EARLY HOGWARTS james and lillys story

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The next part-

"Oh Lily! Pranks are not always bad. I remember when in our First year you had ordered James not to play pranks on Snivellus. We were not able to have any fun. You have to agree that he is disrespectful, he calls you, you-know-what, and still you take his side," Sirius said.

"Look Sirius whatever he says he says it to me. If I don't have any problem then why should you. I mean I agree you are my friend and you don't like a Slytherin calling me 'Mud-blood' but I also insist that instead of extending the whole thing and increasing hatred we should put an end to the topic immediately," Lily answered back."

I know it is too less but I am not in a mood to write just now. I don't know why maybe because I am not having many ideas. I will write later.

Well i think you should wait a couple of days and think about it write it down and post a big huge post. Cuz like all your doing is putting these conversations together no details of the day. Like every time you post its a whole different conversation. Just take all the time you need to think of a great idea and write it down in a journal or something then wait a while till another idea comes and add on to it then post so you'll have a big one

yeah do that 😄 its good but we have no idea where they are or what there doing except that they are chatting with each other

yea... you should have one great big post... oh and sorry if are putting to much pressure on you but its just that your story is too good!!!!!
if you need ideas... WE NEED MORE ROMANCE!! 😍 LOL...
well good luck!! 😉

yea manu's right about that. now that they're together nows your chance to get some romance in there. That was the whole point of skipping a few years anyway so might as well do it

Yeah I will do so.

And as for the location- they are in the Griffindor common room.

awesome!!!! ok well we will be here waiting sparingly for your BEAUTIFUL story!!! LOL we are your servants ma'am...(*with an accent...LOL)

the sty iz cumin along gr8, i just luv it and dont stop
im not being rude or anything but in the 5th book it says that Remus becomes prefect cause he's good and neva breaks tha rules and on the other hand James gets so much detentions that hes to 2 naugty to b it so i just thought id let u no, im not trying to put u down or anything,
well anyways i just luv ur stories there just so good
keep up the good work

i told her that already

but you guys remember this is HER story let her do what she wants and follow her rules(not trying to offend anyone saying this...😮) nobodys going to get hurt... shes the author .... lol 😄

i never said that she wasn't the author. I wasn't rying to tell her what to do. I was just saying that I had said that to her before and she said"Oh i didn't realize that'" and I said Ok it makes it sound good anyway.

Of course I don't mind Sirius_relez and I thank you for helping me and Manu and iluvhpsomuch (Jenny 😄 ) too. But I have said before ( I hope I don't sound rude because I don't want to) that there is some confusion regarding who was the prefect among the Maraudars. Remus in 5th book said he was but Hagrid told Harry when he met them that Lily and James were wonderful Head Boy and Head Girl. I think it is necessary to become a prefect to become Head Boy.

And frankly speaking I had forgotten what Remus had told Harry when I wrote that part.

woah! Your right i haven't ogttne to that part in the book yet. cuz like im reading it again. I haven't read in a while ive been reading the fourth and sixth because they kinda correspond with each other. But your right. I wonder how that works out.

I checked at mugglenet but it was not stated under mistakes of the 1st book or 5th.

thats weird

oh i didnt realize sry
my bad

im sorry if I offended anybody... I didnt mean to...but im just saying, since this is not the books, she can change some stuff around and not be worried that she will get sued or anything..lol!!
well yea im sorry iluvhpsomuch, i wasnt trying to be mean.. 😮

oh yea... MORE STORY PLEASE!!! lol 😄

I am thinking what to post next.

This is my O.W.L.s year so I have to study too. 🙁
I am rather sad about it. Afterall I am not like Hermione I am like Harry and Ron.