\\\==D-Double's Dirty lil Demo ==///

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I can't listen to any of them coz it keeps saying the file has expired cry Sort it out D.....

Sorry about that Sy...... 🙁

The song links only stay open for 7 days......hey, who knew?..🤨

So I'll load them in again....which will probably take like two hours...scared

*yawn*...so I think I'll do it tomorrow.....

...but don't you worry none....I'll get'er fixed... 😉

Chorus....\/

Rap yo head around the sound
that gets you up and holds you down
murder rhymes I kill and bust it
Serve'n all you silly suckaz

Rap yo head and bang your melon
strike it up like you're a felon
side to side and in the middle
puzzle pieces solve the riddle

Originally posted by D-Double
As some of you know, I rhyme a little bit. I've been doing it for a while, but procrastinated on putting together a demo. Well Recently I've been inspired and have got back in habit. As I make my songs I'll post the link here for you to listen to. I got Hip-Hop run'n through my veins. Time to let it loose.

First one is dedicated to someone special......guess who. 😖hifty:

Please feel free to give me a pat on the back or tell me how much I suck. Constructive criticism would be helpful too. Enjoy, folks....

I chopped the beat from a Balil song and a Portisehead track, then put my secret sauce on it. This is not for sale. Promo only......

...So don't sue me...... 😉
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Title : Candy Kisses

Wordsmith : Doobleve

Backup Vocals : Homegurl Sharez

Beatwork : Doobleve

http://s4.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=265C55FE33BE9EC9941E28366FC5D5CB

My computer wont download that 😬 But anyways your probably pretty cool 😛

...Thanks, Rob.... 🙂

....I won't be able to upload the tracks again till New Years...

...I'm away from the ghetto studio and only have the CD with me....

...If anybody can help me reload the songs from that......Holla!!.... 😉

....*Pachino voice*......OKAY!!....I'm reloaded!!!....gunsmilie

For any who missed it......

Rap Yo Head....\/....MP3
http://s11.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1OBAZY9JVT31R0JQQBTTLVGP5Y

Candy Kisses...\/.....MP3
http://s11.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1XABLQ6P4M5K50QA0F2RTFCJIY

After listening to them about 150 times, I realise they need some work...

My computer's chock full to the top so the remixes may take a second....

I'll be back tomorrow with lyrics and pie!!...😱

And they'll be there til next Friday right? I won't be able to get them til tonight or over the weekend, but I'll definitely listen. Remind me again tomorrow 😄

Yeah, they're up for seven days...Will do, Miz Pimp'n.... 😉

Rap yo Head - verse one
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Try'n to rap my head around this thang called the rap game
break it up and crash things / shame on a whack lame

That do that same thing everybody else will do
run and tell it to your crew cuz no one else will mess with you

You better test the food before ingesting
my main course, force fed, ya get messy

It's interesting and damn so spicy
the kid rhyme nicely and cold like ice tea

Making British chaps say "Oh crikey!"
"crumbs", it's dumb / Overseas they gonna like me

but in the states I gotta make a new market
produce section, green leaf, and spark it

Set the world ablaze / staying in the phantom zone
spreading color to an industry that stays monochrome

Their ain't none at home that sound just like this
Put your money in your pocket cuz this sh!t is priceless

Righteous words that slur together perfect
only one in my village / niggaz call me Smurfette

Cuz I'm original / wordplay digital
all about the little ones / I got a bag of midget food

I just still on you with theses hay-makers
I'm a great poet / ya'll great shakers

Ya'll shook the real, shook the truth,
shook from Harlem / Now I can't even look at you

Ya'll crooked crews, spit'n that gun talk
ya'll lost the signal / ya must've had sunspots

So clear your ozone and brutha breath easy
you're kill'n our people / ya'll best believe me

I know ya need to eat / It's hot
Gotta find a way to beat the heat / ya sell rocks
And perpetuate the greed disease / so why not?
Walk them miles like Jesus feet

Everybody got an eye out for the shortcut
Fastest way to get big, just like horse nutz

Then bust loose and buy yourself a Benzo
I'm saying think about it / son slow your tempo

Ya pull jack moves / got a little scrilla stack
Now you paranoid / now tell me, how real is that

Sweat'n in the winter / Dinner plates full of dead men
Get your luggage out for when the guilt trip sets in

Impressed with the sprankle-sparkle
try'n to Mobb Deep with your ghetto carpool

Rings seem to gleam flashily / no substance
trust in the platinum, ya get gold dusted

You busted / I know where your mind's at
Bruthaz starving in the hood, and then you go buy that

Get your head straight / meditate properly
I shine in my mind, so there's no stop'n me
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Your pie....flirt....\/

Originally posted by D-Double
....*Pachino voice*......OKAY!!....I'm reloaded!!!....gunsmilie

For any who missed it......

Rap Yo Head....\/....MP3
http://s11.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1OBAZY9JVT31R0JQQBTTLVGP5Y

Candy Kisses...\/.....MP3
http://s11.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1XABLQ6P4M5K50QA0F2RTFCJIY

After listening to them about 150 times, I realise they need some work...

My computer's chock full to the top so the remixes may take a second....

I'll be back tomorrow with lyrics and pie!!...😱

Good stuff 👆

Originally posted by D-Double
....*Pachino voice*......OKAY!!....I'm reloaded!!!....gunsmilie

For any who missed it......

Rap Yo Head....\/....MP3
http://s11.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1OBAZY9JVT31R0JQQBTTLVGP5Y

Candy Kisses...\/.....MP3
http://s11.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1XABLQ6P4M5K50QA0F2RTFCJIY

After listening to them about 150 times, I realise they need some work...

My computer's chock full to the top so the remixes may take a second....

I'll be back tomorrow with lyrics and pie!!...😱

Thats pretty cool man 😄

Thanks ROB & Docta.... 😎

Rap yo Head - verse two
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Cross word puzzles and rubic's cubes
tease'n brains and smack'n dudes

Break'n codes and crack'n clues
back to the basics and make it new

Who's this doctor, surgeon, wordsmith
spin'n like a whirl'n dervish

D-Double-O-B rhythm merchant
when I buy the farm I'll respect my purchase

Replacing versions of misplaced mischief
labeled a brain cuz I'm, so called, gifted

When the album drops, you go get it
I rip these tracks while burn'n spliffsez

Ya'll ain't get'n nothing else till Christmas
so ya better be good and mind your business

Won't stop the planet rock until I'm finished
put'n smiles on the faces of all ya'll grinches

Funkiest in Hooville / the new sh!t, to real
got the groove / you can't keep your shoes still

Get your dome straight / slanted cranium
dogs is bark'n / relax and chain it up

To the fencepost / show your dentals
smile once in a while and use it like a rental

Improve your mental and clean your sprockets
Jump up, jettison, and then start rock'n

This hot hellion starts rebellions
french'n females / kiss and tell'n

Other pushers try and fail
cuz mine smokes better than the sh!t you sell'n

I'ma dope dealer cuz I push the dopeness
Ya'll stuck statically and look'n hopeless

Choke'n on the mic and lose'n focus
I'm magically delicious like hokus-pokus

Stroke'n these beats like lucky women
They flock to me cuz ya'll suck at sin'n

I got it down pat / where your mind at?
stuck in the gutter / man, I define that

The definition of super freaky
They all line up and try to meet me

Nerdly, worldly, and I'm slightly geeky
cuz I got my mind right and I think very deeply
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😗 .....blackberry....\/

clapping

Hoe my mother f.uckin Gawd Doob, Rap Yo Head is Pimp'n!! I just listened to it and I was boppin away in front of the comp, head noddin, smile grinnin.... Go on sunshyne 😄

Just listened to Candy Kisses and I am now insanely jealous schmoll It was lovely cry

😄 ...Thank you deeply, Sy....you so crazy... 😉

...and...um....don't be...cuz you're lovelier....flirt

Rap yo Head - verse three
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Riddle me this / is it a dark day come'n?
Is it the wish for us to keep on run'n?

From this actual factual substance
I'm ask'n ya'll animals, do you really love it?

This thang that started in the ghetto
cut'n up a record / dice'n heavy metal

Now you can't walk a mile without it
bump'n in cars and bang'n houses

Thump'n them bars got katz stunt'n major
acting like stars / I ain't taste'n their flavor

I'm a bitter n!gga for what they did to my artform
fake heavy-hitters got beef and wanna start more

In this Hart's war I move generally
while they pop'n crystal and get'n drunk off of Hennessey

Why? cuz 2-pac did it?
Recite'n his lines / Ya think you're deep while you swig it

The only thing deep is the brainwash boosh-wa (sp?)
bubble'n off something you heard / my word's too raw

So take your shoes off and feel the real
I ain't king yet, but still ya kneel

You got caught up in the image and kill the deal
I'm in the old-school business like reel-2-reel

So get deep and get hip to the bedrock
D's something new and he's cook'n like a lead pot

Till I said stop, you move rapidly
my verbs are a cure for your mental atrophy

Get your bring jog'n / hog'n up the knowledge
your online professor's logging in to college

First lesson "head-check 101"
burn'n neurons like the summer sun

Some sizzlean, some fry with the phatness
some tell truth and some lie like crackhead

What's happening / just look around
head steady nod'n / ya'll hooked to sound

Like the first time ya got the good nookie...WOW
The pro got you look'n like a rookie...NoW

OWWW

Did that hurt a little bit?
came to bring the pain and squash all the silly sh!t

Silly like a sucka take'n themselves serious
Check your head, baby, cuz I'm better...period

(talk'n smack)...\/
A-yo...Why does this beat remind me of Fat Albert...
It's like...Fat Albert meets Dr.Who....Or Somethin'..
Yeah...and his name was Doobleve'...
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😇....peach cobbler...\/

Originally posted by D-Double
😄 ...Thank you deeply, Sy....you so crazy... 😉

...and...um....don't be...cuz you're lovelier....flirt

You flatterer you blushing

tee-hee.... 😄

Ok, so I'll have another done by Friday....maybe sooner...

And for any who look at this thread, I thought I'd make it interactive. I have three songs and beats ready to go. I just have to spit them and chip away at the tracks. I'll let ya'll choose where I put my energy by giving you the title and a little description.

...yeah, I'm sure this will go over well...disgust

Millionaire - a banger about the root of all evil...

Breakdance - an old-school tribute with a breakbeat/deep-house background...

D-Double - me acting crazy and spit'n like a lunatic over bass-heavy hotness...

What's your poison? drunk

Millionaire, it's obviously about me fab

Millionaire - a banger about the root of all evil...

Breakdance - an old-school tribute with a breakbeat/deep-house background...

D-Double - me acting crazy and spit'n like a lunatic over bass-heavy hotness...

1 point for "Millioniare"......flirt

Man, Rap yo Head kicks so much ass. Good stuff 👆

Thanks, Solo...😄 ...I really appreciate it, ma man.
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Millionaire - a banger about the root of all evil...

Breakdance - an old-school tribute with a breakbeat/deep-house background...

D-Double - me acting crazy and spit'n like a lunatic over bass-heavy hotness...

It's still 1 to zippity-zip... 😉 .....please place your vote, my peoples! .... ✅

Originally posted by D-Double
Rap Yo Head....\/....MP3
http://s11.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1OBAZY9JVT31R0JQQBTTLVGP5Y

omg steve i cant believe you wrote that 😱 it's sooo good i love it so much 😊
i even got up and danced towards the end 😮 no jokes!!

im so proud of you well done!! you should sell your stuff to the public!! 😎