Coldfire's Poetry Stuff

Thanks DW hug I usually don't rhyme, as you can see, lol. I'm working on it though. And yeah, you're definitely not him 😉 He was originally my computer 😆 but was transformed into a person for some odd reason.... 😬 lol

I really like them. 😄 Esp the first one- a lot like what i can relate to. bag

Originally posted by Coldfire
He was originally my computer 😆 but was transformed into a person for some odd reason.... 😬 lol

LOL! 😄

😆 Yeah, I really don't know how that happened.... Ah well, I like the result, and that's all that matters 😄

Time

Time,
Time just keeps on slipping away,
Can’t fight it,
Can’t stop it,
It goes at its own steady pace,
Stopping for no one,
Stopping for nothing,
Though some days it seems,
It has speeded up,
Or slowed down,
Never does it change.
Before we know it,
Minutes, hours, days,
Weeks, months, years,
Have passed us by,
And we wonder where they’ve gone,
And at how fast they’ve gone by.
Too much time,
Not enough time,
The war is never won,
We wish for more,
For less, and never,
Do we get what we want;
Time is impartial,
Feelingless, emotionless,
Just simply there.
It begins our lives,
It ends our lives,
Doing as it has been,
And will always do;
It alone never dies.

Great one sweets. hey, write one on dragons, if you can, please.

That's a good idea DW, thanks. I'll work on that 😄

good one cold....tricky subject "time"

if not done properly, it can seem overly done

hah yeah. best rhyme i have seen on temporal subjects is from Hootie and the Blowfish. awesome song, great band.

Originally posted by Fëanor
good one cold....tricky subject "time"

if not done properly, it can seem overly done

Thanks Feanor 😄 I was just sitting around doing thinking about how little time is left until I am done Grade 10 and started writing that

haha! yeah, 11th is a pretty groovy time, just keep up your GPA and get ready for college !! Yeah!!

Dude, I need a lot of that thing called time.. I waste mine too much. ermm

But nice stuff, as usual. I love your stuff. 😄

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
haha! yeah, 11th is a pretty groovy time, just keep up your GPA and get ready for college !! Yeah!!

I think grade 11 is gonna be a blast 😄 Despite how we are gonna have double blocked classes, which will be insane.... lol. I've got the marks, just gotta keep them up as high as they are 😛

And thanks Tassie! hug

Ya, 11th was my fave grade. Had a great time, First concert, first girlfriend, whole lotta firsts... ahhahahahah! Just try your hardest. We got yo back sistuh!!! hahahahahahha! You too Tassie-gal!

I still have so many firsts to go cry I feel like I haven’t lived much

Great work cold fire. Keep it up. See you in Draguna Darkness.

Originally posted by Tassie
I still have so many firsts to go cry I feel like I haven’t lived much

Awww well they'll all happen eventually, don't worry 😊

And thanks a lot Zatch Bell 😄 and I will see ya there 😊

Makes good inspiration for a new poem though! 🤺

ok, i'm messing up your poetry thread.. continue posting your lovely poetry..😮

Originally posted by Tassie
I still have so many firsts to go cry I feel like I haven’t lived much

hahaha let em come naturally. DO NOT! do not rush into anything... take it from my own experience... fegh. Rushing stuff just taints it.
And, hey! You gals and guys got a lotta time to have fun, so do so! get out, go camping, go babe-watching or guy-watching, hit the arcade, go bowling, just get outta the house! Enjoy it. 😉

Originally posted by Tassie
Makes good inspiration for a new poem though! 🤺

ok, i'm messing up your poetry thread.. continue posting your lovely poetry..😮

??? 🤨 what, like you arent worthy to post here? hahahahaha! *mutters..."weiber...."*