Originally posted by Deathblow
Almost forgot about this 😱 Sorry to keep you waiting on Death, literally.Ok, now you're just talking shit, every line is ''colonic''/
I'll hang your first child by it's umbilical cord, just to be ironic/
Lyrically I'm cracking your chest cavity savagely like kung-fu kicks/
You all SFX and no depth like John Woo flicks/
I flip with scorn, I spit on your ripped an torn rhyming scheme/
You belong in the Dark Ages, Death sends you back in Vik Vaughn's time-machine/
Damage residual, causing you ''Domestic Violence'' like Bobby Digital/
A lyrical miracle, on C-Mast with an Ultramagnetic ''beatdown'' that's ''critical''/
I'll stomp this crazed dwarf, like the ex-Duke of Wellington/
Drop lines to sever spines and smash your exo-skeleton/
Only way you ''spitting fire'' is if I set your tongue alight, in a drout/
Burn faster than a phoenix, but you won't ''rise again'' once I stamp your ashes out/
I maul and clout, disintegrate your face like nuclear fallout/
Plus I de-rail your ''train of thought''/
And suggest you mail eBay back those amateur rhymes you bought/
And get your money back, and strap it to your mic so I can ''Kill Bills''/
I'd like to compliment you, but honestly your lyrics ain't fit to be landfills/
Severing your sections like vivisections dissecting lyrics, ''cutting you off'' like dial-up connections/
Like an ex-Hun, ''Caeser'' Death on closer inspection see's you ain't worth my attention/
Spitting like Lil Jon's got his hand up your ass, like Jim Henson/
See I flow like O.J Simpson: murderous/
And bite you in three different places at once like Cerberus/
CM beating DB as likely Steve Hawking becoming an Olympic fencer/
Basically you got as much chance as Bush has to join MENSA/
I'll ''cannabalise'' your ''Atoms'', like Vast Aire and Shamar/
Face it, you couldn't outshine me if you strapped yourself to a star.
That is some good shit there man. 😮💨
Originally posted by Deathblow
All bragging aside, read my last verse, then read yours. Honestly, yours is comparatively generic.And spank you for the BIG UPZ from kool and anal 😎
True I had been doing poems all day, but look at the others...
one victory isn't a war... 😮💨
Nice rhyme I aint gonna lie...
Originally posted by Deathblow
Almost forgot about this 😱 Sorry to keep you waiting on Death, literally.Ok, now you're just talking shit, every line is ''colonic''/
I'll hang your first child by it's umbilical cord, just to be ironic/
Lyrically I'm cracking your chest cavity savagely like kung-fu kicks/
You all SFX and no depth like John Woo flicks/
I flip with scorn, I spit on your ripped an torn rhyming scheme/
You belong in the Dark Ages, Death sends you back in Vik Vaughn's time-machine/
Damage residual, causing you ''Domestic Violence'' like Bobby Digital/
A lyrical miracle, on C-Mast with an Ultramagnetic ''beatdown'' that's ''critical''/
I'll stomp this crazed dwarf, like the ex-Duke of Wellington/
Drop lines to sever spines and smash your exo-skeleton/
Only way you ''spitting fire'' is if I set your tongue alight, in a drout/
Burn faster than a phoenix, but you won't ''rise again'' once I stamp your ashes out/
I maul and clout, disintegrate your face like nuclear fallout/
Plus I de-rail your ''train of thought''/
And suggest you mail eBay back those amateur rhymes you bought/
And get your money back, and strap it to your mic so I can ''Kill Bills''/
I'd like to compliment you, but honestly your lyrics ain't fit to be landfills/
Severing your sections like vivisections dissecting lyrics, ''cutting you off'' like dial-up connections/
Like an ex-Hun, ''Caeser'' Death on closer inspection see's you ain't worth my attention/
Spitting like Lil Jon's got his hand up your ass, like Jim Henson/
See I flow like O.J Simpson: murderous/
And bite you in three different places at once like Cerberus/
CM beating DB as likely Steve Hawking becoming an Olympic fencer/
Basically you got as much chance as Bush has to join MENSA/
I'll ''cannabalise'' your ''Atoms'', like Vast Aire and Shamar/
Face it, you couldn't outshine me if you strapped yourself to a star.
Just for the hell of it...
You keep on coming with these stale rhymes
like shawshank in redemption your shit needs sunshine
Murder is like death is like time is like treason
all of your rhymes simply say you can't reason
so I cut you off, quicker than a bill
you just cant touch it, like shaquelle o neal
You think you got me down with your multiple clients
Your lyrics are in more trouble than a case with Kobe Bryant
son while good, your intelligence is of a child
go talk to michael jackson, he'll make you smile
Like marvel comics, my feats are always canon
go talk to dock octagon, a.k.a your "shannon"
You keep on trying to bust my chest with a kung fu kick
I'll take your legs and break them, like doing the splits
you bringing treble, I'm packing the bass
hitting you harder, than a stone cold stunner in the face
Lets stop the hip
you just got ripped
reminiscent of a child when I used to bust their lip
I feel no pain
its all in the same
Your rhymes went down faster than a chokeslam from cain
I take out my machette and slash out your vocal cords
truth is you just got owned worse than jon at the music awards
Like lord of the rings, your shits to old school
Your pride that I took is the only thing I owe you
Even if you feel to ****ed up and sad to respond
Just remember to pick up my clothes that I left at your moms
Don't feel bad, don't get mad like an upstart
I just served you up like a half off sale at wal mart
For wasting my time, thats gonna cost you against your will
555 toreassup drive is where you can send the bill
I did what you said and altered my game
I cashed a five dollar check and your ass left change
C-master is the name you need to remember
Listen to those rhymes they just said TIMBER!!!
C-Master 2005 😮💨
Originally posted by Dr. OctagonI'm fine man, I know that last one was bad, I can admit.
🙄 😐 you hear me? that's how effective my rhymes were 😐 wow... 😐nah im just kidding. u think this a little too seriously
I like rhyming in person more, so there is no time to think.
No brags aside octagon, what you got?
im ina rage so they locked me in this ****in cage
may as well tear up this page then get drunk an say ima ****in sage
dont ever ask me my age
cuz the difference between us starts at the age an ends wit ur hourly pay nowhere above minimum wage
im J to the mutha****in P never to be confused or called a wannabe of any other wigger who listen to E to the mutha****in M/
my skills bills an wheels is ridiculous compared to you cant even score an easy ace out the red light district
now dont be jealous at how i spit it have some patience
dont be anxious if you heard I fell off
truth is maybe in another world I fell off
cuz magazines an people lie truth is your sorry ass excuse for a single fell off before it even had a chance to take off
oh your girl lied to your ass right from the get go it only takes her 2 minutes to break off/
dont worry about this im not done this shit didnt even start to take off
dont worry about your ride its mine so stop cryin an shake it off
dont worry about me when you see me in a bens high as hell in the city stop fantasizing you me an shake it off
dont worry about your family after you talked all that smack cuz ima be honest this aint a freestyle murder this is the wake of your life
I tried idk if its any good
Originally posted by Deathblow
Almost forgot about this 😱 Sorry to keep you waiting on Death, literally.Ok, now you're just talking shit, every line is ''colonic''/
I'll hang your first child by it's umbilical cord, just to be ironic/
Lyrically I'm cracking your chest cavity savagely like kung-fu kicks/
You all SFX and no depth like John Woo flicks/
I flip with scorn, I spit on your ripped an torn rhyming scheme/
You belong in the Dark Ages, Death sends you back in Vik Vaughn's time-machine/
Damage residual, causing you ''Domestic Violence'' like Bobby Digital/
A lyrical miracle, on C-Mast with an Ultramagnetic ''beatdown'' that's ''critical''/
I'll stomp this crazed dwarf, like the ex-Duke of Wellington/
Drop lines to sever spines and smash your exo-skeleton/
Only way you ''spitting fire'' is if I set your tongue alight, in a drout/
Burn faster than a phoenix, but you won't ''rise again'' once I stamp your ashes out/
I maul and clout, disintegrate your face like nuclear fallout/
Plus I de-rail your ''train of thought''/
And suggest you mail eBay back those amateur rhymes you bought/
And get your money back, and strap it to your mic so I can ''Kill Bills''/
I'd like to compliment you, but honestly your lyrics ain't fit to be landfills/
Severing your sections like vivisections dissecting lyrics, ''cutting you off'' like dial-up connections/
Like an ex-Hun, ''Caeser'' Death on closer inspection see's you ain't worth my attention/
Spitting like Lil Jon's got his hand up your ass, like Jim Henson/
See I flow like O.J Simpson: murderous/
And bite you in three different places at once like Cerberus/
CM beating DB as likely Steve Hawking becoming an Olympic fencer/
Basically you got as much chance as Bush has to join MENSA/
I'll ''cannabalise'' your ''Atoms'', like Vast Aire and Shamar/
Face it, you couldn't outshine me if you strapped yourself to a star.
Why you trying to get on my dude Deathblow/
Is it me, or are you striking to low/
I'll jab you and take out your ribs with style/
Come on now, no need for denial/
This guy talking about "C-Mast with an Ultramagnetic ''beatdown'' that's ''critical''/
Look in my rhymes, you just made a new foe/
Stop rhyming, you might endanger your flow/
And no need for banning me cause I got at you/
Tomorrows a new day. But you better start checking your lyrics though/
I'll come at you at DSL speed/
Hit you so hard when you spoke you bleed/
When you look at my rhymes you'll turn into stone/
I'm like Medusa double clutching the mic, I left you scared and cold/
You can be Son, I can Stanford/
Take back those those rhymes you could hardly afford/
Your outdated/
Drop the Atomic Bomb I call skills on you, before you know it you disintegrated/
Your like the 13, with out the PG/
I'll stay spitting cause I'm fresher than HDTV/
Even with 2 antennas you couldn't see me/
You going against me is like Christopher Reeves riding a stallion/
Look at my shit Death', I already won/
I was once in a cell, under a lock
I got the guard, gave him a sock
I had to get out
where to, I had to escape
I needed to leave before it was too late
so I thought real fast, I was a quick schemer
I headed to the room with the washers and cleaners
within in a few hours it was nice and quiet
snuck on out, to avoid causing a riot
met a man, his name was cain
he said if I helped him, my reward wouldn't be in vain
so I took the keys and let him out
thinking he would help me without doubt
I looked again, and saw his face
he cheated with my wife, and took her out for a date
as much as I wanted to escape, I couldn't regret
what he did, and why I was so upset
a fight ensued,out in the parking lot
a sniper hurriedly located the spot
seeing this as opportunity, I pushed him at the light
a bullet was shot, thus ending the fight
I had to escape, and get out quick
To do this well, I had to be slick
Jumped on the bike I raced for freedom
The cops gave chase, I said "shit who needs them"
So i parked my bike, and went for a swim
the dogs came after, not going out on a limb
came back up, where was I then
back in the cell a result of my sin
how did I get there do you ask
the fight with my wife, about cain that cracked
Originally posted by Inspectah Deckdaaaamn
[B]Why you trying to get on my dude Deathblow/
Is it me, or are you striking to low/
I'll jab you and take out your ribs with style/
Come on now, no need for denial/
This guy talking about "C-Mast with an Ultramagnetic ''beatdown'' that's ''critical''/
Look in my rhymes, you just made a new foe/
Stop rhyming, you might endanger your flow/
And no need for banning me cause I got at you/
Tomorrows a new day. But you better start checking your lyrics though/
I'll come at you at DSL speed/
Hit you so hard when you spoke you bleed/
When you look at my rhymes you'll turn into stone/
I'm like Medusa double clutching the mic, I left you scared and cold/
You can be Son, I can Stanford/
Take back those those rhymes you could hardly afford/
Your outdated/
Drop the Atomic Bomb I call skills on you, before you know it you disintegrated/
Your like the 13, with out the PG/
I'll stay spitting cause I'm fresher than HDTV/
Even with 2 antennas you couldn't see me/
You going against me is like Christopher Reeves riding a stallion/
Look at my shit Death', I already won/ [/B]
Pain is the only thing in your games
Jesus christ, you're all a bunch of lames
Acting big and bad
SuckNBlow you're just the new fad
Preaching about your greatness
Ignoring your obvious GAYness
Have nothing but hate in your rhymes
Acting like everyone but you commits crimes
Everyone here outshines you
Even when their rhymes... stink like poo
C'mastah ain't no better, sinigng like 'pac
Oh great, what a big fecking shock
Everyone in here full of hate
It's enough to make my nerves grate
Death I hope you all get blowed
Guess what? You reap what you sew
Never sing 'bout anything but death
cuz it takes a lot of your mainstream to heft
This entire threads just a bunch of ego's battlin'
Well guess what? You're brains need to start paddlin'.