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Felion a 2-sided story...........................................by: Justjakk
~Introduction~
If you told me two years ago the fate of the world was on my sholders, I would have said "The world has problems." . See back then I didn't know many people, only kids in the orphan home were my family at that time. My name was Deacon. I had no last name cause no one wanted a 16 year old, they wanted younger children and I was almost age to leave the home and go out on my own. On my leaving day the head Minister came to me with a large box. He told me it was left for me and when I leave the home it was to be given to me. He said it was my "Birthright" (As if anyone really gave a care about me at all to leave me anything), and I would take it with me. In the old box was a large sword, a couple medalions and some old pictures. Sorting through all the micelaneous nick-nacks, I came upon a picture of a man dressed in an old military outfit. Surely this was my father. Maybe someone from the town could tell me who it is and I can find out where everything went wrong. Maybe he was killed in the line of duty and my mother couldn't keep me so she left me at the home. Maybe I still have family and they just don't know I'm even alive. Well I put it to mind that I was going to find my family and put an end to my waiting. It never really occured to me that maybe I was left for a more important reason. It never occured to me that I was not meant to return.
As luck would have it, I wasn't the only one searching for truth and it may have well put us both in danger.
I guess by now you wonder if I truly found out anything. Your guess would be right, I did. Fortunately at just the right time. Finds out the man in the photo was my grandfather, Kannon Lei, and he used to be a great samurai warrior. The sword left to me was known as the Blackfire Dragontooth. Claimed in battle many years ago, it was forged from a black dragons tooth. This sword was given to the most respected samurai warrior, and as you would also guess, it was given to my grandfather. Along with the sword was given a gold necklace linked to a beautiful green stone. This stone was the dragons right eye. Another stone (the left eye) like it was centered in the handguard of the sword. Only the wearer of the amulet and a sibling could wield the sword. Grandfather had a twin brother who also liked the sword and did much wrong with it. So the sword was locked in one box and the amulet in another, until one day when a decendant would have two children. That happened faster than grandfather would have expected. I was born almost twenty years later by his daughter, Ohren Lei. She was to marry a tactful business man named Dubea Kahn, but then I just happened to come along and Dubea wanted nothing to do with an unclean wife. He knew of this for they had never been intimate or close at all. She was being married off to him for the heritage class. No one knew how this could happen. The whole family was in shock. The only way to hide this was to give the infant away. So now you know how it came to me being in the home. Now lets get along with the rest of the story.
Since the disgrace on the head of the family, no one would ever get anywhere close to my mother, not even to grandfather who was trying to marry her off. They all figured no unclean woman could make a good wife until one day in the market, while mother gathered fruit she happened to bump into a lonely farmer. The farmer was Daniel Howen, an American who came to China for better life. At that moment, they both fell madly in love for each other.Soon after meeting, they were married and much sooner after that, they had a child. She was named Mea Alexandra Howen named after an aunt and Daniels' mother. So recapping, I was born, tossed into a home with no one who cared for me and I have a half sister I don't know about. And at that time I was just turning 5. What a life. I don't think I could come up with anything else to make it more perfect. Oh but wait! I was cursed in the process!! Eventhough I know my grandfather, mother and half sister really exhist, I can't come into contact with them. I know I'm not supposed to know that but try to go to your house and all of a sudden be thrusted a mile and a half away. Now try thinking you're not cursed!! Doesn't come out right now does it!! See I'm not supposed to find them, they are supposed to come looking and find me. I don't think they are going to be looking too hard for someone they have obviously forgotten about now are they!? Thats what I thought. See old uncle whatshisface, found out I was still alive and he went out to get the amulet from grandfather so he could get the power of the sword back. Seems like he was a little too late. While I was given the sword, my half sister was given the amulet. Its all a matter of time til we are both together.
~end of introduction~