Coldfire's Poetry Stuff

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Thank you 😊 It felt so nice to write some non-depressing stuff for once haha 😉

Awesome poetry!!!!!

Thanks fantasygirl 😊

Did u read my PM?

As you saw, yep I did 😊

HI! I want to let u know that I really like ur poems.you should keep
on writing mor poems.

Aww thanks domini hug I'm trying to write some more, but I can't really seem to come up with anything at the moment lol.

Originally posted by Coldfire
Aww thanks domini hug I'm trying to write some more, but I can't really seem to come up with anything at the moment lol.
so do a creative session. take down some mundane things and some not so mundane, like the wind, a pen, a book, a tree, and write them on paper. then, take a minute and describe them, really describe them, in a poetic light. where you write wind, say; wind: a sweeping whisper of coolness that rushes over me. a pen: smaller than any blade, but responsible for so much more blood. a book: an ancient and musty portal to a fantastic new life. a tree: the guardian of shade and shadow that beasts and birds feel safe among. or something like that. helps the creative juices to flow.

Lol wow that was good 😊 Well I did eventually come up with something... but it is so incredibly long, and its not done yet hahaha 😛 But I did a different one that I have to type up when I get home or something.

do it now......now....NOW..... ahhahahhaha!

😄 yeah...i totally layed outside and wrote poetry by candlelight last night 😊 it was great 😄

Lol.. the life of us poets, huh 😛 ^^

'Free' is very sweet 😊

Lol thanks everyone hug I'll post one here in a sec...

Lol a sec turned into like an hour 😛 But here it is:

Auebrei and Coldfire

Auebrei was restless.
She paced,
Back and forth,
Back and forth,
Long sharp claws,
Gouging the earth,
Pointed tail,
Lashing from side to side,
Large bat-like wings,
Shifting against her back,
Ears flicking towards Coldfire,
Then moving back again,
Silver scales glinting,
As bright as diamonds,
Under the bright rays of sun.

Coldfire finally stood up,
Leather outfit creaking,
Her long dark braid,
Pulled over her shoulder,
Lovingly cared for sword,
Protruding over the opposite shoulder,
Eyes wide and intense,
Seeing everything,
Taking in everything,
Face calm and still,
Betraying no emotion.
She walked over to Auebrei,
Her movements smooth,
And lithe like a cat’s,
And jumped onto Auebrei’s back.

Auebrei crouched low,
Gathering herself to spring.
Coldfire checked her safety straps,
Then urged Auebrei to fly,
And she did so eagerly,
Springing into the beautiful sky,
Wings stroking the air,
Beating it strongly,
Lifting her and Coldfire up.
Auebrei crooned happily,
Elated to be flying once again,
And Coldfire laughed,
Throwing her arms out,
The wind swirling around her,
And on they flew.

Originally posted by Elessea
😄 yeah...i totally layed outside and wrote poetry by candlelight last night 😊 it was great 😄
Originally posted by Tassie
Lol.. the life of us poets, huh 😛 ^^

'Free' is very sweet 😊

ahhahaa yup! and groovy way to spend an eve, Sea. ^^^^Cold, finally a dragon poem. hahahhaha! good one!

You have a good imagination 🙂

when i started reading, i thought it was a cat 😮
But coming to the end, I caught on..😄

Your descriptions are really efficient.. it's really nice..😊

DW: Yeah yeah finally a dragon poem 😛 I have another one that's not finished too 😊 But thanks 😄

Vaya: Lol thanks. I've been told a time or two that I have too big of an imagination 😛

Tassie: Well it does kinda sound like a cat.... except for the 'batlike wings' lol 😛 Thanks Tassie 😊

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Lol 😛 Of course you're on there DW ✅