Poems for thee.

Started by Kharhmah7 pages

๐Ÿ˜–hifty:

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No.17
Boredom releases me,
only to be ensnared by hate,
of you,
of what you cease to do,
and how I wish upon you, conflict.

my unhealthy state of mind,
in which you leave me,
alone,
without purpose I shall truly suffer,
although this means nothing.

cry

What happened?

Absolutely nothing. ๐Ÿ˜Š

koolness K. hahaha nice...

Originally posted by Kharhmah
Absolutely nothing. ๐Ÿ˜Š

your subject matter various frequently.

I know. I think I may be having an odd few months. ๐Ÿ˜ฌ

Originally posted by Kharhmah
I know. I think I may be having an odd few months. ๐Ÿ˜ฌ

heh... did ye now laddie??? heh...

Those poems are good, you'll have to give me some ideas.

hey K any new ones?

No. 18
I'd lived in Hell for an eternity,
until you left me screaming,
left me bleeding,
lain across the floor,

the times I'd run to you,
seem to be so far, so distant,
but feel closer than before,
the moments I'd be in your arms,
the world would melt away,
my senses would discard me here,
I'd let them have their way.

neat dude.

"neat dude" (how very original)

Kharhmah I like No. 18 but it feels incomplete to me

Originally posted by ShapedByWords
"neat dude" (how very original)

Kharhmah I like No. 18 but it feels incomplete to me

yeah, bite me! ๐Ÿ˜† i was tired man..... hahah. well fine, K, it is a really nice piece, I like the whole poem, but i agree with mar here, seems incomplete somehow...

I have agree with both of you. There is something missing. ๐Ÿ˜ฌ

I agree with all of you โœ… But it's good so far ๐Ÿ˜Š

Originally posted by Kharhmah
I have agree with both of you. There is something missing. ๐Ÿ˜ฌ
hey bro, no sweat... just try to finish it. hrmmmmm if you want anyways... lotta poets end up with frags that dont end... some just... well, WE just cant do it.

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
hey bro, no sweat... just try to finish it. hrmmmmm if you want anyways... lotta poets end up with frags that dont end... some just... well, WE just cant do it.

ummm bro? lol ๐Ÿ˜›

Originally posted by Coldfire
ummm bro? lol ๐Ÿ˜›
ahhh shaddup! ๐Ÿ˜‚ evil wench! hahaha! ( yeah, i DO like it anyway! hahahahahha!)

Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
ahhh shaddup! ๐Ÿ˜‚ evil wench! hahaha! ( yeah, i DO like it anyway! hahahahahha!)

Again with the evil wench LOL. Don't make me come over there... you might be taller but I still have my ways.... heh heh heh ๐Ÿ˜›

Originally posted by Coldfire
Again with the evil wench LOL. Don't make me come over there... you might be taller but I still have my ways.... heh heh heh ๐Ÿ˜›
๐Ÿ˜† yeah come on... hahaha you gotta be pretty damned good to get a: past the slooberdog, b: past me unc and auntie, and c: actually into my room, on me, and have me tied down before i awake and .... well.. hahaha . and outside? you better hire the biggest baddest mofo available, and make sure he dont mind getting hurt. NO i WONT make it easy for ya woman! ๐Ÿ˜‚ hahahhaha!