It’s not my fault I do this you tore me a part
my heart felt in two pieces, my mind unsure
were to start.
Why did I take it I don’t think I’ll ever know
why, all I can remember is every single night
you made me cry. We used to be good friends
but now everything’s changed.
I just want you to remember I did nothing
to you, I took it with shame and now look
at what I have to go through ~
~ Behind angel eyes
No one understands
They don’t see the blood on her hand
Nor the black soul they just don’t understand
Behind angel eyes
It is nothing but black
It eats her inside
For everything she lack
Behind angel eyes
There is nothing but sorrow
Black tears
She sees no tomorrow
Behind angel eyes
No one flies in the sky
Alone and cold
The black tears they do flow
Behind angel eyes
There is black blood too
Memory seeps from her vein
It’s nothing to her, just a little pain
Behind angel eyes
Her heart is ripped opened
And once again sewed back shut
To god she is nothing but a $lut
Behind angel eyes
Its nothing but sad
She remembers everything she once had
She misses them ..she misses her wee lad
Behind angel eyes
Everything is shattered
She’s no longer pure of heart
To get back together, where would she start
Behind angel eyes
A little girl cries
No one sees her way up in the skies
Yes that’s what’s behind angel eyes ~
~The life I wanted
I had it all worked out
Perfectionism doesn't always reap results
I never stopped to doubt
You cannot have everything
I recently learned
And if you aim too high
you'll end up getting burned
You will overload your mind
And your health will pay the fee
you'll be reckless, stupid, and dangerous
you'll end up just like me
When i know i've really lost
Is when you don't return my call
I know I deserve this now
But that does nothing to soften the fall~
Originally posted by Enslaved
Guys can you live my spellings alone please..
Sarah, surely making your poetry perfect is a good thing? It's not a reflection on you as a person... the whole point in posting your work is to get some criticism, whether good or bad. Constructive adjustments can only be beneficial. Don't be so sensitive 😬
Originally posted by Enslaved
~ Behind angel eyes
No one understands
They don’t see the blood on her hand
Nor the black soul they just don’t understandBehind angel eyes
It is nothing but black
It eats her inside
For everything she lackBehind angel eyes
There is nothing but sorrow
Black tears
She sees no tomorrowBehind angel eyes
No one flies in the sky
Alone and cold
The black tears they do flowBehind angel eyes
There is black blood too
Memory seeps from her vein
It’s nothing to her, just a little painBehind angel eyes
Her heart is ripped opened
And once again sewed back shut
To god she is nothing but a $lutBehind angel eyes
Its nothing but sad
She remembers everything she once had
She misses them ..she misses her wee ladBehind angel eyes
Everything is shattered
She’s no longer pure of heart
To get back together, where would she startBehind angel eyes
A little girl cries
No one sees her way up in the skies
Yes that’s what’s behind angel eyes ~
Holy shit! This is brilliant Sarah, I love the repetition of 'Behind angel eyes..', it's so powerful.
I love it 😉
Originally posted by Syren
Sarah, surely making your poetry perfect is a good thing? It's not a reflection on you as a person... the whole point in posting your work is to get some criticism, whether good or bad. Constructive adjustments can only be beneficial. Don't be so sensitive 😬
I was having a laugh..Honest..I shud have put Lol at the end of it..but riley was buggin me