The Rest is Still Unwritten

Started by Enslaved11 pages

It’s not my fault I do this you tore me a part
my heart felt in two pieces, my mind unsure
were to start.

Why did I take it I don’t think I’ll ever know
why, all I can remember is every single night
you made me cry. We used to be good friends
but now everything’s changed.

I just want you to remember I did nothing
to you, I took it with shame and now look
at what I have to go through ~

~ Behind angel eyes
No one understands
They don’t see the blood on her hand
Nor the black soul they just don’t understand

Behind angel eyes
It is nothing but black
It eats her inside
For everything she lack

Behind angel eyes
There is nothing but sorrow
Black tears
She sees no tomorrow

Behind angel eyes
No one flies in the sky
Alone and cold
The black tears they do flow

Behind angel eyes
There is black blood too
Memory seeps from her vein
It’s nothing to her, just a little pain

Behind angel eyes
Her heart is ripped opened
And once again sewed back shut
To god she is nothing but a $lut

Behind angel eyes
Its nothing but sad
She remembers everything she once had
She misses them ..she misses her wee lad

Behind angel eyes
Everything is shattered
She’s no longer pure of heart
To get back together, where would she start

Behind angel eyes
A little girl cries
No one sees her way up in the skies
Yes that’s what’s behind angel eyes ~

~The life I wanted
I had it all worked out
Perfectionism doesn't always reap results
I never stopped to doubt

You cannot have everything
I recently learned
And if you aim too high
you'll end up getting burned

You will overload your mind
And your health will pay the fee
you'll be reckless, stupid, and dangerous
you'll end up just like me

When i know i've really lost
Is when you don't return my call
I know I deserve this now
But that does nothing to soften the fall~

Originally posted by Enslaved
Guys can you live my spellings alone please..

Sarah, surely making your poetry perfect is a good thing? It's not a reflection on you as a person... the whole point in posting your work is to get some criticism, whether good or bad. Constructive adjustments can only be beneficial. Don't be so sensitive 😬

Originally posted by Enslaved
~ Behind angel eyes
No one understands
They don’t see the blood on her hand
Nor the black soul they just don’t understand

Behind angel eyes
It is nothing but black
It eats her inside
For everything she lack

Behind angel eyes
There is nothing but sorrow
Black tears
She sees no tomorrow

Behind angel eyes
No one flies in the sky
Alone and cold
The black tears they do flow

Behind angel eyes
There is black blood too
Memory seeps from her vein
It’s nothing to her, just a little pain

Behind angel eyes
Her heart is ripped opened
And once again sewed back shut
To god she is nothing but a $lut

Behind angel eyes
Its nothing but sad
She remembers everything she once had
She misses them ..she misses her wee lad

Behind angel eyes
Everything is shattered
She’s no longer pure of heart
To get back together, where would she start

Behind angel eyes
A little girl cries
No one sees her way up in the skies
Yes that’s what’s behind angel eyes ~

Holy shit! This is brilliant Sarah, I love the repetition of 'Behind angel eyes..', it's so powerful.

I love it 😉

Obviously you've a lot of pain in your work...they're good, nonetheless.

Originally posted by Syren
Sarah, surely making your poetry perfect is a good thing? It's not a reflection on you as a person... the whole point in posting your work is to get some criticism, whether good or bad. Constructive adjustments can only be beneficial. Don't be so sensitive 😬

I was having a laugh..Honest..I shud have put Lol at the end of it..but riley was buggin me

Originally posted by Syren
Holy shit! This is brilliant Sarah, I love the repetition of 'Behind angel eyes..', it's so powerful.

I love it 😉

I wrote it when i was at my lowest...im glad you like it

You have seen some real scheisse in life, huh hon? Phew... hope it is much better now. If not, gimme names! I'll break some knees for ya! 😂

*prepares shotgun*

I'm in! 😱

lol you lot

Originally posted by Enslaved
lol you lot

F'in A, babe. F'in A. 😉

I miss this thread...

did jaxx leave?

More or less, she's here, but not here...

She didn't leave, she has her own forum to focus on right now. Amongst other things 😊

ahhh... well, hmmmmmmm bring her back for a few yo!

She hasn't written poems in a long, long time...

yeah...

True... but then, neither have I. Sometimes the inspiration dies 😬