Gryffindor's Common Room

Started by Maikahyandowen612 pages

that he does.

hey our common room was dying so I bumped it up...
tom's the deadline... what are the choices?

I havent seen RPhoe in a while... 🙁

Unicorr's looks good. I don't know of any others.

yeah and celestial moon's too.

so r we combining? cause if we r i can whip up uni's and mine and add other stuff(i did start on one but my bro deleted it permenantly!.

Lets try to combine what ever we have \... Btw where is Rebphoe, she is quite good in consolidaing lines!!! Can some one pm her !

haven't seen her. combining sounds like a good idea though.

k

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Hey everyone! Omg I've been snowed under this last week it's not even funny, I'm so sorry I haven't been around! BUT I didn't forget the deadline was today and have got a couple of hours to spare!........ Ok, well, I noticed that we still only had CM's and Uni's entries so I just came up with an extra scene to put in the middle and I'm going to write another one to go after which will make 4 in total but I'll post what I have done already now so if anyone comes in they can give me some feedback quickly - all the red bits are CM's and Uni's but I have edited them alittle in places to help the flow and changed grammar/spelling. Here goes:

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It is not over. A silly thing to say since I am here on the ground, nearly dying from exhaustion. Salazar has left. We fought for hours. Spell after spell after yet more spells! But I know, deep down inside, it's not the end. Slytherin is too proud. He has always been like that. He will be back... and when he does, I will stand and stare at him right in the face, and if I am dead, I will help in whatever way I can. From this battle, I have learned that it will be hard for someone to fight him. But I know that someone can do it.
"What now, Godric?" I turn to see Rowena Ravenclaw. Her black hair sways with the wind, as her face is crestfallen.
"We will continue this school."
"But what about-"
"Forgot Slytherin. We do not need him." Somehow, I know that is a lie.
"But he is a founder!" Helga Hufflepuff has come to join us, I see.
"He is no longer one of us," I state shortly. Hufflepuff opens her mouth but I shoot her a glare. She closes it.
"Let's get back to the students." I pick myself up. Ravenclaw's voice stops me.
"So the feud is over?" i smile grimly. There is a deathly silence.
"No. It has just begun."

"OWW!!!"
"Godric I told you not to move!" Rowena said, trying to supress a smile.
"I can't help it" Godric said sulkily, " I'm not the kind of man who can sit around all day"
"Don't I know it" was the coy reply as she continued to apply the bandages, Godric looked down to see Rowena wink at him and they stopped for a moment their eyes twinkling sharing that special sparkle they did sometimes.
"You're going to look like a muggle mummy by the time I'm finished with you"
"Humph!"
"Oh don't be such a grouch, what did you expect after a battle like that?"
"What did I expect....." As his words trailed off Godric clearly remembered that he hadn't expected to end up like this, no, he had expected to pull Salazar around and make him see sense.

He had marched upto Salazar, who was idly pulling the feathers off of a stuffed bird in the common of his House aptly named Slytherin, after the master... being the snake he is.
“Stop it Salazar! This has to stop, this is the third half blood child that has been killed! I warned you before!” Godric took out his wand and a beam of light flew towards Salazar. A vision flashed before Godric's eyes; Nina, an 11 year old half muggle witch he had found lying on Hogwarts grounds..
“ You almost killed me Godric!!!"
“I’m drawing the line Salazar!!! A line that would distinguish people like me from people like you”. Godric snarled viciously as another flash of light hit Salazar directly in the chest.
“What the hell are trying to do Godric, murder your your best friend!?" This time Salazar didn't hesitate to fire back at his attacker with his own spells.
“You are a fool Godric! Half-bloods and muggles will ruin our world and will be your fault”.
”If anyone destroys our community it will be YOU Salazar”.
Flashes of green and red light haphazardly flew around the room, reflecting off ornaments and breaking others so that the entire space was nothing but carnage and destruction. The two assailants dripping blood from different wounds but still hell bent on fighting, nothing but hatred and determination in their expressions... then a look of worry fleetingly covered Salazar's face for he had heard the coming footsteps first realising them to be of the other two founders and he knew he couldn't defeat all three of them together.
“You've won this battle Godric, but it's not over, my heir will win this war..” he chuckled evily "and he shall rise within a secret chamber... behind a secret door" a terrible laughter erupted from his lips and in that moment, Salazar was gone.
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Ok - I just wrote a really long scene but I'm thinking I could split in two to put a short history in between it or perhaps afterwards - I dunno, but hopefully someone can read it and say something by the time I get back. I just have to go do something and will probably be away for a little while but I'll be back abit later to see what's going on and add a history scene if no one else has written anything: Oh btw, if you notice, I changed from third to first person in this scene cos I was thinking about splitting it, if I don't - then I'll correct it:
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"Hellooo, anyone there?"
Godric blinked as the memory vanished and shook his head to find Rowena snapping her fingers in front of his face to get his attention.
"Yeah I'm here" Salazar's last words still echoing in his head, he looked listelessly around the medical ward for something to take his mind off the situation but there was nothing that change the gravity of it. The sun couldn't even find the courage to shine for him through the windows, the weather was as grey as his mood and everything was still, not even a ripple from the lake outside.
"I didn't intend for things to turn out this way you know"
"I know Godric, I..." Rowena's words were cut off by the entrance of Helga Hufflepuff, the third founder.
"I've got some good news!" Ah, dear Helga, always trying to at least sound cheerful for the rest of us, her strength was in preserving what we had even if her sweet smile didn't quite reach her eyes, the eyes that were the only sign of what went on beneath the surface, the hurt and anxiety.
"What news Helga?" Rowena asked, trying to brighten her tone to match Helga's, it was as if they believed that if they tried to stay happy they would somehow stop me being such a misery guts.
"Well, with the help of your instruments" she said nodding at us "and with some wonderfully obliging friends, we searched the castle high and low and didn't find a scrap of evidence for any secret chamber."
"You tried absolutely everything?"
"Yes Rowena, I think we exhausted every possible method but still no trace" the ladies breathed a sigh of relief.
"He must have been lying" I hissed "that no good, rotten jackal! NO, that evil, conniving son of a.."
"Godric!" Helga stopped him in reproach
"...serpent"
Rowena pursed her lips and looked disapprovingly whilst Helga started to speak,
"Godric, I know you and Salazar are anything but best friends right now but don't forget your history together and all of the good..."
"GOOD!?!" I exploded, I couldn't control myself when i heard his name anymore "What good!?! Any shred of friendship that villainous snake and I had is over and was over the moment he threatened and started hurting innocents! He only cares about himself and and and!" I couldn't finish, I only spluttered.
"Control your temper Godric" Rowena said in a calm yet warning tone.
"Yes Godric" Helga chimed in "It was that temper that got us here now wasn't it?"
My anger vanished as I turned a deep shade of scarlet as the shame, and embarrassment engulfed me, and I felt like I was drowning in a sea of regret.
"Yes" I whispered. "But I, I didn't want, didn't intend for us to fight like that, that was not what I wanted"
"We know" Rowena said stroking his arm soothingly "It's ok"
"I just wanted to talk to him, but he made me so angry..."
"I'm sorry Godric" Helga sighed "We all should have spoken with him really and tried to come to some kind of agreement"
"I doubt that would have worked, he was set in his ways, in his ideology of inherent blood superiority over fairness and tolerance. He was as incapable of listening as Godric here was at keeping his manner"
Ah Rowena, even though that last comment should have stung me, your intelligence and grace with which you comfort me do well to keep me in check.
"What's done is done now and I can't undo it, we'll just have to continue as normal, no, even better, to show everyone that we are more then capable of running this school by ourselves." I tried to stand up and almost fell over but their hands caught me in time.
"You should really stay here Godric"
"You're right as usual Helga, but I can't and I wont. I am resolved to get back to work and since we can no long apparate or disapparate in our own school anymore for fear of a certain someone's attack, I would greatly appreciate it if you ladies would be so kind as to oblige and help me to my office"
I could tell they didn't like the idea but what could they do, they knew the truth of what I said and so in an awkward stumbling trio we made it out of the medical ward, we had to be strong, for us, for Hogwarts, for everything.
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Ok, deadline's today, ^^gryff prefect, you entering it?
It's great as it is, no time for any change, anyway, so you can submit it ✅

Yes, I'll submit it - but there is time for change, as far as I know there's at least 6-8 hours left til it's midnight in parts of the US 😉 - and it needs some polishing. I can't do that right now though, but I'll be back soon enough to do it before I go to bed and it's Eezy's turn to judge 🙂

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Ok, I finished the story and posted it - I hope you all like it! 😖

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...wow ur story puts mine 2 shame rebelphoenix(mine was already bad but o well). lol excellent! very nice.

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Originally posted by RebelPhoenix
Ok, I finished the story and posted it - I hope you all like it! 😖

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good job rebphoe !!! I liked very much the ending: " ....only that they had to be strong, for them, for Hogwarts... for everything."

So we can it our motto, Grryffindor's motto :
For them, For Hogwarts, For everyone!