Originally posted by justjakk
you could do more poetering.....right?
Originally posted by Coldfiredeviantart is a popular thing
True, I could do that yeah. I've actually been doing a lot, but haven't gotten around to posting it here... I post it all at http://www.nightfeather.deviantart.com
i dont know what to call this one, the girl i wrote about last time came back to church today...seems she was on spring break and stopped by to say hi...it was just soo awsome to see her again...she came down friday and should be going back tommorrow....i dont know why she stopped by to my church, it really surprised me....she is just so cool...well, here we go.
how do you fill my world with pain and make me feel so free?
how is it with one sight of your eyes, i come to write a sonet?
how can it be, when i turn norm, your presence makes me crazy?
and makes me turn to ask for more, this lovely little tourment.
how is it that my thoughts of you, makes my mind to crumble?
and yet with that mind i think so free, i think so long, so true
what is it about you that turns my world completely upside-down?
and why am i the only one who loves every single moment?
Originally posted by justjakk
i dont know what to call this one, the girl i wrote about last time came back to church today...seems she was on spring break and stopped by to say hi...it was just soo awsome to see her again...she came down friday and should be going back tommorrow....i dont know why she stopped by to my church, it really surprised me....she is just so cool...well, here we go.how do you fill my world with pain and make me feel so free?
how is it with one sight of your eyes, i come to write a sonet?
how can it be, when i turn norm, your presence makes me crazy?
and makes me turn to ask for more, this lovely little tourment.how is it that my thoughts of you, makes my mind to crumble?
and yet with that mind i think so free, i think so long, so true
what is it about you that turns my world completely upside-down?
and why am i the only one who loves every single moment?
A title... hmmm... could be something like How Do You Do It?
I dunno...
i did this in another thread in order to help a member at his poem. i think i will post it here to add to my collection..
each day i see your form so true
may i forever be alone with you
at night your presence is not here
but in my dreams you are so clear
i fall headlong in your eyes mild stare
and find no sorrows anywhere
yet times tears fall along your face
makes me long to hold you, a warm embrace
to leave you now, would mean my end
and make me wonder sometime when
of what could be and of what should
and times of bad that turn out good