Gryffindor's Common Room

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hello ghost!!! How you doing?

“Stop it Salazar! This has to stop, this is the third half blood child that is being killed! I warned you before!”-Godric took out the wand and a spell crushed on Salazar, while shooting the spells Godric had in front his eyes the picture of Nina, a 11 years old witch coming from mixed family, that he found lying in Hogwarts grounds..

“ You almost killed me Godric !!! What are you doing????”

“I’m drawing a line Salazar!!! A line that would distinguish people like me from people like you”.

“ You are a fool Godric! Half-bloods and muggles will ruin our world and will be your fault”.

” If anyone destroys our community is YOU SALAZAR”.- The other spell hit Salazar at his shoulder, his spells had no chances with Godric’s, and Salazar heard Ravena and Helga coming the corridor, he knew that they would join Godric, he had no chace against the three of them.

“ You won this battle Godric, but this is not finished, my heir will win this war”.-The next moment Salazar disappeared.

nice Unicor! i like it.

That's reall good uni ✅ but one thing, remember CM's first scene starts with Godric lying on the floor exhausted after battling with Salazar, so their exchange would have to be alot more violent or aggressive.

yea violence!!!!!!!!!

Ok...I volunteer to take the fighting scene , and I will try to workon this these days..... BTW... I'm attending a worskhop from my university in Turkey, Antalia, I hope that they will show POA there, cause I will go crazy ....

crazy

Originally posted by RebelPhoenix
That's reall good uni ✅ but one thing, remember CM's first scene starts with Godric lying on the floor exhausted after battling with Salazar, so their exchange would have to be alot more violent or aggressive.

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I can continue with this all day long and name how many pages you wish, but I think there are limitation in terms of the length, or ?
Ok, so goes the corected one (Hope it sounds more violent/aggressive, although I do not except great wizards like Salazar and Godric to swear at eachother or insult)
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“Stop it Salazar! This has to stop, this is the third half blood child that is being killed! I warned you before!”-Godric took out the wand and a spell crushed on Salazar, while shooting the spells Godric had in front his eyes the picture of Nina, a 11 years old witch coming from mixed family, that he found lying in Hogwarts grounds..

“ You almost killed me Godric !!! Salazr’s spell hit Godric ‘s forehead, leaving a scar that burned like fire.

Godric’s spells were flying towards Salazar, Salazar was also shootong spells, there were spark all over the room.

“ You know you can not win this Godric.” Then another set of spells finished in Salazar’s body, there was blood coming from his stomach.
“ What the hell are trying to do with this GODRIC, murderer you are trying to kill your best friend”.

“I’m drawing a line Salazar!!! A line that would distinguish people like me from people like you”.

“ You are a fool Godric! Half-bloods and muggles will ruin our world and will be your fault”.

” If anyone destroys our community is YOU SALAZAR”.-

Salazar’s spell ended this time in Godric’s body, Godric was lying on the floor his head covered with blood. Godric concentrated his last atoms of energy, the picture of Nina’s lifeless body appeared again in his head.

“ I told you that you can not beat me Godric, fool”.

Then some 300 green spells hit Salazar at his shoulder, Salazar heard Ravena and Helga coming the corridor, he knew that they would join Godric, he had no chace against the three of them.

“ You won this battle Godric, but this is not finished, my heir will come and win this war Grryffindor”.-The next moment Salazar disappeared.

“For Merlin’s sake, what happended to you Godric”- Helga entered the room first.

“ And Salazar?” Asked Ravena. “ We will not see him soon, are we”…..

clapping

😘 😘 😘 😘

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thanks Maikahyandowen!!!! Thnaks a lot... btw could you give me some tips on your nick:Maikahyandowen what does it stand for ?

Ladygrim: Are you Grryffindor???? We Grryffindors usually speak forward regardless what the context is, rather then making silly faces 🙂lol

what does it stand for..... well, that's a good question. I don't know what it means. i think it's somthing in elvish.

where did you got it from LOTR?

no. a website

i like it uni...that could be the flashback. although, do ty 2 make it sound like he's been through a lot of fighting(like rebelphoenix said). otherwise, good.

Originally posted by Unicor777
“Stop it Salazar! This has to stop, this is the third half blood child that is being killed! I warned you before!”-Godric took out the wand and a spell crushed on Salazar, while shooting the spells Godric had in front his eyes the picture of Nina, a 11 years old witch coming from mixed family, that he found lying in Hogwarts grounds..

“ You almost killed me Godric !!! What are you doing????”

“I’m drawing a line Salazar!!! A line that would distinguish people like me from people like you”.

“ You are a fool Godric! Half-bloods and muggles will ruin our world and will be your fault”.

” If anyone destroys our community is YOU SALAZAR”.- The other spell hit Salazar at his shoulder, his spells had no chances with Godric’s, and Salazar heard Ravena and Helga coming the corridor, he knew that they would join Godric, he had no chace against the three of them.

“ You won this battle Godric, but this is not finished, my heir will win this war”.-The next moment Salazar disappeared.

Uni! I loved it!! WHy?? Cuz it had ACTION and EXCITEMENT!! I like when Godric says, "I'm drawing the line Salazar!!" That's my favortie!!!

very good. 😄

I like it Uni! ✅ Except, now it's too long 😖 it needs to roughly be like CM's one so we can get a numer of different paragraphs in about different things.

I'm currently trying to make up some of Godric's history 😖

have to include somthing about him being friends with Slytherin.