The Rest is Still Unwritten

Started by Coldfire11 pages

Originally posted by Syren
True... but then, neither have I. Sometimes the inspiration dies 😬

How true... how true... *sigh*

hug

Originally posted by Syren
True... but then, neither have I. Sometimes the inspiration dies 😬
She should have more inspiration then ever!

Sorry guys, i have a forum now whichg takes alot of time..and then my father died.. But i have wrote some more

What is Love

Love is a special feeling
that may break your heart someday
Love can be broken
lost and taken away

Love can be forgotten
shared and torn apart
Nothing will help you once he breaks your heart

But cheer up now
for there is good with the bad
Put a smile on your face
and don't look so sad

Love is a feeling
you'll learn to adore
Cuz once you get to know it
you'll be lookin for more

The beauty of the light

I wish to grasp just a portion
This tender part of me can't wait
I dream to meet this awkward light
For it brightens when I'm sad
And it dims when I look away

For it can not leave me alone
Without it I come see my grave
For it takes me from that dark place
And it brings me to see beauty

This love is unconditional
This bond is unforgettable
And this tender part of me is...
Beauty

"What Is Love" seems to shift from aspect of love to another leaving both sides incomplete. (did that even make sense? 😕 )

"The Beauty Of The Light" is almost perfect to me. I like it. ✅

Originally posted by Frozen kisses
[b]What is Love

Love is a special feeling
that may break your heart someday
Love can be broken
lost and taken away

Love can be forgotten
shared and torn apart
Nothing will help you once he breaks your heart

But cheer up now
for there is good with the bad
Put a smile on your face
and don't look so sad

Love is a feeling
you'll learn to adore
Cuz once you get to know it
you'll be lookin for more [/B]

EXACTLY!!!! 😱 direct, and to the point! no need for embelishments to say what "love" is....no poetic ode, or glossed phrasings to describe something simple yet so complicated as something of what eludes us, but desperate to have and cling to...(does anyone even know what i'm talking about?) 😛
Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
[b]"What Is Love" seems to shift from aspect of love to another leaving both sides incomplete. (did that even make sense? 😕 )

"The Beauty Of The Light" is almost perfect to me. I like it. ✅ [/B]

almost? 🤨

nothing is perfect

its not "cool" to be sad.

Im not saying its cool to be sad.. I am not sad...I am quite happy

REALLY? 😬

Yes really.

Originally posted by Frozen kisses
Im not saying its cool to be sad.. I am not sad...I am quite happy
right on!!!! 😱

[b]Angel Tears[b]

When she cries
Her tears are always left to hide
Her beautiful world
seems like such a lie
They call her home heaven
Yet she still feels in hell
Forever her loneliness she has to dwell
Her tears are made of diamonds
and pearls
her hair is perfectly darkened curls
Her lips are the shape of a heart
but she was sad from the very start
that she learn to feel
and now she's left with all the pain to deal
She still cant understand
How everyone fits in SO beautifully
Her tears starts to enhance
She's always crying in silence
It has come true,her darkest fears
She's crying eternal Angel Tears

It all started with a seed
A simple smile A simple hug
A little water A little sun
Some flirting,some fun
The rose began to grow
The love for eachother began to show
"I Love You" was beginning to exchange
Both our lives began to re-arrange
The rose grew stronger by time
Hours of talking were always online
Soon the rose wasn't watered
Arguments we can't avoid
The rose began to dry
All I did was cry
Thats when you always lied
"Let Break up" I said
Because the rose is now dead

Originally posted by T.V.O.T.I.
its not "cool" to be sad.

It's also not 'cool' to assume someone is of a certain emotional state just by reading a few words written on a forum.

She writes with great emotion, but that does not mean she's depressed or sad... just talented.

Frozen

Iam frozen
In my own body,

Iam frozen
In my own world,

I want to get out of this shell i have created,

I want to melt away the ice,
I want to come out,
be set free.

Every time I close my eyes,
you are there
haunting my dreams
into the dark and lonely night
but every time I open my eyes
and try to get a glimpse of who you are,
you are never here
I don't know who you are,
I wonder if I ever will
it would help,
if I could see your face,
whenever we are together
but it seems its always hidden
but i have gotten used to this
But do not worry,
I'll be patient,
just for you
whenever you are ready,
to show me who you are
but until that time,
I will just look forward,
till the time we can meet again

Originally posted by Syren
It's also not 'cool' to assume someone is of a certain emotional state just by reading a few words written on a forum.

She writes with great emotion, but that does not mean she's depressed or sad... just talented.


ok who said I was refering to whats posted in here? 😬 Last I checked PM do exist.

I ****ing give up trying to be your friend, Sarah's friend, Klaudia's friend and Ash's friend.

*leaves*