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Started by yerssot6 pages

I don't know how it came, but I was just disappointed...
weak story I think

I don't like the whole thing about the

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true looking hologram's. When the holo's in Star Wars have a blue tint.

Or the part where

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the entire time they were trying to get this ship built and at the end it dies.

yeah! stupid about that last one!

There were lots of other parts in the story that could have been WAY better. It's not just those two scenes that made it crappy.

we should re-write it! 😄

I would if I wasn't so lazy.

hehe, I couldn't have said it better 🙂
perhaps a good sleep to think about it?

Ok

*pulls up cot and goes to bed*

on second thought ... climbing those stairs?? nah! I'll sleep right he...*falls asleep*

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*wakes up; goes to the fridge*
hmmm... 64 slices of American cheese

*Wakes up*

Pass me one of those will you?

Damn that Lance! He's always one cheese ahead of me!
*throws Lance 64 slieces of Canadian cheese*

Ewwww

Canadian??? I hate Canadian

what's wrong with Canadian cheese?

It just has that weird kind of hoosier taste you it.

fair enough...
*throws Lance 64 slieces of American Cheese*
here you go patriot

WooHoo!

BTW Do we have any spray cheese to put on top of these???

no, I gave it to mah who ...
*looks at mah*
STOP that!
For the last time! Don't spray people with it!

It's not Aerosol Fun Spray Mah!