To paraphrase Peter Griffin, if by 'take a good look at' you mean 'imagined a naked lady' then yes...
I'll convert the force power selections into proper lists before long- obviously, for future reference, despite how the powers are chosen, it is preferable to present them to me in list form. I'll check for errors then.
Takuan Soho
Takuan was born on the planet of Rellian Prime, a peaceful, quiet world deep outside republican space, where nothing ever really happens. This very trait makes the planet extremely hospitable to any lowlife who wishes to…lay low for a while. A smuggler seaking shelter after a forced landing kills Takuan’s mother as he is very young. The smuggler is then killed by the locals, in an attempt to preserve their peace. His mother’s death shocks Takuan terribly, him being at an early age, and remains only with his father, who teaches him anything he needs to know as he grows up. In time, becoming aware of his powers, Takuan displays them without second thoughts, becoming hated and feared by the locals. He therefore, later, leaves the planet and his father, which he never sees again, in an uregistered transport cultivating hatred for his kinsmen and not understanding why he is shunned, hating them for making him leave his father. His rage feeds his powers, and he sees that. Malfunctions force the ship to crash land on the small planet of M02513 in the Gilarra star system. M02513 (M for mining) is a planet engufled in civil war between locals who are trying to free themselves from the slave miners position, and the militia, who is trying to keep them in control. Takuan, grown up by now…spends some months trying to find a transport off the planet, time in which the militia recruits him as a valued member, after so succesfully convincing mining sindicate leaders that it is best to submit…as the casualties number will not be worth the hassle.
Militia leaders recommend him to higher leaders and Takuan soon finds himself getting the credit he deserves by working for different small crime lords, untill he one day ends up leading an assault team against the hutts. Which are quick to send in Kuylen to deal with the situation. This is how they meet, and Kuylen spares him seeing a great ally in him, teaching Takuan all he needs to know about the Universe, the force and weilding a lightsaber, weapons of which Takuan had only vaguely heard. Takuan’s quests with Kuylen have made him very driven in getting what he wants and experience has made him wiser and more thoughtful before engaging into anything.
Vlad Shafran, played by Tidus
Athlete (Type D)
PHYSICAL
Strength 8
Agility 7
Dexterity 7
Speed 8
MENTAL
Charisma 5
Intelligence 7
Willpower 7
Perception 7
FORCE 12
Force Attack: 12
Force Defence: 13
SKILLS
Lightsabre= 13
Combat= 13
Guns= 13
Jedi Lore +5= 12
Languages +2= 9
Pilot +1= 8
Fix It+2= 9
Kinetic
Push/Pull
Agility
Jump
Master Jump
Flying charge
Flip
Defensive Leap
Fall
Master Fall
Dodge
Sidestep
Evade
Martial Tree
Draw
Blur, Blow
Strike,
SwordWhirl
Twirl
Defend
Riposte
Living Force Tree
Sense
Scan
Cosmic Tree
Intuition
Dreams
Innercalm
Guidance.
Merits:
1 merit to Famous Master: Mace Windu himself.
2 merits to Mentor: Mace Windu himself.
Agile Combatand Level 3
Force warrior level 1
GUN Tricks
Flurry Fire Level 2
Carnival of Carnage Level 2
TRIP
Hard Strike
Channel
Surprise Strike
I wanna change it to this 😉