorus----\/

Candy Kisses built like a condo
she's stacked all up to the top floor
She's hot, and liver than a rock show
Candy got me go'n and I don't want to stop, NO!

Verse-----\/

K-i-ss...e-s she mess with my mental state of mind
In time we'll have our recess
and play naughty games, I'll make her body sing
mingling in the dark, it's stark black, we seeing thangs

Like shoot'n stars that mark our arrival
My soul is dead, she said, I'll start the rival
and bring it back to life, passionate Frankenstein
casually spend'n time, the nasty that's hard to find

Dirt love'n, I call it that cuz it's deep
with naked skin she got the kisses to cover me
suddenly my problems seem so far away
skin so soft, I can't remember my harder days

She take me back to my long lost childhood
4th of July, this bottle rocket, man, she got me good
Candy firecracker, sugar plum, call her sparkplug
got my engine run'n red, she's dig'n me, I'm under dug

Wanna hug her tight and squeeze out the bad thangs
release all the sad thangs, man she's my Candaay
I got a sweet tooth, only one she can fix
my pleasure's whatever, as long as she's please'n it

Slip into the suits that we wore on our birthday
we move'n furniture, you'd think it was a hurricane
But it's the quiet storm, more like a flash flood
emotional avalanche, we snow blind, now that's love

Cuz I can't see nobody but you, baby
go'n insane inside my brain, you drive me f@ck'n crazy
where's the loony bin, cuz I'm check'n in
Heart swollen up, blood, I think it needs dexitrim

I got a sickness that seems past puppy love
got a fever and the only remedy is her hugs
Carmel apple kiss, is this what I think it is?
intense business, quick sand I'm sink'n in

Then she slapped me silly, Woke me up, pulled me out
*slap*...uh-uh uh-uh, toke it up, burn it down
So damn hot that I might need oven mitts
outta the blocks, the human race and she's running it

Go head girl, run that marathon
I know you look'n for the ring like Aragon
and lord knows you been through a lot of strife
live'n lies and all you want is a honest life

I'll give you truth and dare you not to honor that
reach inside a pull an umpaloompa out my wonka hat
just to make you laugh, cuz I love your smile
and I see you haven't used it in quite a while

I'll just be hear, when you need your boy
wait'n patiently to sail on our maiden voyage
into the sunset, undress and get busy
confess our luv, head spin'n, don't it make you dizzy

Verse frigg'n one!!...Got Damn! ....somebody stop me.....please....

I'll do the other two when feeling returns to my fingers... 😬

Woah! Doobs thats so sweet! I havent downloaded it yet! (thats why i wanted the words)

Hugs you to death and plants a huge kiss on your lips! I luv you Doobster!

😄 ......Glad you liked it, baby.....luv you too, sweet thang......*kiss*

...Here ya go Kostizzle.....an MP thrizzle!!!...... 😱

bt wizzle..........Homegurl Sharizzle wants feedback on her silky smoove vocals... 😄

http://s15.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=EA20B3F290FE5FFC0D2415A4A117D6AC

She has a nice voice, but it sounds like she's a little out of tune in the beginning 😬

Originally posted by D-Double
...Here ya go Kostizzle.....an MP thrizzle!!!...... 😱

bt wizzle..........Homegurl Sharizzle wants feedback on her silky smoove vocals... 😄

http://s15.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=EA20B3F290FE5FFC0D2415A4A117D6AC

WORD!!! 😄