My Poems x.x;

Started by DarthLazious2 pages

Those were done very nicely.
Ever thought about sending them to Poetry.com?

I sent mine there and they published some of mine in a book.

I don't think they're that good |:

heres one of mine.

As day turns to night I cant even fight, so i sit on the floor and I slam the door, my hands are dripping red and I lay in my bed hoping Ill wake up dead I guess im not dead if I just sent you this thread 😈 i could write a serious poem

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I feel like I am broken
Like death can take my soul
And all the words left unspoken
Will be taking there toll

The shadows I stand under
Have now turned to dark
I fall under a spell
With every little mark

Emptiness surronds me
As I fall asleep
And dream of what could be
While I sit and weep

The careful figures
And stories untold
All begin to shatter
As mysteries unfold

I can't pretend any longer
Forgive me if I sin
Pray for me to be stronger
And there I shall begin

Fade underneathe silence
And for ever hold
The beating of my heart
And burry me in gold

I learned to hide the truth
To hide the pain
To hide the depression
I learned to fool everyone
To wear a mask
To make everyone think
That I am happy
That everything is okay
But deep down
Nothing is okay
No one knows how bad the pain is
They don't know I want to die
To end all the pain
I just wish I wasn't part
Part of the world
That seems like such a nightmare
So I learned to hide
All my true feelings
And to wear a mask
To fool everyone that don't know
The truth that it is all a lie

Those are all REEEEALLY good poems Broken-Wings!!!! They are very descriptive, and you can see the heart you put into them... Good job!!

Oi! You stole my X x;; face!

Evil evil person...

Good poems though, very dark and morbid, good all the same.

BUMP shock........ Truly amazing poems!!!! absolutely wonderful!!! 😊