Mind babble...

Started by Frozen kisses43 pages
Originally posted by Fëanor
it wasn't directed at you...im just a bit crossed and im trying to cool off before i go and say something i might regret and seriously make an ass of myself. but im here if you need help...

then answer my Pms. everyone has problems feanor..at kleast yours isnt growing inside you.

*Glares at you and Leaves*

okay...well you got me there. soon as i get home i'll answer your pms as im at a cyber cafe and i don't want anyone LOMS when reading..you know?

Wow... everything ok now Julian??

it's fine Amber, just one of those things, ya know 😉

Originally posted by Fëanor
it's fine Amber, just one of those things, ya know 😉

Yeah I think I know lol.

wish i knew 😕

can i like to post one of my pomes up??

Originally posted by bogen
wish i knew 😕
well, if you're a good little boy, i'll put you on my lap and tell yah a story...😛
Originally posted by flirtybaby
can i like to post one of my pomes up??
sure! 😄

thxs 🙂

many days i cry
many time you make me cry
but every time i cry you die
love is hate and love is pain
you desotryed my sun
now i live in shadow
you make me bleed from inside
you poke me with needles to see if i would bleed
you cheeted like a math test
you hurt me with pleaze
killing me slowly
the one i love i hate
to my love that i hate....

Originally posted by Fëanor
well, if you're a good little boy, i'll put you on my lap and tell yah a story...😛 sure! 😄

Wow I can't believe you just said that Julian... 😂

Originally posted by flirtybaby
thxs 🙂

many days i cry
many time you make me cry
but every time i cry you die
love is hate and love is pain
you desotryed my sun
now i live in shadow
you make me bleed from inside
you poke me with needles to see if i would bleed
you cheeted like a math test
you hurt me with pleaze
killing me slowly
the one i love i hate
to my love that i hate....

i like it...that's really good.
Originally posted by Coldfire
Wow I can't believe you just said that Julian... 😂
i know...sometimes i can't believe myself 😛

Originally posted by flirtybaby
thxs 🙂

many days i cry
many time you make me cry
but every time i cry you die
love is hate and love is pain
you desotryed my sun
now i live in shadow
you make me bleed from inside
you poke me with needles to see if i would bleed
you cheeted like a math test
you hurt me with pleaze
killing me slowly
the one i love i hate
to my love that i hate....


Whoops forgot to comment... it's good 😊
Originally posted by Fëanor
i like it...that's really good. i know...sometimes i can't believe myself 😛

You are such a doofus 😛

thxs 🙂

Originally posted by flirtybaby
thxs 🙂

You're welcome 😊

hey can you give me some tips about how to wright pomes as good as you all i got from my friends and family it hafe to rime so can you give me some ??

Originally posted by flirtybaby
hey can you give me some tips about how to wright pomes as good as you all i got from my friends and family it hafe to rime so can you give me some ??

Well it doesn't have to rhyme, actually. It can be in any style that your heart desires. Basically, write from the heart. And it doesn't matter if other ppl don't like what you write. It matters if YOU like what you write... which may sound a bit odd because we're our own worst critics lol. My advice I guess would be to find your own style; try and be as original as you can, but not so original that it's just like "wtf is this weird stuff?!" kind of thing lol. If you're original ppl might take notice of your work quicker and with more interest. Ppl don't like to read about the same things over and over again. 🙂

thxs !! 🙂*smiles big*

You're welcome 😄 And if you need more help, you know where to find me 🙂

yes i know that for shere poetry spot

indeed hehe 😊