Harry Potter and The Half Blooded Prince - Discussion

Started by teakwonjoe65 pages

this is well...interesting... i kind of stoped at the first page, but this is really long, and i'd like to know what it takes to stop, and write all of this... so, do you have a life?...or what?- not that it's not good, but do you?

so, you can't have a life if you want to wright something for fun? it's just like if you wanted to go play video games during your free time. Tons of people do that, and we (most of us) don't ask them if they have a life. it's to bad you stopped reading, teakwonjoe, i think this is a better way to spend your time. no offence to those who like video games, cause i like them too.
I'm not upset i just wanted to make a point, that there's nothing wrong with doing something you like. and there's no nice way to ask "do you have a life." your being either critical or just not thinking it though. you could have asked it in a different way.

Originally posted by teakwonjoe
this is well...interesting... i kind of stoped at the first page, but this is really long, and i'd like to know what it takes to stop, and write all of this... so, do you have a life?...or what?- not that it's not good, but do you?

I think you'd better sit down, get sober, and think about what you've just said to an author who has great potential.
Idiot.

Originally posted by teakwonjoe
this is well...interesting... i kind of stoped at the first page, but this is really long, and i'd like to know what it takes to stop, and write all of this... so, do you have a life?...or what?- not that it's not good, but do you?

I love writing, I thought I wanted to be a writer but changed my mind because I don't think that Im that good!! I have a life, and Im totally into my sport etc but I do this in my spare time. Normally when Im in bed early I'll just get out my book and write something and then i'll get bored and do something else!!

i think that you can have a life AND write at the same time.... you just have to prioritize!!!!

Sorry spidergrl that i haven't been on in a while... i've had a lot of homework lately......HARD homework......but i'll try to balance out my stuff so that i can keep on track woth your story... and by the way the sorting hat song was FABULOUS!!!

Originally posted by innocnt4lyf
Sorry spidergrl that i haven't been on in a while... i've had a lot of homework lately......HARD homework......but i'll try to balance out my stuff so that i can keep on track woth your story... and by the way the sorting hat song was FABULOUS!!!

Yea home work does suck!! But you got to make sure that you do it, and stay on top of school work. Well thats what my Dad says, If I get behind in my schooling then Im not allowed computer, phone, cell phone and sport!! I hate it! But thank you very much for still reading it!!

i hate homework, BUT it must be done. GRRRRRR!!!!!! 😠 o-well

Well, then your reward can be my story~!~ lol

YAY! 😄

lol, im typing some now!! Post soon!!

Go the story! woohoo!

Sorry abou tnot posting yesturday, Im going to finishing typing and will be up in an hour or so......SORI !!!

Sorry about not posting yesturday, Im going to finish typing and will be up in an hour or so......SORI !!!

its been an hour. i dont smell anything *sniffs* oh crap i was wrong *runs of looking for chocolate*

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you should write a different type of story and get that published because the skills are there you just need a different plot

Im not that good at writing new storys. Im typing as fast as i can now, i promise it will be a big part!!

By the way, I have a Harry Potter forum you guys should check out!!

www.pure-bloodcentral.tk/

A few rows back from the front was the small boy Harry saw while coming off the train, he looked even more nervous.
"Almond, Peter." She called, and fron the front came forward a tall boy. He had brown hair and looked alittle scruffy. Peter made his way to the front and sat down. Professor McGonagal placed the hat on his head, and a few sceonds later it yelled.
"Slytherin!" The Slytherin's clapped loudly and the rest of the houses clapped once or twice and then stopped.
"Arquetter, Joan." A small ginger haired girl walked forward and could almost pass for Ron's sister.
The names went on and house after house got called out.
"Perhart, Henry." And Harry looked up to find the small boy he saw before hand making his way to the front. Harry watched him as he sat down and the hat nearly swallowed his head. After quite along time the hat yelled, "Gryffindor!" Harry clapped. For some reason he was clapping more then he was for other people.
After what seemed like an hour the final name was called,
"Zewleur, Kevene." A small english boy come forward and was put in Ravenclaw.
Dumbledor Stood up once more.
"I will keep you no longer fron your meals." He said and with that the long house tables filled with plates of food. The chatter rose quickly and the meals slowly started to be eatten away.
Ron loved the marverlous idea of everytime a bowl was 1/4 empty it would be re-filled right infront of your eyes. Hermione wasn't so keen on this idea, as the House Elves would be very busy. Ron and Harry finally managed to convince her not to make any more cloths for them. They used the reason that Dobbey has to clean it all by himseld and its not fair. She finally gave in, but promised to make them both some winter scalves and hates. Ron gave harry a worried look as they had later agreed that they were almost as bad as Mrs Weasley's style of jumper. They soon were in a deep whispering conversation about the sorting hat's song.
"What's it all about. "Ron said, looking at Hermione hoping she knew something he didn't.

(This was a little rushed, sorry its not that good!! type some more up later!! )

"Well Ron, if you listened to it carefully you can see things in it. Example: This Hogwarts is in two. You must choose 'one' or 'two'. Don't you see what it's saying?" She asked, looking at both of them for at least alittle under standance. Ron looked buzzard and Harry seemed to be thinking hard about something.
"Is the Hat saying that Lord Voldermort is going to return and will want more people! It's saying we must choose between Hogwarts and him?" He asked, and Ron looked like a ghost.
"Exactly!" Hermione exclaimed. "That's what I was thinking. But it said Houses will be broken?!"
"Maybe not all the Gryffindors want to be loyal to Hogwarts?" Harry questioned. "But im sure where the Slytherin's loyalty lies!" He said, slightly raising his eye brows as both Hermione and Ron agreed.
Slytherin were known as 1. for being dark, evil, cunning and everything else in that category.
Harry knew that if it was between Lord Voldermort and Hogwarts and their loyalty to Dumbledor; he would bet all the money he had that they would all go one certain way!!
He sat there for awhile and then looked up at the staff table and left his potatoes to get cooled.
Every teacher was in full discussion. Professor Dumbledor and Professor McGonagal were in full talk and both had worried faces. There was snape at the end of the table with a slight glee-ful smile. A worried thought entered Harry and sank to the bottom of his stomach.
What happens if Dumbledor gave snape the job, Harry got even more worried. IT would explain why there's no new teacher and also Snape has wanted this job for years and he hasn't managed to get that smirk off his face alday.
Harry didn't share his thoughts with Hermione and Ron, just in case he might be wrong, but it didn't look that way!
Everyone was soon emptying their plates and half an hour later the food and bawls were waved away by a flick of Dumbledor's hand.
Both Harry and Ron felt their stomachs had grown twice as big as when they entered the hall.
Soon everyone had finised their conversations, and awaited Dumbledor. He stood up and walked towards; a twinkle in his eye.
"Welcome back for most of you and welcome to our new students. We have a few matters to go over before you return to your house dormitory to sleep. As you all heard the Sorting Hat song, I would advice you to think about it more carefully. Not many of you got the chance to be properly informed about the events which took place last year. Last year Lord Voldermort returned and with many of his death eater. THe Ministary is now fully aware of his return, and so is the Ministar." He finished.

CHAPTER 13

Many students flinched at Lord Voldermorts name and also many made an effert to turn around and steer at Harry, which made him very comfortable.
"But on a good note, the House Quiddich Cup is up for grabs and I believe we know our Captains. For Revenclaw, we have Cho Chang."