Coldfire's Poetry Stuff

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well... I dunno, it's hard to explain it with my limited vocabulary lol

Originally posted by Coldfire
well... I dunno, it's hard to explain it with my limited vocabulary lol
hey ur vocabulary is bigger than mine 😛

Originally posted by Coldfire
Phone Call

The phone rang beside me,
I answered it like always,
Remembering you said you’d call,
And when you started talking,
My heart leapt into my throat,
Beating faster than ever before,
I almost couldn’t even speak,
And just listening to your voice,
Hearing you say you love me,
Made me fall for you all over again,
And although we couldn’t talk long,
I would have given up so much,
Just to chat for that short time again,
And after I hung up the phone,
I just wanted to scream out loud,
Tell everyone that I ever knew,
Exactly how strongly I feel for you.

I'll keep this short. You're not serious, are you?

Originally posted by NunYahBidness
I'll keep this short. You're not serious, are you?

I'll make my answer shorter: Yes 😐

Originally posted by Coldfire
I'll make my answer shorter: Yes 😐
Ah! Love and marriage, go together like a horse and carriage without a rider to guide it. While heartfelt to be sure, I do not follow this as being anything other than...you know, I'm at a loss for words to describe what I'm feeling. Surely you've done better? Yes? No? Maybe so?

Originally posted by NunYahBidness
Ah! Love and marriage, go together like a horse and carriage without a rider to guide it. While heartfelt to be sure, I do not follow this as being anything other than...you know, I'm at a loss for words to describe what I'm feeling. Surely you've done better? Yes? No? Maybe so?

You move in mysteriously delightful ways that the majority here will find unfathomable.

Originally posted by NunYahBidness
Ah! Love and marriage, go together like a horse and carriage without a rider to guide it. While heartfelt to be sure, I do not follow this as being anything other than...you know, I'm at a loss for words to describe what I'm feeling. Surely you've done better? Yes? No? Maybe so?

Yeah I have... so?

Originally posted by Ya Krunk'd Floo
You move in mysteriously delightful ways that the majority here will find unfathomable.
It is...difficult to say the least. But "God" has opened my eyes and squirted lemon juice upon them, and so I must.
Originally posted by Coldfire
Yeah I have... so?
Good! Post it and I shall give my honest assessment without colouring with off-the-cuff remark. But only this once.

Originally posted by NunYahBidness
It is...difficult to say the least. But "God" has opened my eyes and squirted lemon juice upon them, and so I must. Good! Post it and I shall give my honest assessment without colouring with off-the-cuff remark. But only this once.

Considering you haven't liked a whole lot of the poetry you've read here, I very much doubt you would like anything that I post 😬

Originally posted by Coldfire
Considering you haven't liked a whole lot of the poetry you've read here, I very much doubt you would like anything that I post 😬
How can you be certain that I won't? The mind is a mysterious and wondrous thing to behold, not unlike the meandering thoughts of wayward toddler sucking its thumb.

Well I don't have anything I can post right now....

Originally posted by NunYahBidness
Ah! Love and marriage, go together like a horse and carriage without a rider to guide it. While heartfelt to be sure, I do not follow this as being anything other than...you know, I'm at a loss for words to describe what I'm feeling. Surely you've done better? Yes? No? Maybe so?
depends in ur veiw maybe!i like it just fine amber

Originally posted by snehin
depends in ur veiw maybe!i like it just fine amber
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thank you hun 😊

Originally posted by Coldfire
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thank you hun 😊
lol tis pleasure sweetheart!so any new ones?

Nope not right now.... hoping to have a couple real soon tho

Originally posted by Coldfire
Nope not right now.... hoping to have a couple real soon tho
lol kool!

Originally posted by snehin
controlled by love held by hope
showered by faith showen by all
useless time baring life
hoared by truth stung by reality
held by life struck by faith
stormed by hope freed by death

when i said bad i meant bad!


notworthy

good work

Originally posted by ShapedByWords
notworthy

good work

no u dont!!prove it this doesn't count amber

Originally posted by Coldfire
Phone Call

The phone rang beside me,
I answered it like always,
Remembering you said you’d call,
And when you started talking,
My heart leapt into my throat,
Beating faster than ever before,
I almost couldn’t even speak,
And just listening to your voice,
Hearing you say you love me,
Made me fall for you all over again,
And although we couldn’t talk long,
I would have given up so much,
Just to chat for that short time again,
And after I hung up the phone,
I just wanted to scream out loud,
Tell everyone that I ever knew,
Exactly how strongly I feel for you.


hahah wow. so tell hiM!!! hahaha!

Silly women, always liking guys but never grabbing your cajones and lettin em know... hahahha WE are blind most of the time, ladies. you have gotta open our eyes to your heart. .

Sne, i type hahah cause i laugh like a maniac when i read this stuff. is a pleasure to read KMC posts. hahahaha! HA! haha LOL!~