Bashar Teg's (and Queeq's) KOROVA BLUE MILK BAR

i guess i'll stay then. At some point i'll only get bored and come back anyways - goodnite DA😉

l8r Stun.

Originally posted by Darth_Amidala
I am such a "con"
My mp3 wouldn't respond cause the battery was dead....I seriously thought it was rechargable 😖

Stun will be back. 😖hifty:

Shit, I scared everyone off. 😐

Good thing I dont come here as much anymore. 😛

We're so scared 😛

Well gosh, I g2g, bye then.

l8r SL

I cant see DA's sig.

maybe she's CHANGING it, lol

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I CANT SEE MY AVA ON TRA!!!! ranting

WHOA, GOT IT BACK 😛

Has anyone here written a short story, or is writing a book and can give advice? 😕

I've writting PLENTY of stories...... i just need to finish them 😮

Can you give advice?

about a plot?

Well, I tend to rush through the plot. I need advice on how to stretch it out. Maybe making it so that each chapter can last more than four pages 😛

all my stories have arugments 🙄

that can make it a little longer. lol

or u could...... add a "love" scene....... i da-no, lol.

im just saying stuff, lol

I say go with the love scene idea. 😄

Lol, in the first chapter of the book, where I describe the history of my main character 🤨
Thanks though....I know for a fact there will be a love scene in this book though.

Just dont have the guys mom walk in on them and get into the girls face for being all over her son 😐

Oh god...I can picture it now....

"God da** it Syris, what the heck is a senator doing in here!?"

"Madame, the law states....."

😖